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I hope you continue with the story sir author, although I did feel a little lost after the MC was teleported, the truth is I don't know when it was, but it still entertained me, Espero que continúe con la historia señor autor, aunque sí me sentí un poco perdido luego de que el MC fue teletransportado, la verdad no sé cuando fue, pero aun así me entretuvo, but I hope it continues, since I really like this type of story where the MC has no scruples about collecting women, and let's say that in Spanish there aren't many like that :v
very good...................................................................................................................................
Feliz con esta historia, por mantenerse en constante actualización, por un comienzo diferente y como progresa y va evolucionando , ojala siga y logremos ver esta historia terminar y no solo ser del montón que lo abandonan.
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Well i was reading this novel when it was just started and was very interested in the new chaotic world with many MC's and different plots but the chapters were not constant i just accidentally saw this novel one's again and continue where i left is before and saw that the story is processing very well with the element of more suprise and uncertainty looking forward for more chapters and love this plot keep working hard author ❣️❣️💯💯
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Can't stop reading it........................................................................... 😝😝😍😍 Made for men of culture..... Author more more more *moarrrr*
We all know why we are here😝😝 The novel delivers exactly what we are here for Hold your pants tight guys and enjoy the creamy show lol😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
I'm here for the perversion hehehe.......................................................................................................................
I love this story if you just make more chapters it will be more good but the mc is cool not so much OP so i like it all the best author 👍👍
Interesante, esperemos el siguiente desarrollo................................................................................................................
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the sypnosis is worth 5s in my opinion 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems.........................................
we came for something author don't drop ,.............................,......................,........,................................
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this will make you think with your lower head. ................... ................... you have been warned.😂 ....................... .......................
I want to see Hinata.... Bring more waifus. bring more ad***ry more pound**g more fire more heat.😋😋😋😋😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😋😋😋😋😋
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More Chapters Every Day Brother Heheheh Hopefully Not DROPPED In Novel Brother And Thanks For Novel Brother And Keep Spirit Brother Nice Novel GOD BLESS YOU BROTHER
Espero puedas actualizar pronto autor. Un año a pasado y no has actualizado autor. Espero ver la continuación pronto, me gusta mucho esta historia.
I hope you continue with the story sir author, although I did feel a little lost after the MC was teleported, the truth is I don't know when it was, but it still entertained me, Espero que continúe con la historia señor autor, aunque sí me sentí un poco perdido luego de que el MC fue teletransportado, la verdad no sé cuando fue, pero aun así me entretuvo, but I hope it continues, since I really like this type of story where the MC has no scruples about collecting women, and let's say that in Spanish there aren't many like that :v
very good...................................................................................................................................
Feliz con esta historia, por mantenerse en constante actualización, por un comienzo diferente y como progresa y va evolucionando , ojala siga y logremos ver esta historia terminar y no solo ser del montón que lo abandonan.
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Well i was reading this novel when it was just started and was very interested in the new chaotic world with many MC's and different plots but the chapters were not constant i just accidentally saw this novel one's again and continue where i left is before and saw that the story is processing very well with the element of more suprise and uncertainty looking forward for more chapters and love this plot keep working hard author ❣️❣️💯💯
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Can't stop reading it........................................................................... 😝😝😍😍 Made for men of culture..... Author more more more *moarrrr*
We all know why we are here😝😝 The novel delivers exactly what we are here for Hold your pants tight guys and enjoy the creamy show lol😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
I'm here for the perversion hehehe.......................................................................................................................
I love this story if you just make more chapters it will be more good but the mc is cool not so much OP so i like it all the best author 👍👍
Interesante, esperemos el siguiente desarrollo................................................................................................................
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the sypnosis is worth 5s in my opinion 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems.........................................
we came for something author don't drop ,.............................,......................,........,................................
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this will make you think with your lower head. ................... ................... you have been warned.😂 ....................... .......................
I want to see Hinata.... Bring more waifus. bring more ad***ry more pound**g more fire more heat.😋😋😋😋😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😋😋😋😋😋
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More Chapters Every Day Brother Heheheh Hopefully Not DROPPED In Novel Brother And Thanks For Novel Brother And Keep Spirit Brother Nice Novel GOD BLESS YOU BROTHER
Espero puedas actualizar pronto autor. Un año a pasado y no has actualizado autor. Espero ver la continuación pronto, me gusta mucho esta historia.