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The slice of life parts are decent. The power system made sense until she defeats something that (by stats) is about 10x stronger than her. In a physical fight. So that’s when I learned stats mean whatever the author wants them to mean at that time. Which holds true up to where I’m at. There’s also an ability that people like her could choose that is really dubious about consent since if it succeeds, the target basically gets mind controlled into having sex, yet there’s a god who is all about consent. The way it was made to not be completely non consensual is that the difficulty is based off of how willing the target would be to sleep with them. But like, someone might be theoretically be willing, but not want to. Tbh, I’m not that surprised about the worldbuilding being like this. Most mediocre authors just write what sounds cool or interesting or plot relevant and don’t care about continuity or relative realism.
Honestly, as soon as I started reading it, I thought this would become one of my favorite WNs and that it would be Top Tier. I still think that, unfortunately I can't swallow the Fut@ thingy. I was considering whether to just skip the parts I don't like, but I just decided to drop it. Really unfortunate. Still if you enjoy this stuff or if you can ignore it, then it's a must read.
That FuT@ thing came out of nowhere, no prior warning was given, there's no tag. I hope this review will help those who have FuT@ fetish to dive in, and those who don't have to stay away from this. I felt clickbaited; if I have found some warning I won't have wasted my time,,,, ( If the FUT@(A) word written, the review became soft banned)
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This book had me sold. Even the excessive mothering and sweet-loving trope I found enjoyable, despite knowing it might be a guide for the MCs actions in the future. I trusted the author to handle it well and make a good story! But then came chapter 20 and the futa drop (i did not read the synopsis deeply enough). I know some people like this, and if they do, then good for them they have a solid novel to keep exploring. But futa in the end is controversial and such a massive drop at chapter 20 only serves to damage viewership. Such a reveal should have been in chapter 1 or 2. Idk if the novel could have made it big with futa called out immediately, but I would bet that the way it was revealed cut off the books success since it almost felt like I was led on. Again, I know the author called it out, but it was fairly buried in the synopsis (aka after the actual novel description, which is where most stop). I will look out for future books the author writes and wish them Goodluck, this novel isn't for me. Im so sad and wish it was😭
there are quite a lot of things I didn't like about this novel. first is mc gender there was little to no explanation. Why did she choose that gender for her over her past gender. Second is I would say secret regarding mc mother background in early chapters. the author about 100 chapters before reading her background like there were hints drop about, but that conversation never reached that point because mc think that this is not important to mc so like mc simply doesn't care about their background and this doesn't make any sense like she is your mother so you should have at least some curiosity towards it and it was really weird. third is mc is hell bent on not using their family name it doesn't make any sense. Whatever reason, mc had regarding not using the family name. Well, let's just say some really stupid reasons like mc saying she was going to use her own power, but what is stopping her from using her strength with her family power. she refused to use her family name in guilds and in academy and the reason she gave was she wants to stay hidden she doesn't want to be in the spotlight but even not using her family she got popular on her own strength. next thing is regarding her future plans. her plans are very vague. and I don't like it . in her future plans, she say will going to leave her home and her mother for adventure. is it necessary to leave her home for adventure for the rest of her life? Can't she just go on adventures from her home and then come back. and she also said she doesn't have any interest in inheriting her family and again why she can't she just inherited her family and also went on adventures. there was really no explanation behind her decisions. what will happen to her mother does her leave with her or if she will stay at home? I need an explanation or valid reason behind her thinking and behind her decisions that she will take in the future
揭示劇透
So far I have loved all the books from this author. He gives a very good ballans of all the thing I like in books.
I just love this novel. I love the characters and how in depth they go. The world building is great and the writing style is enjoyable. I also can't complain about the smut. The mc being Dragongirl Futa is also a nice bonus in my opinion. My only complaint is that her tail isn't used enough ❤ (I like tails) And to much use offf... Oh a cookie!
Absolutely 5 star also one of the best Fandoms ever the fans are awesome love all the ppl here. You are all awesome as hell keep up the most excellent work
One of my favorite novels, and always looking forward to each update. Characters are great and enjoy how the relationships are done. Humor is also great. MC is overpowered but it’s not to an absurd degree to where she can fight a god or something immediately, there are still people/beings/monsters that are much stronger than her. I enjoy when a foundation is built from training and getting rewarded for overcoming challenges. Thanks a bunch for the story and it’s consistent updates Draekai.
Most Chinese novels always transition the mc between he/she, but the author here took it to another level 😂. Still the book was enjoyable to read till it changed to a chick flick. Everything ticks off in this book- lemons - check action - check op mc - check Still not my cup of tea since the mc is more of a girl than a male, meaning his/her actions and thoughts. There are other amazing books which perfectly checks off everything plus a dominant, ruthless and decisive mc.
