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I’m still waiting for more chapters. I really hope you pick this up again 🙏🏼🥺
Gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito
Had to make an honest review on this, and I gotta say that this is pretty good. Quality, Quantity since and from the time this got uploaded and really good. Characters feel a little undeveloped at times due to them not being a focus in the story but that is perfectly fine for how it's intended to go. Although fir anyone who likes sticking to the original plot line of the story, this is definitely not for them. Otherwise this is many times better than most Demon Slayer stories out there. Good Job my guy.
I really your demon slayer fanfic. I’m looking forward to the next chapters. What I like most is that it doesn’t have much to do with the canon and is simply in the demon slayer world. I don’t write reviews very often but I’m now because this has peaked my interest. 👍🏾💪🏾
The mc is incredibly stupid impulsive and acts like a child even tho he was a man before reincarnation I think the people of this world have a collective 5 brain cells every demon can create more demons apparently which is confusing cuz why isn't everyone a demon the mc a the worst part it's just incredibly hard to read what he's doing and not think he was born with a brain defect beside the stupid characters everything else is good but this isn't really a fanfic to be honest it's different compared to the original
Writing quality is great tbh, some of the best on Webnovel imo. The characters are written extremely well, the emotions they have are realistic and the way they react to things is realistic
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its very good but its only been 22 ch so cant really give a detailed review so i will just go over what i liked about it its au and has demon slayer characters and so you could read it without having to worry much about being spoiled about what happens to the characters and stuff the mc is not perfect and has room to grow the grammer is good and it does not feel awkward to read
of it was supposed to be a novel it was a good one but i don't see it working as a fanfiction the story is entirely different from the original only the main concepts are from DS otherwise nothing is similar. and i am dropping it now cause i know for his lost have either he will turn himself into a demon or either he will use one handed swordsmanship. or author can introduce a new concept that will somehow help mc get his have back. mc has no knowledge of demon Slayer and that makes it pretty boring him being reincarnated and still not knowing about DS is disappointing and dumb. bye bye
A very good story so far I can't say the direction it will take but the author is really creative in many moments surprised me, this novel has a lot of potential, For now all I can do is wait and see which way it goes.
Overall It's a pretty good 'Demon Slayer' Fanfic, it has all the right elements to sucessed and become one of the best in this 'genre'. However it all depends on the author now to continue to continue to upload good quality chapters in the future (in my opinion I dont mind waiting a few more days for the quality of the chapters to continue and/or improve). If I had to make a suggestion, it was that the author should make a few Grammar corrections, a bit more world backround and add an extra chapter with the names, caractheristics and pictures of the most prominent caracthers so far Hope u can continue ur good work
As to how far i've read i'm giving it 4.5 stars. But because I like demon slayer so much I'll give ya 5 stars. Good story development in 9 chapters. Keep up the good work Author.
The fight scenes are splendid. I can vividly animate the fight scenes in my head due to the writer's great writing quality. This story has a lot of potential in terms of lore, characters and world building.
Dude you should upload more I really enjoyed this man and want to keep reading more it’d be a total waste to keep this at five chapters. 😀
hoping for an update, good book bet seems like the author lost motivation 😕
I’m still waiting for more chapters. I really hope you pick this up again 🙏🏼🥺
Gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito gostei muito
Had to make an honest review on this, and I gotta say that this is pretty good. Quality, Quantity since and from the time this got uploaded and really good. Characters feel a little undeveloped at times due to them not being a focus in the story but that is perfectly fine for how it's intended to go. Although fir anyone who likes sticking to the original plot line of the story, this is definitely not for them. Otherwise this is many times better than most Demon Slayer stories out there. Good Job my guy.
I really your demon slayer fanfic. I’m looking forward to the next chapters. What I like most is that it doesn’t have much to do with the canon and is simply in the demon slayer world. I don’t write reviews very often but I’m now because this has peaked my interest. 👍🏾💪🏾
The mc is incredibly stupid impulsive and acts like a child even tho he was a man before reincarnation I think the people of this world have a collective 5 brain cells every demon can create more demons apparently which is confusing cuz why isn't everyone a demon the mc a the worst part it's just incredibly hard to read what he's doing and not think he was born with a brain defect beside the stupid characters everything else is good but this isn't really a fanfic to be honest it's different compared to the original
Writing quality is great tbh, some of the best on Webnovel imo. The characters are written extremely well, the emotions they have are realistic and the way they react to things is realistic
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its very good but its only been 22 ch so cant really give a detailed review so i will just go over what i liked about it its au and has demon slayer characters and so you could read it without having to worry much about being spoiled about what happens to the characters and stuff the mc is not perfect and has room to grow the grammer is good and it does not feel awkward to read
of it was supposed to be a novel it was a good one but i don't see it working as a fanfiction the story is entirely different from the original only the main concepts are from DS otherwise nothing is similar. and i am dropping it now cause i know for his lost have either he will turn himself into a demon or either he will use one handed swordsmanship. or author can introduce a new concept that will somehow help mc get his have back. mc has no knowledge of demon Slayer and that makes it pretty boring him being reincarnated and still not knowing about DS is disappointing and dumb. bye bye
A very good story so far I can't say the direction it will take but the author is really creative in many moments surprised me, this novel has a lot of potential, For now all I can do is wait and see which way it goes.
Overall It's a pretty good 'Demon Slayer' Fanfic, it has all the right elements to sucessed and become one of the best in this 'genre'. However it all depends on the author now to continue to continue to upload good quality chapters in the future (in my opinion I dont mind waiting a few more days for the quality of the chapters to continue and/or improve). If I had to make a suggestion, it was that the author should make a few Grammar corrections, a bit more world backround and add an extra chapter with the names, caractheristics and pictures of the most prominent caracthers so far Hope u can continue ur good work
As to how far i've read i'm giving it 4.5 stars. But because I like demon slayer so much I'll give ya 5 stars. Good story development in 9 chapters. Keep up the good work Author.
The fight scenes are splendid. I can vividly animate the fight scenes in my head due to the writer's great writing quality. This story has a lot of potential in terms of lore, characters and world building.
Dude you should upload more I really enjoyed this man and want to keep reading more it’d be a total waste to keep this at five chapters. 😀
hoping for an update, good book bet seems like the author lost motivation 😕