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This book is amazing! The mc is amazing! The author is amazing! The humor in this book kills me each time. And the use of emojis makes it even funnier! Plus, I love the relationship between mc and kimber! The way kimber promises his life and godhood on mc, while the mc plans the kill limbers no hood son n granddaughter for his sake is so cute😭 I love it all!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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great book, death after death after death also gender equality everyone will be r\p3 so unique just read at your own risk full of random, I don't even know what is happening, the author is on crack when writing this don't expect on the mc having any pride, he litteraly licked someone else shoe just so he can act in the court so fresh, the author broke out from the norm 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
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it's great! I'm also so happy that they changed the requirements to post a review!
I don't know how to write a review, just wanted to leave this here to support the author Tho the grammar could be improved
I like how the system and the main characters get along. It’s just the beginning of the story
If I was to summarize my opinions of this novel on one word, it would be trash. The author must have gone to a lot of trouble to fake all these five star reviews, the authors ability is truly amazing,
I'm too tired to write 💀 Yes, no romance, no harem and great pace this author upload 3 chap a week so a pretty good upload stability (I have gave it 5 star in everything 💀 Not that much problem in grammar as it's hardly noticeable So give us power stone (yes, I'm trying to slide with you as I'm you co worker 💀)
Synopsis 💯 The storyline is interesting. The reason why your book didn't get a 5.0 from me was due to some obvious grammatical errors. You use the words "as" and "so" very often in descriptions and in connecting your noun with your verbs. It's a style repeated in countless books but overtime it kills the beauty of your writing. Story development seems smooth but the system hasn't really been introduced. Your MC has a life which is unique compared to other books where they just give us the MC's sob story then jump to the good parts about how his life changed and whatnot. World background seems realistic. I don't have any buts about it but reading extensively will help you to execute the perfect world that's in your mind. It's obvious that you have amazing ideas but describing them in a way that won't confuse us is an issue. Overall, it was worth reading.
Really loved the world development there are errors here and there but it is not a big deal overall an amazing story Living in the city has taught me to appreciate the differences between people.
Anyone who gives this 5 star is a liar. The grammar is horrible, and the characters are idiots. Nobody acts their age, especially the MC. He’s supposedly millions of years old, yet he acts like an idiot. Not to mention, he’s a borderline retard. He lived for that long, but doesn’t have any skills. He cant even do basic high school math. Not to mention the hypocrisy of the MC. He complains about villains in story books acting arrogant, yet he acts the exact same way? Anyways, like I said, whoever gives this 5 stars is either a liar, or has never read a hood novel in their life.
I wasn't into the System novel but man I must say this one piqued the best of my curiosity, you went savage while writing it haha, keep writing man I'll be reading it.
I like this kind of novel more than anything. The mc only think about his goal and nothing else. Unlike other novel it has some back story to the character. If you are looking for novels with evil mc i recommend reading this novel at all cost
Already find it interesting under two chapters and the fact the MC have to go back and g through the #weaktostrong trend makes it a whole new adventure for me to read on. Again, a nice read for one to give a try.
The author is keeping on my edge of the seat and how creative thinking the author have, but characters like Ajax are really annoying to me 😳 don't kill me please
If systems and cold mcs are your cup of tea then try this one out Although the system hasn't shown its functions for now, it,s a thing to look forward.
Interesting premises. I like the concept and although it still is a little early to give a review, why not help? writing quality: Good. I mean there are errors here and there and some of the sentence structure are weird as if translated raw if that make sense. All in all good, readable but could still be better so only 3.8 stars for that but lets round it at 4 ⭐ Story development: Like I said, I like the lore and now is still too early to judge but still 4⭐ for potential. character development: Too early to comment on but I feel there's something lacking. Maybe it's the sentinent system for me, don't like (my Opinion only) 3⭐ Updating: Your biggest issue in this novel. You are not consistent on upload time. You have too little chapters, like no offense but if I wasn't kinda bored rn and the fact you asked to check it out, I'll barely if not don't read a 3 chapters book. wanted to give a 2 but 3 ⭐ is good too background: Nice no complaints, its just 3 chapters was not expecting much so 4⭐ Overall: Its a good story but is lacking chapters and imo sentinent system is not my cup of tea but I love the idea and effort behind. Hope this helps and keep it up, make sure you release more chaps and you'll definitely get a contract
I love it. I am looking forward to Ajax development and i love the duo of Ajax and the AE. Their small bickering about Ding was quite funny..what happened to that little girl
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Great read, fun and engaging!!! The story, characters it’s so serious yet not really? Idk it’s fun! 100% recommend! What are you waiting for? Go read it!!
but how many people do you do for a while and how 🤔 man who has better suit than you
This book is amazing! The mc is amazing! The author is amazing! The humor in this book kills me each time. And the use of emojis makes it even funnier! Plus, I love the relationship between mc and kimber! The way kimber promises his life and godhood on mc, while the mc plans the kill limbers no hood son n granddaughter for his sake is so cute😭 I love it all!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
揭示劇透 great book, death after death after death also gender equality everyone will be r\p3 so unique just read at your own risk full of random, I don't even know what is happening, the author is on crack when writing this don't expect on the mc having any pride, he litteraly licked someone else shoe just so he can act in the court so fresh, the author broke out from the norm 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
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揭示劇透 it's great! I'm also so happy that they changed the requirements to post a review!
