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*cough* This was definitely not written by the author *cough*. Anyway, the writing style is more similar to what you'd see in novels sold in bookstores rather than literary pieces that you see in a platform like this, some like it while some hate it. The mc is an original who I'd managed to pluck into a role that already existed in the original source material with changes to the nameless character (Remember, he is a character inserted into a nameless npc so he isn't one of those cliche characters who know how the story will play out since they didn't play the game before being reincarnated though he does have a vague understanding because of the fact that he came from an end of the world timeline which has already gone past the main storyline). I've tried to stay as true as possible to the source material though expect a few changes to the lore since it's pretty vague. This story is updated weekly so enjoy!
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Love Arknights and your novel is one of few good fanfics of it out there. The MC is original and the novel seems pretty lore accurate. You also update pretty consistently. Keep up the good work.
Really good premise, love the backstory. Author does a good job of making the lore for MC, and looking forward to future stories. All in all, this may be the best Arknights fanfic I've ever read.
Can't really say much cuz this story only has 2 chapters but this is really good so far. From what I can get from this so far is that the author is really good at setting an atmosphere that can get you to really feel how the characters mind set are in the given situations. This is a warning because there are ppl in this site that dont like this for whatever reason but this story is most likely a SI / OC, harem, power fantasy, and a tiny bit of time stuff. As a disclamer this doesn't mean that this is bad but that they will likely exist in this ff to a verring degree. There might be a problem for some people to get into this cuz this will likely take lore stuff from the game so you might want to have a passing familiarity with arknights to get the "full experience" whatever that means to you. Going back to what this story so far I feel does pretty good on is that there are little to no gramatical errors i can find but thats not saying much as im a casual reader that wouldn't care if it wasnt too bad. The the story is also trying to be lore accurate so if you get confused its problebly has to do with the scource material. Overall this is a pretty good story that has a lot of potential but might be hard to get into due to needing to at least have an idea about the game arknights to fully understand the intricit lore details but that isn't needed to have a fun time to enjoy what will problably be a really good story.
Cool novel, I hope everything goes well with Skadi!Cool novel, I hope everything goes well with Skadi!Cool novel, I hope everything goes well with Skadi!Cool novel, I hope everything goes well with Skadi!
*cough* This was definitely not written by the author *cough*. Anyway, the writing style is more similar to what you'd see in novels sold in bookstores rather than literary pieces that you see in a platform like this, some like it while some hate it. The mc is an original who I'd managed to pluck into a role that already existed in the original source material with changes to the nameless character (Remember, he is a character inserted into a nameless npc so he isn't one of those cliche characters who know how the story will play out since they didn't play the game before being reincarnated though he does have a vague understanding because of the fact that he came from an end of the world timeline which has already gone past the main storyline). I've tried to stay as true as possible to the source material though expect a few changes to the lore since it's pretty vague. This story is updated weekly so enjoy!
Me encanta la historia sigue así 👌🤣🤔👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Love Arknights and your novel is one of few good fanfics of it out there. The MC is original and the novel seems pretty lore accurate. You also update pretty consistently. Keep up the good work.
Really good premise, love the backstory. Author does a good job of making the lore for MC, and looking forward to future stories. All in all, this may be the best Arknights fanfic I've ever read.
Can't really say much cuz this story only has 2 chapters but this is really good so far. From what I can get from this so far is that the author is really good at setting an atmosphere that can get you to really feel how the characters mind set are in the given situations. This is a warning because there are ppl in this site that dont like this for whatever reason but this story is most likely a SI / OC, harem, power fantasy, and a tiny bit of time stuff. As a disclamer this doesn't mean that this is bad but that they will likely exist in this ff to a verring degree. There might be a problem for some people to get into this cuz this will likely take lore stuff from the game so you might want to have a passing familiarity with arknights to get the "full experience" whatever that means to you. Going back to what this story so far I feel does pretty good on is that there are little to no gramatical errors i can find but thats not saying much as im a casual reader that wouldn't care if it wasnt too bad. The the story is also trying to be lore accurate so if you get confused its problebly has to do with the scource material. Overall this is a pretty good story that has a lot of potential but might be hard to get into due to needing to at least have an idea about the game arknights to fully understand the intricit lore details but that isn't needed to have a fun time to enjoy what will problably be a really good story.
Cool novel, I hope everything goes well with Skadi!Cool novel, I hope everything goes well with Skadi!Cool novel, I hope everything goes well with Skadi!Cool novel, I hope everything goes well with Skadi!