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really like the story plus the characters, really great for your first story. good writing quality you get the praise its hard finding good originals so keep the updates going
Ok author you got me a free reader hooked up to you story. The story is going great its original coming from you author to my perspective and its great. Thanks flr the 1st 21 chapters .. Hoping for more. Hope you continue this novel because it has a great potential. Praying for your gopd mental health 😁 keep it up your story is great so far.
it is a nice novel keep it up author 😊 love the mc fighting attitude and loved the synopsis make him like you told it in synopsis.loved the story
This is my first time writing so please give me criticism. i will try to get myself up to 2 chapters a day at 1000 words more or less. Thank you if you are reading.
really like the story plus the characters, really great for your first story. good writing quality you get the praise its hard finding good originals so keep the updates going
Ok author you got me a free reader hooked up to you story. The story is going great its original coming from you author to my perspective and its great. Thanks flr the 1st 21 chapters .. Hoping for more. Hope you continue this novel because it has a great potential. Praying for your gopd mental health 😁 keep it up your story is great so far.
it is a nice novel keep it up author 😊 love the mc fighting attitude and loved the synopsis make him like you told it in synopsis.loved the story
This is my first time writing so please give me criticism. i will try to get myself up to 2 chapters a day at 1000 words more or less. Thank you if you are reading.
This was turning out to be a great story then no updates for over a month