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The description of the scenario is very amazing. It gives you butterflies in stomach. Moreover, the writing style is in first person narration which makes you more curious about the other character's thoughts. It also creates an ocean of emotions in the reader.
The description of the scenario is very amazing. It gives you butterflies in stomach. Moreover, the writing style is in first person narration which makes you more curious about the other character's thoughts. It also creates an ocean of emotions in the reader.