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This novel is honestly addicting. It’s about a guy that reincarnates into an alternate world. He’s replacing the prodigal prince who is currently married to the queen due to a promise, that cliche. Honestly, not something to criticize as long as he doesn’t simp, which,thankfully, he isn’t. His rich family died off due to illness so his only backing is himself. For those of you people who can’t stand a bit of nationalism, for some reason, this novel should be fine. Furthermore, the translation is good. Look at the other novel the translator is doing and you should know that they keep the quality good. The mc gets a system that rewards the mc for completing quests with new technology. There aren’t penalties, but if he wants more technology, he has to work. I like this novel because the mc knows what he should sell, and what he shouldn’t. The mc isn’t braindead like most of the mc’s right now in the fanfic section, so it’s already doing well. I would recomend reading. I wouldn’t rate it as five stars as I began to realize I should reserve those for the very best novels. However, this novel is really good.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
I apologize in advance, this review was translated using Google, my English is at a relatively intermediate level. As a person who has encountered and still encounters politics, since I live in the center of heated debates (Russia), at first I liked the political debates in this story, but over time the quality of the writing became worse and worse. I put up with the Chinese idioms for a long time, which are annoying (this is my personal taste), but the understanding that the political powers in the fanfic - all essentially behave like Chinese villains in manhwa brought me to the top.
Nooooooooooo i want read more🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲 O kurwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaàaaaaa
Just your everyday Chinese nationalistic MC. I consider myself a veteran of reading CN novels and I thought I'd be immune to this kinda stuff by now. Turns out, that's a big no. Still, bearable for the first few chapters, then turned into a teenage CN Wumao's wet dream. Read till chapter 30 at least, you'll know whether or not to continue reading by then.
Author paywalls content for a dollar on his patreon, and doesn’t tell us that until your 400 chapters in. It’s okay to make money from translating but don’t tell us 400 CHAPTERS IN.
Sigh, this is a typical Chinese fanfic with a cliche plot right off the beginning. I lost interest on the first few chapters. Maybe it got better further down the line but for me it just didn't cut it.
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I feel like im losing braincells reading this. The author is not a native english speaker. The sentence construction is obviously in a different language, directly translated to english as if machine translated. A lot of the grammar is all over the place.
typical Chinese novel the MC is an ordinary salaryman then he dies and takes the body of the useless and bankrupt young master, then he receives a system he gets up he starts slapping arrogant young masters, he makes enemies he kills them and makes more enemies... In short, the plot of 80% of Chinese novels
Em geral gostei muito, mas quando chegou na parte da guerra achei muito desgastante para mim, massacra um país por uma palavra torta, me pareceu um jovem mestres efim foi uma boa jornada Li até o Cap 390
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In principle, this is tolerable until the moment when aliens appeared, here I could not stand how much I burned my nerve cells, I don’t know. I recommend reading at your leisure, before aliens, then at your own peril and risk. The writing style is Chinese, I have been reading fanfiction / novels for 8 years, etc. that I recognize their handwriting everywhere, because they plagiarize not only ideas. ^_^
Super solid series that keeps you reading if you like world building. It kept me entertained all throughout the story. Not sure if I really have any complaints. It definitely exceeded my expectations.
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I am currently at chapter 407 and yet it seems like you aren't intending to ginish this story anytime soon. I mean the guy became an omnipotent God but yet you made him go to the main universe to become the master of that universe while being completely powerless and poor. So can you just skim through it very fast. Don't get me wrong I love this novel but it has been over 9 months since you started this story and I am not seeing an ending in sight.
