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寫檢討
It has always been a pleasure to read stories similar to the Korean ones that are popular now, especially I remember the novella "Nove's Extra", and since this story is similar, where the superfluous falls into another world, I immediately liked reading, I don't know about the rest of things, but as I develop, I will leave another assessment.
I liked the way he started the story, namely with the fact that he played the game, and then got to an unknown place, especially the end of the first chapter is quite intriguing, in general I think the plot will be interesting, as well as the development of the world.
The writing is really good, the style is in 1st person...the story is really interesting with unique characters with unique personality....i like hit,,,i recommend others reading it.
The story is pretty interesting, given that the story setting itself is a bit special, and it probably won't be like what other stories with extra characters present, but I wonder what will фhappen in the future.
The story started pretty well, since it's just the beginning, I can say that the beginning intrigued me, and the setting is not bad either. I don't know anything about the main character yet, but I hope that he will be able to survive in this world, given that he has no mana at all, where the world itself tells about the academy of magic.
This is actually a really interesting book, well detailed sorroundings and the end of the chapters put you in suspense. The story development is nice as well but it's still a little confusing... Anyways, we just started so...
The beginning is kinda boring, it feels like to much explaining went into how the game works and the details of it. The chase scene was wonderful, though it felt like you wrote that first then realized you needed another opening, and the over explanation of the controls came. Other than that its creative, it definitely does have potential
With you, the Author. This is me - ProseLetter - If you ever have a question, then please ask, unless it concerns spoilers, of course. - If you want to help me improve the story, then please leave review, I will be happy to read your ideas, and I will be glad hear any criticize about mistakes. - If there are any ratings such as just signs, or emojis, then I will immediately delete them.
It has always been a pleasure to read stories similar to the Korean ones that are popular now, especially I remember the novella "Nove's Extra", and since this story is similar, where the superfluous falls into another world, I immediately liked reading, I don't know about the rest of things, but as I develop, I will leave another assessment.
I liked the way he started the story, namely with the fact that he played the game, and then got to an unknown place, especially the end of the first chapter is quite intriguing, in general I think the plot will be interesting, as well as the development of the world.
The writing is really good, the style is in 1st person...the story is really interesting with unique characters with unique personality....i like hit,,,i recommend others reading it.
The story is pretty interesting, given that the story setting itself is a bit special, and it probably won't be like what other stories with extra characters present, but I wonder what will фhappen in the future.
The story started pretty well, since it's just the beginning, I can say that the beginning intrigued me, and the setting is not bad either. I don't know anything about the main character yet, but I hope that he will be able to survive in this world, given that he has no mana at all, where the world itself tells about the academy of magic.
This is actually a really interesting book, well detailed sorroundings and the end of the chapters put you in suspense. The story development is nice as well but it's still a little confusing... Anyways, we just started so...
The beginning is kinda boring, it feels like to much explaining went into how the game works and the details of it. The chase scene was wonderful, though it felt like you wrote that first then realized you needed another opening, and the over explanation of the controls came. Other than that its creative, it definitely does have potential
With you, the Author. This is me - ProseLetter - If you ever have a question, then please ask, unless it concerns spoilers, of course. - If you want to help me improve the story, then please leave review, I will be happy to read your ideas, and I will be glad hear any criticize about mistakes. - If there are any ratings such as just signs, or emojis, then I will immediately delete them.