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Story is okay but there are grammatical errors an inconsistency with pronouns. Author needs to get the book edited.
started really slow so I skipped at the end chapters since it is already completed. Was disappointed to find it rushed. the antagonist characters are also made evil for no reason. considering this is contemporary romance their character should have more background and complexity. they should not be evil for no reason. The characters are just all weird.
Read this story for FP.. The author makes us doubt life 🤔 with constantly torturing the FL... Like she was always born to be hurt depressed and die🙃😞
Love the storyline, it's unique and compelling, the author is really tactical in her writing. I recommend this book to anyone who's looking for a taste of something new.💚
Such a wonderful storyline great characters and setting I actually love everything about the story and can't wait to read to the end, I recommend this
I like synopsis of this novel. the plot and general concept of the story is also intriguing. I'm just a few chapters in but I'm really hooked. keep up the good work author. I can't wait for more chapter uploads 😊
Really nice book. Twist and turns are on point and author has a great work of engagement. Truly appreciate and amazed. Looking for more!! Kudos to author nim.
the great read! this book very recommended to add to the library, I can't waiting for next chapter, keep going author[img=update][img=recommend]
The book is great. The book title is captivating and with the few chapters I read, I must say this book has a long way to go. Kudos Author!!
Such an intriguing synopsis and tags. I like the story so far and the world background and setting is a perfect fit for the story—alluring character description and writing style. Well done author
This story is really great and totally stood up to my taste, I can't wait for more, please keep going your story has great potential, kudos to the author ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Omg, I love this book. I pray nothing bad happens to Audrey and her baby. Or was she the chef that reincarnated? Looking forward to reading more chapters.....
nice and interesting plot. I would love to read more author. good luck and update more. [img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Really enjoying the book so far. Just started reading It cause the synopsis was just enough t catch my attention. A great job done. Keep it up champ🔥🔥🔥🔥
The story is really nice and the author is also a good person😍. I will be cheering for you and hope you don't give up writing. I hope this story will ends with a happy ending. 🤗🤗☺
There is no doubt about this author, every work always produces the best. I will continue to follow your story, author. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is really cool and amazing author. Nice job, the main character is strong. I like luna [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Only read to chapter 40 but I don’t like any of the characters enough to keep reading. Even the FL turns into a murderous crazy person. I can’t imagine what a good ending would be at this point.
Story is okay but there are grammatical errors an inconsistency with pronouns. Author needs to get the book edited.
started really slow so I skipped at the end chapters since it is already completed. Was disappointed to find it rushed. the antagonist characters are also made evil for no reason. considering this is contemporary romance their character should have more background and complexity. they should not be evil for no reason. The characters are just all weird.
Read this story for FP.. The author makes us doubt life 🤔 with constantly torturing the FL... Like she was always born to be hurt depressed and die🙃😞
Love the storyline, it's unique and compelling, the author is really tactical in her writing. I recommend this book to anyone who's looking for a taste of something new.💚
Such a wonderful storyline great characters and setting I actually love everything about the story and can't wait to read to the end, I recommend this
I like synopsis of this novel. the plot and general concept of the story is also intriguing. I'm just a few chapters in but I'm really hooked. keep up the good work author. I can't wait for more chapter uploads 😊
Really nice book. Twist and turns are on point and author has a great work of engagement. Truly appreciate and amazed. Looking for more!! Kudos to author nim.
the great read! this book very recommended to add to the library, I can't waiting for next chapter, keep going author[img=update][img=recommend]
The book is great. The book title is captivating and with the few chapters I read, I must say this book has a long way to go. Kudos Author!!
Such an intriguing synopsis and tags. I like the story so far and the world background and setting is a perfect fit for the story—alluring character description and writing style. Well done author
This story is really great and totally stood up to my taste, I can't wait for more, please keep going your story has great potential, kudos to the author ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Omg, I love this book. I pray nothing bad happens to Audrey and her baby. Or was she the chef that reincarnated? Looking forward to reading more chapters.....
nice and interesting plot. I would love to read more author. good luck and update more. [img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Really enjoying the book so far. Just started reading It cause the synopsis was just enough t catch my attention. A great job done. Keep it up champ🔥🔥🔥🔥
The story is really nice and the author is also a good person😍. I will be cheering for you and hope you don't give up writing. I hope this story will ends with a happy ending. 🤗🤗☺
There is no doubt about this author, every work always produces the best. I will continue to follow your story, author. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is really cool and amazing author. Nice job, the main character is strong. I like luna [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Only read to chapter 40 but I don’t like any of the characters enough to keep reading. Even the FL turns into a murderous crazy person. I can’t imagine what a good ending would be at this point.