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Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I read a chinese novel with the same plot but diffrent names for mc and others but the same tech ...ect , idk who copied frol each other but its a matter of fact that the story is good so its recommanded
Yeah, I like all of this, I sometimes even forget that this is just a book written by the author, the scenes(Scene cuz I have a wild imagination) are so impactful and this is so addicting as mentioned above the other reviews, heck I read this for hours without stopping and heck cuz of my wild imagination I tend to get bored immediately but i didn't in this booked and i am so immersed by it and also am a humss student which our textbook said that if the reader are immersed and they can expressed their will to the letters, which mean that the book is successful which is I did, i read for over 367 chapter without interruption and without skipping so all i have to say is KEEP PUBLISHING CHAPTERS UNTIL HE CONQUERS THE UNIVERSE OR EVEN OMNIVERSE, HAVE KIDS AND WIVES, FRIENDS.... PLEASE DONT EVER DROP THIS BOOK AND TO ALL PEOPLE THAT THINK THIS BOOK IS MEDIOCRE BECAUSE OF THE COVER, (WHICH AM ALSO AWARE CUZ, ALSO DIDN'T READ THIS IMMEDIATELY AND READ OTHER FANFIC) GIVE THIS BOOK A CHANCE ESPECIALLY THE PEOPLE FROM PHILIPPINES Well that 300+ words of encouragement
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friend is very good the only thing is that I expect more from the literal romance he has them as an ornament and he is also a genius but he has not created anything himself everything is from the system
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This is the most amazing novel I have ever read in my life, better than LOTM and all those other web novels. you should 1000% read this book and definitely rate it a 5/5. this is not a sarcasm.
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Don't drop this it good novel ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________
Of course, it's five stars for me. Also, let me tell you something cool. If you're tired of stories that get stopped midway, stories that have slow updates, or other issues(except for the quality of the translation, lol), then you don't have to worry about it here. First and foremost, in terms of updates, I can provide 3-5 chapters every day. If you leave 1 stone for me, then there will be more chapters for sure. Second, I will not end the story suddenly without telling you why. If I stop, either something bad has happened to me, or there are no more chapters to update. In terms of translation quality, I am not a professional translator. Although things will improve, progress will be sluggish. Only if someone is willing to edit the story will the quality increase. (But this will be hard since there is no free meal in this world. I don't have money to pay for the editor, so it's better not to expect too much.)
This novel is honestly addicting. It’s about a guy that reincarnates into an alternate world. He’s replacing the prodigal prince who is currently married to the queen due to a promise, that cliche. Honestly, not something to criticize as long as he doesn’t simp, which,thankfully, he isn’t. His rich family died off due to illness so his only backing is himself. For those of you people who can’t stand a bit of nationalism, for some reason, this novel should be fine. Furthermore, the translation is good. Look at the other novel the translator is doing and you should know that they keep the quality good. The mc gets a system that rewards the mc for completing quests with new technology. There aren’t penalties, but if he wants more technology, he has to work. I like this novel because the mc knows what he should sell, and what he shouldn’t. The mc isn’t braindead like most of the mc’s right now in the fanfic section, so it’s already doing well. I would recomend reading. I wouldn’t rate it as five stars as I began to realize I should reserve those for the very best novels. However, this novel is really good.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
I apologize in advance, this review was translated using Google, my English is at a relatively intermediate level. As a person who has encountered and still encounters politics, since I live in the center of heated debates (Russia), at first I liked the political debates in this story, but over time the quality of the writing became worse and worse. I put up with the Chinese idioms for a long time, which are annoying (this is my personal taste), but the understanding that the political powers in the fanfic - all essentially behave like Chinese villains in manhwa brought me to the top.
Nooooooooooo i want read more🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲 O kurwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaàaaaaa
Just your everyday Chinese nationalistic MC. I consider myself a veteran of reading CN novels and I thought I'd be immune to this kinda stuff by now. Turns out, that's a big no. Still, bearable for the first few chapters, then turned into a teenage CN Wumao's wet dream. Read till chapter 30 at least, you'll know whether or not to continue reading by then.
Author paywalls content for a dollar on his patreon, and doesn’t tell us that until your 400 chapters in. It’s okay to make money from translating but don’t tell us 400 CHAPTERS IN.
Sigh, this is a typical Chinese fanfic with a cliche plot right off the beginning. I lost interest on the first few chapters. Maybe it got better further down the line but for me it just didn't cut it.