I was shocked by the introduction of the novel, haha, a giant truck that shocked the whole world, haha .I haven't read it so I'll give it 3 stars
Just saying this a great read. Aster (FMC) has a great and sweet personality. The character development is good as well. The story doesn't get boring. The side characters are good and have good character development. This novel/book is The reason why I haven't committed suicide yet.
Ignoring the blatant attempt to hook readers with the first 20 chaps before the gender reveal, the novel in itself is quite bad. Problem is, MC starts off by fighting and challenging and growing stronger day by day, only to be turned into a weak damsel who tries to hide their strength for meaningless reasons, and acts like a foolish brat. Like, all the good developments were exchanged for the sake of comedy around sweets. Characters are bad and unilateral, without any depth or complexity to them, especially MC. Always the most useless in most situations, never trying their best at anything, never improving past a point while others breeze past them. Stats slowly become meaningless, with MC never showing what they're capable off to others. At points, it seems like hiding their name and power and acting foolish become the main trope of the novel, without any actual seriousness from MC's side. A complete joke of a novel, with a complete joke of a character, who doesn't show any growth whatsoever. Honestly, even if you can get past the first 20 chaps, there's a lot of other things that quickly make you drop it.
I knew the gender because of the character sheet, but the fact that the author doesn't reveal it til ch 20 is just bad and shameless, nothing really happens for like 20 chapters as well and it's incredibly boring, and when she got shadow powers and the author starts referencing solo leveling repeatedly, i cant help but roll my eyes, chose the lamest power possible for a fantasy world, not to mention she chooses a reincarnation option to where she gets her powers little by little... why? it states so she does not get overwhelmed, but what I'm hearing is, o just cuz the story wouldn't work when I get them all, it's just so incredibly lame, good first 3 chapters and then has the quickest fall off of all time
I’m on chapter 337. I love this story but it definitely has its annoying points that’s becoming more and more intolerable as I read. Her inability to do critical thinking, no sense of danger, both of these it seems she sometimes lacks just to for plot. Her obliviousness that seems on the level of a harem protagonist but not just about the women in her life but about everything. The reason I wrote this review is because on chapter 336, someone was obviously calling her beautiful, but she seems oblivious till the end where even a toddler would realize there talking about her. Another time is at her birthday, people was staring at her because of her beauty, but she wrote it off as some stupid reason I forgot. I love this story but these small things that keep showing up ruin the experience. She needs a character arc quick where she grows up and starts to realize that you can have fun in life without thinking that she is immortal and can’t die. She needs to experience helplessness and a reality check.
Cara, o começo da história é muito boa, excelente escrita, mas não é para mim. O MC é um homem no seu mundo original, mas do nada, ele escolheu ser um Fut@ em outro mundo. Simples não entendi o porquê. Para mim, seria a história de um jovem escritor que superou as dificuldades de sua vida anterior, onde ele irá ser um desbravador em um novo mundo de alta magia, onde irá ser um hétero em uma nova raça humanoide de qualidades físicas de gostos humanos, e de características sobre humanas. Muito parecidos com um elfo, só que 1000 vezes melhor. Mas não foi isso que aconteceu. O autor escolheu fazer com que o MC fosse um FUT@. Eu fico pensando se o autor queria ser um FUT@, pois esse não é o primeiro livro que ele faz isso. Quem gosta desse tipo de história, vai gostar. Mas quem não gosta, não leia, pois você vai odiar, igual a eu. Pois não gosto desse tipo.
揭示劇透
Love the book, this space really lacks great Yuri and Futa books so I’m glad this exists. Only gripe is I wish we had more chapters and the pacing is a little slow and leans more into slice of life. P.s someone bring Aster some more sweets!
One of the best 19 starting chapters I've read in a reincarnation Novel... and then there was chapter 20, well for all the fut@ lovers out there enjoy ig. I'm out thou
One of my favorite book, it alway deliver each chapter, it as the power to make me laugh, but also, able to make me very emotional. Indeed! Dreakai was able to make me sad because someone say no to a cookie!!! A cookie!!! Anyway, I strongly recommend it
I am really enjoying this novel keep up the awesome work I'm really engrossed in it and waiting for the next chapter
Should of read the reviews didnt know there was fut@ until chapter 20 should of added tags for it.
Sometimes you just get the feeling of "Fine, I'll do it myself" and that's what happened here. I know it may not be everyone's cup of tea, but I'd like to think I've come quite far since I first started my journey in writing. I won't say this is the culmination of everything I've learned, but it most definitely is one of the stories I've sunk the most effort into working on so far. Hope you guys enjoy your stay!
