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this look like a complete novel. it's a shame that it's not in English, wish to read but oh well
publique esto en mtl o el sitio web de scribble no se puede leer debido a la actualización de webnovel
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Mejora con el tiempo, aunque las palabras en chino son un toca pelotas continuo, se pueden soportar aveces, solo editaria eso de " destino" por schitsal.
pecima traducción al ingles, conoletamente ilegible llegando a un ponto mas aya del capitulo 10. En cuanto a la historia en general es pasable, digo tipico fanfiction de toda la vida solo que aveses da risa como el protagonista va por hay asiendose el valiente y badas, en especial cuando matan a los que los querian secuestrar sin tener previa experiencia con armas y aun peor siendo niños, demaciado ireal y estupido si me lo preguntas.
Is there also an English version? . . . ..... ... . ... ..... .. . .. .. .... . . .. ... . ... . .. ... . .. .. .. .. .... . . .... . .
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this look like a complete novel. it's a shame that it's not in English, wish to read but oh well
publique esto en mtl o el sitio web de scribble no se puede leer debido a la actualización de webnovel
English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English English
English please English please English please English please English please English please English please English please English please English please English please English please English please English please English please English please English please English please
Keep up the good work author Keep updating author like it [img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update]
Mejora con el tiempo, aunque las palabras en chino son un toca pelotas continuo, se pueden soportar aveces, solo editaria eso de " destino" por schitsal.
pecima traducción al ingles, conoletamente ilegible llegando a un ponto mas aya del capitulo 10. En cuanto a la historia en general es pasable, digo tipico fanfiction de toda la vida solo que aveses da risa como el protagonista va por hay asiendose el valiente y badas, en especial cuando matan a los que los querian secuestrar sin tener previa experiencia con armas y aun peor siendo niños, demaciado ireal y estupido si me lo preguntas.
Is there also an English version? . . . ..... ... . ... ..... .. . .. .. .... . . .. ... . ... . .. ... . .. .. .. .. .... . . .... . .
............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... si lees esto eres puto:v
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I hope there is an English version and the grammar is adjusted better...............'(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮 '(屮゚Д゚)屮