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I feel like im losing braincells reading this. The author is not a native english speaker. The sentence construction is obviously in a different language, directly translated to english as if machine translated. A lot of the grammar is all over the place.
typical Chinese novel the MC is an ordinary salaryman then he dies and takes the body of the useless and bankrupt young master, then he receives a system he gets up he starts slapping arrogant young masters, he makes enemies he kills them and makes more enemies... In short, the plot of 80% of Chinese novels
Em geral gostei muito, mas quando chegou na parte da guerra achei muito desgastante para mim, massacra um país por uma palavra torta, me pareceu um jovem mestres efim foi uma boa jornada Li até o Cap 390
揭示劇透 In principle, this is tolerable until the moment when aliens appeared, here I could not stand how much I burned my nerve cells, I don’t know. I recommend reading at your leisure, before aliens, then at your own peril and risk. The writing style is Chinese, I have been reading fanfiction / novels for 8 years, etc. that I recognize their handwriting everywhere, because they plagiarize not only ideas. ^_^
Super solid series that keeps you reading if you like world building. It kept me entertained all throughout the story. Not sure if I really have any complaints. It definitely exceeded my expectations.
PLS MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I am currently at chapter 407 and yet it seems like you aren't intending to ginish this story anytime soon. I mean the guy became an omnipotent God but yet you made him go to the main universe to become the master of that universe while being completely powerless and poor. So can you just skim through it very fast. Don't get me wrong I love this novel but it has been over 9 months since you started this story and I am not seeing an ending in sight.
揭示劇透 Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I read a chinese novel with the same plot but diffrent names for mc and others but the same tech ...ect , idk who copied frol each other but its a matter of fact that the story is good so its recommanded
Yeah, I like all of this, I sometimes even forget that this is just a book written by the author, the scenes(Scene cuz I have a wild imagination) are so impactful and this is so addicting as mentioned above the other reviews, heck I read this for hours without stopping and heck cuz of my wild imagination I tend to get bored immediately but i didn't in this booked and i am so immersed by it and also am a humss student which our textbook said that if the reader are immersed and they can expressed their will to the letters, which mean that the book is successful which is I did, i read for over 367 chapter without interruption and without skipping so all i have to say is KEEP PUBLISHING CHAPTERS UNTIL HE CONQUERS THE UNIVERSE OR EVEN OMNIVERSE, HAVE KIDS AND WIVES, FRIENDS.... PLEASE DONT EVER DROP THIS BOOK AND TO ALL PEOPLE THAT THINK THIS BOOK IS MEDIOCRE BECAUSE OF THE COVER, (WHICH AM ALSO AWARE CUZ, ALSO DIDN'T READ THIS IMMEDIATELY AND READ OTHER FANFIC) GIVE THIS BOOK A CHANCE ESPECIALLY THE PEOPLE FROM PHILIPPINES Well that 300+ words of encouragement
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friend is very good the only thing is that I expect more from the literal romance he has them as an ornament and he is also a genius but he has not created anything himself everything is from the system
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This is the most amazing novel I have ever read in my life, better than LOTM and all those other web novels. you should 1000% read this book and definitely rate it a 5/5. this is not a sarcasm.
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Don't drop this it good novel ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________
Of course, it's five stars for me. Also, let me tell you something cool. If you're tired of stories that get stopped midway, stories that have slow updates, or other issues(except for the quality of the translation, lol), then you don't have to worry about it here. First and foremost, in terms of updates, I can provide 3-5 chapters every day. If you leave 1 stone for me, then there will be more chapters for sure. Second, I will not end the story suddenly without telling you why. If I stop, either something bad has happened to me, or there are no more chapters to update. In terms of translation quality, I am not a professional translator. Although things will improve, progress will be sluggish. Only if someone is willing to edit the story will the quality increase. (But this will be hard since there is no free meal in this world. I don't have money to pay for the editor, so it's better not to expect too much.)