The slice of life parts are decent. The power system made sense until she defeats something that (by stats) is about 10x stronger than her. In a physical fight. So that’s when I learned stats mean whatever the author wants them to mean at that time. Which holds true up to where I’m at. There’s also an ability that people like her could choose that is really dubious about consent since if it succeeds, the target basically gets mind controlled into having sex, yet there’s a god who is all about consent. The way it was made to not be completely non consensual is that the difficulty is based off of how willing the target would be to sleep with them. But like, someone might be theoretically be willing, but not want to. Tbh, I’m not that surprised about the worldbuilding being like this. Most mediocre authors just write what sounds cool or interesting or plot relevant and don’t care about continuity or relative realism.
Honestly, as soon as I started reading it, I thought this would become one of my favorite WNs and that it would be Top Tier. I still think that, unfortunately I can't swallow the Fut@ thingy. I was considering whether to just skip the parts I don't like, but I just decided to drop it. Really unfortunate. Still if you enjoy this stuff or if you can ignore it, then it's a must read.
That FuT@ thing came out of nowhere, no prior warning was given, there's no tag. I hope this review will help those who have FuT@ fetish to dive in, and those who don't have to stay away from this. I felt clickbaited; if I have found some warning I won't have wasted my time,,,, ( If the FUT@(A) word written, the review became soft banned)
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This book had me sold. Even the excessive mothering and sweet-loving trope I found enjoyable, despite knowing it might be a guide for the MCs actions in the future. I trusted the author to handle it well and make a good story! But then came chapter 20 and the futa drop (i did not read the synopsis deeply enough). I know some people like this, and if they do, then good for them they have a solid novel to keep exploring. But futa in the end is controversial and such a massive drop at chapter 20 only serves to damage viewership. Such a reveal should have been in chapter 1 or 2. Idk if the novel could have made it big with futa called out immediately, but I would bet that the way it was revealed cut off the books success since it almost felt like I was led on. Again, I know the author called it out, but it was fairly buried in the synopsis (aka after the actual novel description, which is where most stop). I will look out for future books the author writes and wish them Goodluck, this novel isn't for me. Im so sad and wish it was😭
there are quite a lot of things I didn't like about this novel. first is mc gender there was little to no explanation. Why did she choose that gender for her over her past gender. Second is I would say secret regarding mc mother background in early chapters. the author about 100 chapters before reading her background like there were hints drop about, but that conversation never reached that point because mc think that this is not important to mc so like mc simply doesn't care about their background and this doesn't make any sense like she is your mother so you should have at least some curiosity towards it and it was really weird. third is mc is hell bent on not using their family name it doesn't make any sense. Whatever reason, mc had regarding not using the family name. Well, let's just say some really stupid reasons like mc saying she was going to use her own power, but what is stopping her from using her strength with her family power. she refused to use her family name in guilds and in academy and the reason she gave was she wants to stay hidden she doesn't want to be in the spotlight but even not using her family she got popular on her own strength. next thing is regarding her future plans. her plans are very vague. and I don't like it . in her future plans, she say will going to leave her home and her mother for adventure. is it necessary to leave her home for adventure for the rest of her life? Can't she just go on adventures from her home and then come back. and she also said she doesn't have any interest in inheriting her family and again why she can't she just inherited her family and also went on adventures. there was really no explanation behind her decisions. what will happen to her mother does her leave with her or if she will stay at home? I need an explanation or valid reason behind her thinking and behind her decisions that she will take in the future
揭示劇透 So far I have loved all the books from this author. He gives a very good ballans of all the thing I like in books.
I just love this novel. I love the characters and how in depth they go. The world building is great and the writing style is enjoyable. I also can't complain about the smut. The mc being Dragongirl Futa is also a nice bonus in my opinion. My only complaint is that her tail isn't used enough ❤ (I like tails) And to much use offf... Oh a cookie!
Absolutely 5 star also one of the best Fandoms ever the fans are awesome love all the ppl here. You are all awesome as hell keep up the most excellent work
One of my favorite novels, and always looking forward to each update. Characters are great and enjoy how the relationships are done. Humor is also great. MC is overpowered but it’s not to an absurd degree to where she can fight a god or something immediately, there are still people/beings/monsters that are much stronger than her. I enjoy when a foundation is built from training and getting rewarded for overcoming challenges. Thanks a bunch for the story and it’s consistent updates Draekai.
Most Chinese novels always transition the mc between he/she, but the author here took it to another level 😂. Still the book was enjoyable to read till it changed to a chick flick. Everything ticks off in this book- lemons - check action - check op mc - check Still not my cup of tea since the mc is more of a girl than a male, meaning his/her actions and thoughts. There are other amazing books which perfectly checks off everything plus a dominant, ruthless and decisive mc.
