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I was so entangled in the books of this author that I forgot to leave a review 🤧I'm not really going to say much,so if you want to know why I'm so untangled in her books then take a dive for yourself^_^
Reading this book was like taking a ride on a laughter-filled roller coaster. The characters were as quirky and memorable as my neighbor's polka-dotted pet flamingo. The plot had more twists and turns than a pretzel, keeping me on my toes and my laughing muscles engaged. Every chapter was a delightful mix of wit, drama, and unexpected surprises. All in all, if you're in search of a book that's a wild romp with humor and excitement, then this is your golden goose. Prepare for a laugh riot! Rating: 5/5 stars. Thoroughly amused and thoroughly satisfied!
This is an early review. From what I read so far your writing is really good. Although, the protagonist might not be everyone liking because how his personality is.I personally won't mind with the protagonist using a lot harsh words. I have a high hope for the development of the story. Might as well read this from time to time to see the growth of the protagonist. Overall you did a good job on creating this story.
Love the story! Very descriptive with a lot of visual imagery overall the descriptions and writings for each character are very plausible. The pacing is pretty steady allowing readers to understand the world background of the story which is a definite positive. Overall very enjoyable and I highly reccomend reading! Keep writing Author!
Ahahahaha. What's with that elton? Just started reading this and i need to know how the story will go. The author's writing is pretty unique, for me at least. Cursing machine huh? I wonder if that silver haired guy is a angel. This will become so very fun. I'll definitely read this. Don't disappoint me author😉
I like MC's character a lot! When he is annoyed, he curses; when he is in a life-death situation, he curses; when he is angry, he curses and just like the author said he is a literal cursing machine. I find it really funny. And the story also sparks the curiosity inside the reader, cuz I felt it myself! Overall it was such a great story!
It is a good story. The author's writing is good and very descriptive. The world he asks to embark on with him is a good one too. It is a slow-paced novel, that familiarises the readers with the surroundings of the story too well. Keep up the good work author.
Its an interesting read, although there're a few mistakes and i can see that the author might not be too used to tenses ('he knows that he can't fully trust someone else other than himself' should be- 'He knew that he couldn't fully trust anyone else other than himself'), And the MC is a bit too hot headed (you might want to make him a bit calmer to match with his genius assassin name). But apart from that its a very interesting read!
I'll just be blunt about this. Everything about it is fine for the most part but world background needs to be further expanded along with character design
This story has a super cool main character! It is intriguing with a great subtle flow. Keep up the good work author.
Captivating story author, I enjoyed reading this, hope you can continue it back up soon!
Pretty good so far! I feel like the pace of the story is one of its strongest attributes as it's great at keeping you locked in. I'm interested in reading more!! My only critique would be to be careful about tense shifts in a few spots. Other than that I think you're on a great path forward. Good job!!
Assassin's, brokers, wisps and the best part, magic. The story encompasses a lot of things in fantasy. The plot is straight forward and the grammar is great, very understandable. If I was to complain I would say the first few were a bit slow but it gets better real quick. As a story with a lot to say about the main character and the adventure they go through, it's an interesting read.
This one is absolutely solid. The author has done a great job foretelling the story in its early chapters, let alone the quality of the writing is pleasing. I doubt that anyone would dislike this, i'll visit this book to see more reviews every now and then, more people need to read this. I really enjoyed the first few chapters.
Shameless review by the author! Just republish this novel to be under WSA2022! Please read and enjoy! ^_^ Just a fair warning once again, the MC is a cussing machine so it might be that every time that he speaks, it would be vulgar since that is his character that I created xD
I was so entangled in the books of this author that I forgot to leave a review 🤧I'm not really going to say much,so if you want to know why I'm so untangled in her books then take a dive for yourself^_^
Reading this book was like taking a ride on a laughter-filled roller coaster. The characters were as quirky and memorable as my neighbor's polka-dotted pet flamingo. The plot had more twists and turns than a pretzel, keeping me on my toes and my laughing muscles engaged. Every chapter was a delightful mix of wit, drama, and unexpected surprises. All in all, if you're in search of a book that's a wild romp with humor and excitement, then this is your golden goose. Prepare for a laugh riot! Rating: 5/5 stars. Thoroughly amused and thoroughly satisfied!
This is an early review. From what I read so far your writing is really good. Although, the protagonist might not be everyone liking because how his personality is.I personally won't mind with the protagonist using a lot harsh words. I have a high hope for the development of the story. Might as well read this from time to time to see the growth of the protagonist. Overall you did a good job on creating this story.
Love the story! Very descriptive with a lot of visual imagery overall the descriptions and writings for each character are very plausible. The pacing is pretty steady allowing readers to understand the world background of the story which is a definite positive. Overall very enjoyable and I highly reccomend reading! Keep writing Author!
Ahahahaha. What's with that elton? Just started reading this and i need to know how the story will go. The author's writing is pretty unique, for me at least. Cursing machine huh? I wonder if that silver haired guy is a angel. This will become so very fun. I'll definitely read this. Don't disappoint me author😉
I like MC's character a lot! When he is annoyed, he curses; when he is in a life-death situation, he curses; when he is angry, he curses and just like the author said he is a literal cursing machine. I find it really funny. And the story also sparks the curiosity inside the reader, cuz I felt it myself! Overall it was such a great story!
It is a good story. The author's writing is good and very descriptive. The world he asks to embark on with him is a good one too. It is a slow-paced novel, that familiarises the readers with the surroundings of the story too well. Keep up the good work author.
Its an interesting read, although there're a few mistakes and i can see that the author might not be too used to tenses ('he knows that he can't fully trust someone else other than himself' should be- 'He knew that he couldn't fully trust anyone else other than himself'), And the MC is a bit too hot headed (you might want to make him a bit calmer to match with his genius assassin name). But apart from that its a very interesting read!
I'll just be blunt about this. Everything about it is fine for the most part but world background needs to be further expanded along with character design
This story has a super cool main character! It is intriguing with a great subtle flow. Keep up the good work author.
Captivating story author, I enjoyed reading this, hope you can continue it back up soon!
Pretty good so far! I feel like the pace of the story is one of its strongest attributes as it's great at keeping you locked in. I'm interested in reading more!! My only critique would be to be careful about tense shifts in a few spots. Other than that I think you're on a great path forward. Good job!!
Assassin's, brokers, wisps and the best part, magic. The story encompasses a lot of things in fantasy. The plot is straight forward and the grammar is great, very understandable. If I was to complain I would say the first few were a bit slow but it gets better real quick. As a story with a lot to say about the main character and the adventure they go through, it's an interesting read.
This one is absolutely solid. The author has done a great job foretelling the story in its early chapters, let alone the quality of the writing is pleasing. I doubt that anyone would dislike this, i'll visit this book to see more reviews every now and then, more people need to read this. I really enjoyed the first few chapters.
Shameless review by the author! Just republish this novel to be under WSA2022! Please read and enjoy! ^_^ Just a fair warning once again, the MC is a cussing machine so it might be that every time that he speaks, it would be vulgar since that is his character that I created xD