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The story is quite captivating and had a good start to capture readers. Been reading several chapters and so far, I think the plot is good and I’m actually keen to find out what happens in reality while the protagonist is immersed in the game. I liked that you didn’t start with the usual (someone died and just entered the game, etc) but took some time to establish the characters and setting. Think this would be a refreshing read for people who enjoy this genre!
A very nice book with agile start up. The beginning got me to read down the interesting drain. The author, at first, was very realistic in narration, that's what I love most.
A well structured storyline. It never failed to intrigue me of what's happening next. The concept too was very eye catching. I await to see more chapters!
5 chapters in! Time for a review! This story's got quite an interesting start and it helped making the readers anticipate what could be coming next Instead of starting of with world introduction or setting introduction, you got to the action right away which is clever! I also like how you slowly introduce the characters and stuff after that It's quite refreshing for this genre! Still, the story could use some more researchs on Japanese cultures and naming, so that it sounds more convincing, now that the cast still feel a bit Western and could confuse some readers. btw keep up the good work, author! You're doing great! 🥺👍💖
Good book with an amazing start and well built world. Although I've only read a few chapters, I see how much work was put into the book. The author did a great job writing an amazing book like this.
Great book, great writing and superb character development. This novel is captivating and gripping, I usually don't read this kind of book, but this one is attention-grabbing, with excellent Idea and plot.
One word; "PURE ACTION" Your synopsis says much even though its short and simple...creative!!! From the starting of the book its already getting deep, am loving it❤
I have always wanted to read a book with game and real life. My dream came true. The plot perfectly describes the grip of the game on a player's life in the book. I'm going to go read the next chapters.
First and foremost, the first few chapters were enough to captivate the reader to read on. The chapters were all interesting, making the reader wonder what will happen next. The storyline is good while the character's are set up perfectly as well! Grammar's quite flawless too so keep up the good work Author ^.^! [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
The only thing I have against this book is the daily updates. Waiting for updates is so unpleasant. Regardless, I love the book, the name of the book is enough to capture one's attention. Still it's a great piece of work.
From the synopsis..it makes you wonder about what’s going to happen..i read the first few chapters and it was worth it.this is a good book. i highly recommend it[img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is fantastic. Excellent writing quality, a beautiful plot that is very captivating, well-thought-out character design, and excellent grammar. Overall, I highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys this genre. excellent work, author.
Hey Readers! Thank you for checking out my work. Though it is a story which could be tagged as an "Action/Isekai", it has a bunch of complex themes which would be both fun to explore and be a part of. I look forward to having an exciting adventure with you all and I hope you enjoy it with me. Have fun! 🎉
The first chapter is really good you could feel MC's fear and stress. I don't know but synopsis kinda remembered me a little "Squid Game" ( synopsis was short but good) Overall it seems a story with a nice plot and i think it will turn out a good one. Good job author 🙂
The opening chapter was so well written that you can't help but continue reading. I have read quite a couple of V.R. stories here on wn, so I'll look forward to seeing how the author will add his own taste and make the story stand out. All the very best, dear author💙
This is well thought out, and the sentence is also well structured. It piques my interest as I continue to read. I am asking myself a lot of questions. I love it and I will continue reading. Highly recommend this.
I'm a huge fan of these kinds of books but even if I wasn't, I would've read it because the author knows the way to catch the reader's attention. The book is written so beautifully that I can picture it in my head. The suspense and the curiosity had me biting my nails every sentence. It's definitely worth a read.
I have to applaud the authors capability of capturing every detail in the scenery so flawlessly. It is so well written that I can't help but picture the events in my minds eye. The plot twist at the end of chapter 1 is unexpected if you didn't read the blurb, but I love it. This genre isn't usually at the top of my favourites list, but this book sure is.
The story is quite captivating and had a good start to capture readers. Been reading several chapters and so far, I think the plot is good and I’m actually keen to find out what happens in reality while the protagonist is immersed in the game. I liked that you didn’t start with the usual (someone died and just entered the game, etc) but took some time to establish the characters and setting. Think this would be a refreshing read for people who enjoy this genre!
A very nice book with agile start up. The beginning got me to read down the interesting drain. The author, at first, was very realistic in narration, that's what I love most.
A well structured storyline. It never failed to intrigue me of what's happening next. The concept too was very eye catching. I await to see more chapters!
5 chapters in! Time for a review! This story's got quite an interesting start and it helped making the readers anticipate what could be coming next Instead of starting of with world introduction or setting introduction, you got to the action right away which is clever! I also like how you slowly introduce the characters and stuff after that It's quite refreshing for this genre! Still, the story could use some more researchs on Japanese cultures and naming, so that it sounds more convincing, now that the cast still feel a bit Western and could confuse some readers. btw keep up the good work, author! You're doing great! 🥺👍💖
Good book with an amazing start and well built world. Although I've only read a few chapters, I see how much work was put into the book. The author did a great job writing an amazing book like this.
Great book, great writing and superb character development. This novel is captivating and gripping, I usually don't read this kind of book, but this one is attention-grabbing, with excellent Idea and plot.
One word; "PURE ACTION" Your synopsis says much even though its short and simple...creative!!! From the starting of the book its already getting deep, am loving it❤
I have always wanted to read a book with game and real life. My dream came true. The plot perfectly describes the grip of the game on a player's life in the book. I'm going to go read the next chapters.
First and foremost, the first few chapters were enough to captivate the reader to read on. The chapters were all interesting, making the reader wonder what will happen next. The storyline is good while the character's are set up perfectly as well! Grammar's quite flawless too so keep up the good work Author ^.^! [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
The only thing I have against this book is the daily updates. Waiting for updates is so unpleasant. Regardless, I love the book, the name of the book is enough to capture one's attention. Still it's a great piece of work.
From the synopsis..it makes you wonder about what’s going to happen..i read the first few chapters and it was worth it.this is a good book. i highly recommend it[img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is fantastic. Excellent writing quality, a beautiful plot that is very captivating, well-thought-out character design, and excellent grammar. Overall, I highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys this genre. excellent work, author.
Hey Readers! Thank you for checking out my work. Though it is a story which could be tagged as an "Action/Isekai", it has a bunch of complex themes which would be both fun to explore and be a part of. I look forward to having an exciting adventure with you all and I hope you enjoy it with me. Have fun! 🎉
The first chapter is really good you could feel MC's fear and stress. I don't know but synopsis kinda remembered me a little "Squid Game" ( synopsis was short but good) Overall it seems a story with a nice plot and i think it will turn out a good one. Good job author 🙂
The opening chapter was so well written that you can't help but continue reading. I have read quite a couple of V.R. stories here on wn, so I'll look forward to seeing how the author will add his own taste and make the story stand out. All the very best, dear author💙
This is well thought out, and the sentence is also well structured. It piques my interest as I continue to read. I am asking myself a lot of questions. I love it and I will continue reading. Highly recommend this.
I'm a huge fan of these kinds of books but even if I wasn't, I would've read it because the author knows the way to catch the reader's attention. The book is written so beautifully that I can picture it in my head. The suspense and the curiosity had me biting my nails every sentence. It's definitely worth a read.
I have to applaud the authors capability of capturing every detail in the scenery so flawlessly. It is so well written that I can't help but picture the events in my minds eye. The plot twist at the end of chapter 1 is unexpected if you didn't read the blurb, but I love it. This genre isn't usually at the top of my favourites list, but this book sure is.