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(Ch29) Surprisingly good. The story is great with a really good backstory, characters that feel like actual characters and the story looks like it’s going in a good direction. also no romance yet which is a plus. But the mc’s personality seems a bit off sometimes. Like he will seem like a good person who is cool to be around and then in the next chapter he’s brutally killing people. I don’t think it really match’s his personality.
it wouldve been good if it werent for the oc. adding the ant queen and transmigrating her also to mha ,.....,.............
This story was good until you introduced a superpowered oc. Even worse that oc is the one who killed his mom in his past life and by the way the story is progressing it seems you will make them make up somehow. He should just kill her, nothing else just kill her
揭示劇透
Basically a hidden gem, the story is interesting and captivating. The characters are well developed and the pacing of the story is not too slow or too fast with the grammar also being a golden bonus. Only thing I hope is that the update happens soon and more people get to read this hidden gem.
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Another person who wastes their potential. Another person who acts with their emotions, a brain disabled person......................................
cool story great backstory keep it up bro it's great looking forward to the battles..................................................................
Written at chapter 25. This is one of the best ff at their well written and interesting story. The main character is well written, his so far story is great. This story has two problems which are bad spacing between events and short chapters but other that I would recommend this to every to give a try.
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Story is quite good i liked it mc seems a bit naive for a reincarnator but thats fine doomsday can make as many misakes as he wants infinite revival but do not dig the supegirl character (hope she is also not a reincarnator)
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Honestly couldn’t get over the unnecessarily weird start you gave and feel like it’s going to play a part later in the story which I don’t like. Also frankly his entry into the world was unnecessarily grim and I feel like that’s you setting the tone for the story which is macabre. To reiterate I am not the kind of reader who can appreciate that. Otherwise interesting premise.
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You can skip first 3 chapters. They don't add anything to the story later. The story, at least for me, became unenjoyable when comedy started to overtake the story. As in making plot less relevant than comedy. I am writing this after reading Chapter 14. It might change, it might not, but I will still not read any further.
the story is good writing quality is good. it's a little slow for my taste but everything else is good except for the fact that it's not doomsday and doesn't sound like MHA
You need to try this book out, I only watched like the first season of mha but it is still a very interesting story, 10/10 would recomend, so far.
Really good story. Great back story without it taking too long and great use of his powers. Hope to see more soon!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
scratches that itch for a story of monster trying to be human, reincarnation, and doomsday c6tc6t yfycfy g7tv6cgyc7ct7yvvuyihv8vt7ct7cg7c
6th to 10th chapter was bit hard to get through, but then I feel like story is getting better. Author decrease the monologing, instead use other people's pov.
Top tier fic it is very unique and ungeneric I’m really in joying the direction the fic is going so far I highly recommend giving this fic a chance if you haven’t already
This needs more readers shockingly good story so far 15 chapters in. Definitely looking forward to more of the story to come. ....................................
the story has potential, the character design is not bad, updating stability is good since dude updates like everyday, world background well it's good, it's mha all i can say is keep up the good content and keep updating cuz this book's good, read the book, readers, go on stop wasting your time reading this review and read it now
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The grammar is amazing, the story is extremely interesting and even with popular demand of people probably going to want a evil or emotionless MC, this does not do that. This is definitely one of the best novels I have read and I recommend it to anyone. Keep up the good work author and do not drop please.
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(Ch29) Surprisingly good. The story is great with a really good backstory, characters that feel like actual characters and the story looks like it’s going in a good direction. also no romance yet which is a plus. But the mc’s personality seems a bit off sometimes. Like he will seem like a good person who is cool to be around and then in the next chapter he’s brutally killing people. I don’t think it really match’s his personality.
it wouldve been good if it werent for the oc. adding the ant queen and transmigrating her also to mha ,.....,.............
This story was good until you introduced a superpowered oc. Even worse that oc is the one who killed his mom in his past life and by the way the story is progressing it seems you will make them make up somehow. He should just kill her, nothing else just kill her
揭示劇透 Basically a hidden gem, the story is interesting and captivating. The characters are well developed and the pacing of the story is not too slow or too fast with the grammar also being a golden bonus. Only thing I hope is that the update happens soon and more people get to read this hidden gem.
[img=empfehlen] _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++(++++((++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++((((+((((+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Another person who wastes their potential. Another person who acts with their emotions, a brain disabled person......................................
cool story great backstory keep it up bro it's great looking forward to the battles..................................................................
Written at chapter 25. This is one of the best ff at their well written and interesting story. The main character is well written, his so far story is great. This story has two problems which are bad spacing between events and short chapters but other that I would recommend this to every to give a try.
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Story is quite good i liked it mc seems a bit naive for a reincarnator but thats fine doomsday can make as many misakes as he wants infinite revival but do not dig the supegirl character (hope she is also not a reincarnator)
Worth the read ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,
Honestly couldn’t get over the unnecessarily weird start you gave and feel like it’s going to play a part later in the story which I don’t like. Also frankly his entry into the world was unnecessarily grim and I feel like that’s you setting the tone for the story which is macabre. To reiterate I am not the kind of reader who can appreciate that. Otherwise interesting premise.
*************************************** *************************************** *************************************** Интересно. Думсдей в Героике🤔 Круто👍 *************************************** ***************************************
You can skip first 3 chapters. They don't add anything to the story later. The story, at least for me, became unenjoyable when comedy started to overtake the story. As in making plot less relevant than comedy. I am writing this after reading Chapter 14. It might change, it might not, but I will still not read any further.
the story is good writing quality is good. it's a little slow for my taste but everything else is good except for the fact that it's not doomsday and doesn't sound like MHA
You need to try this book out, I only watched like the first season of mha but it is still a very interesting story, 10/10 would recomend, so far.
Really good story. Great back story without it taking too long and great use of his powers. Hope to see more soon!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
scratches that itch for a story of monster trying to be human, reincarnation, and doomsday c6tc6t yfycfy g7tv6cgyc7ct7yvvuyihv8vt7ct7cg7c
6th to 10th chapter was bit hard to get through, but then I feel like story is getting better. Author decrease the monologing, instead use other people's pov.
Top tier fic it is very unique and ungeneric I’m really in joying the direction the fic is going so far I highly recommend giving this fic a chance if you haven’t already
This needs more readers shockingly good story so far 15 chapters in. Definitely looking forward to more of the story to come. ....................................
the story has potential, the character design is not bad, updating stability is good since dude updates like everyday, world background well it's good, it's mha all i can say is keep up the good content and keep updating cuz this book's good, read the book, readers, go on stop wasting your time reading this review and read it now
100000000/10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
The grammar is amazing, the story is extremely interesting and even with popular demand of people probably going to want a evil or emotionless MC, this does not do that. This is definitely one of the best novels I have read and I recommend it to anyone. Keep up the good work author and do not drop please.
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great strory but in the start author went