I was shocked by the introduction of the novel, haha, a giant truck that shocked the whole world, haha .I haven't read it so I'll give it 3 stars
Just saying this a great read. Aster (FMC) has a great and sweet personality. The character development is good as well. The story doesn't get boring. The side characters are good and have good character development. This novel/book is The reason why I haven't committed suicide yet.
Ignoring the blatant attempt to hook readers with the first 20 chaps before the gender reveal, the novel in itself is quite bad. Problem is, MC starts off by fighting and challenging and growing stronger day by day, only to be turned into a weak damsel who tries to hide their strength for meaningless reasons, and acts like a foolish brat. Like, all the good developments were exchanged for the sake of comedy around sweets. Characters are bad and unilateral, without any depth or complexity to them, especially MC. Always the most useless in most situations, never trying their best at anything, never improving past a point while others breeze past them. Stats slowly become meaningless, with MC never showing what they're capable off to others. At points, it seems like hiding their name and power and acting foolish become the main trope of the novel, without any actual seriousness from MC's side. A complete joke of a novel, with a complete joke of a character, who doesn't show any growth whatsoever. Honestly, even if you can get past the first 20 chaps, there's a lot of other things that quickly make you drop it.
I knew the gender because of the character sheet, but the fact that the author doesn't reveal it til ch 20 is just bad and shameless, nothing really happens for like 20 chapters as well and it's incredibly boring, and when she got shadow powers and the author starts referencing solo leveling repeatedly, i cant help but roll my eyes, chose the lamest power possible for a fantasy world, not to mention she chooses a reincarnation option to where she gets her powers little by little... why? it states so she does not get overwhelmed, but what I'm hearing is, o just cuz the story wouldn't work when I get them all, it's just so incredibly lame, good first 3 chapters and then has the quickest fall off of all time
I’m on chapter 337. I love this story but it definitely has its annoying points that’s becoming more and more intolerable as I read. Her inability to do critical thinking, no sense of danger, both of these it seems she sometimes lacks just to for plot. Her obliviousness that seems on the level of a harem protagonist but not just about the women in her life but about everything. The reason I wrote this review is because on chapter 336, someone was obviously calling her beautiful, but she seems oblivious till the end where even a toddler would realize there talking about her. Another time is at her birthday, people was staring at her because of her beauty, but she wrote it off as some stupid reason I forgot. I love this story but these small things that keep showing up ruin the experience. She needs a character arc quick where she grows up and starts to realize that you can have fun in life without thinking that she is immortal and can’t die. She needs to experience helplessness and a reality check.
Cara, o começo da história é muito boa, excelente escrita, mas não é para mim. O MC é um homem no seu mundo original, mas do nada, ele escolheu ser um Fut@ em outro mundo. Simples não entendi o porquê. Para mim, seria a história de um jovem escritor que superou as dificuldades de sua vida anterior, onde ele irá ser um desbravador em um novo mundo de alta magia, onde irá ser um hétero em uma nova raça humanoide de qualidades físicas de gostos humanos, e de características sobre humanas. Muito parecidos com um elfo, só que 1000 vezes melhor. Mas não foi isso que aconteceu. O autor escolheu fazer com que o MC fosse um FUT@. Eu fico pensando se o autor queria ser um FUT@, pois esse não é o primeiro livro que ele faz isso. Quem gosta desse tipo de história, vai gostar. Mas quem não gosta, não leia, pois você vai odiar, igual a eu. Pois não gosto desse tipo.
揭示劇透 Love the book, this space really lacks great Yuri and Futa books so I’m glad this exists. Only gripe is I wish we had more chapters and the pacing is a little slow and leans more into slice of life. P.s someone bring Aster some more sweets!
One of the best 19 starting chapters I've read in a reincarnation Novel... and then there was chapter 20, well for all the fut@ lovers out there enjoy ig. I'm out thou
One of my favorite book, it alway deliver each chapter, it as the power to make me laugh, but also, able to make me very emotional. Indeed! Dreakai was able to make me sad because someone say no to a cookie!!! A cookie!!! Anyway, I strongly recommend it
I am really enjoying this novel keep up the awesome work I'm really engrossed in it and waiting for the next chapter
Should of read the reviews didnt know there was fut@ until chapter 20 should of added tags for it.
Sometimes you just get the feeling of "Fine, I'll do it myself" and that's what happened here. I know it may not be everyone's cup of tea, but I'd like to think I've come quite far since I first started my journey in writing. I won't say this is the culmination of everything I've learned, but it most definitely is one of the stories I've sunk the most effort into working on so far. Hope you guys enjoy your stay!