I don't know how to write a review, just wanted to leave this here to support the author Tho the grammar could be improved
I like how the system and the main characters get along. It’s just the beginning of the story
If I was to summarize my opinions of this novel on one word, it would be trash. The author must have gone to a lot of trouble to fake all these five star reviews, the authors ability is truly amazing,
I'm too tired to write 💀 Yes, no romance, no harem and great pace this author upload 3 chap a week so a pretty good upload stability (I have gave it 5 star in everything 💀 Not that much problem in grammar as it's hardly noticeable So give us power stone (yes, I'm trying to slide with you as I'm you co worker 💀)
Synopsis 💯 The storyline is interesting. The reason why your book didn't get a 5.0 from me was due to some obvious grammatical errors. You use the words "as" and "so" very often in descriptions and in connecting your noun with your verbs. It's a style repeated in countless books but overtime it kills the beauty of your writing. Story development seems smooth but the system hasn't really been introduced. Your MC has a life which is unique compared to other books where they just give us the MC's sob story then jump to the good parts about how his life changed and whatnot. World background seems realistic. I don't have any buts about it but reading extensively will help you to execute the perfect world that's in your mind. It's obvious that you have amazing ideas but describing them in a way that won't confuse us is an issue. Overall, it was worth reading.
Really loved the world development there are errors here and there but it is not a big deal overall an amazing story Living in the city has taught me to appreciate the differences between people.
Anyone who gives this 5 star is a liar. The grammar is horrible, and the characters are idiots. Nobody acts their age, especially the MC. He’s supposedly millions of years old, yet he acts like an idiot. Not to mention, he’s a borderline retard. He lived for that long, but doesn’t have any skills. He cant even do basic high school math. Not to mention the hypocrisy of the MC. He complains about villains in story books acting arrogant, yet he acts the exact same way? Anyways, like I said, whoever gives this 5 stars is either a liar, or has never read a hood novel in their life.
I wasn't into the System novel but man I must say this one piqued the best of my curiosity, you went savage while writing it haha, keep writing man I'll be reading it.
I like this kind of novel more than anything. The mc only think about his goal and nothing else. Unlike other novel it has some back story to the character. If you are looking for novels with evil mc i recommend reading this novel at all cost
Already find it interesting under two chapters and the fact the MC have to go back and g through the #weaktostrong trend makes it a whole new adventure for me to read on. Again, a nice read for one to give a try.
The author is keeping on my edge of the seat and how creative thinking the author have, but characters like Ajax are really annoying to me 😳 don't kill me please
If systems and cold mcs are your cup of tea then try this one out Although the system hasn't shown its functions for now, it,s a thing to look forward.
Interesting premises. I like the concept and although it still is a little early to give a review, why not help? writing quality: Good. I mean there are errors here and there and some of the sentence structure are weird as if translated raw if that make sense. All in all good, readable but could still be better so only 3.8 stars for that but lets round it at 4 ⭐ Story development: Like I said, I like the lore and now is still too early to judge but still 4⭐ for potential. character development: Too early to comment on but I feel there's something lacking. Maybe it's the sentinent system for me, don't like (my Opinion only) 3⭐ Updating: Your biggest issue in this novel. You are not consistent on upload time. You have too little chapters, like no offense but if I wasn't kinda bored rn and the fact you asked to check it out, I'll barely if not don't read a 3 chapters book. wanted to give a 2 but 3 ⭐ is good too background: Nice no complaints, its just 3 chapters was not expecting much so 4⭐ Overall: Its a good story but is lacking chapters and imo sentinent system is not my cup of tea but I love the idea and effort behind. Hope this helps and keep it up, make sure you release more chaps and you'll definitely get a contract
I love it. I am looking forward to Ajax development and i love the duo of Ajax and the AE. Their small bickering about Ding was quite funny..what happened to that little girl
揭示劇透 Great read, fun and engaging!!! The story, characters it’s so serious yet not really? Idk it’s fun! 100% recommend! What are you waiting for? Go read it!!
but how many people do you do for a while and how 🤔 man who has better suit than you