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I read several stories about ms symbiotes and I liked this one the most, looking forward to more chapters!! (Writing through google translator)
man I love this story,but can anyone recommend some fanfiction where MC is symbiot .
Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.
hi authors I really like the concept of scattering his soul across the multiverse but i sincerely hope that iI will not see all the soul peaces( main characters of the the different stories) battling among themselves to see who is going to be the main conscience at the end please 🥺 🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲
J'ai adoré cette fanfiction, sûrement une des meilleures que j'ai lues🤩. J'attends et j'espère la suite avec impatience. Bon travail a vous, vous avez une inspiration qui me convient bien.😉
Could you add the non-human tag please. I dont like this one bit but since i did not read it i will rate it from that. I just dont understand why a human would give up havIng a human body to gaing a body that requires a host to thrive.
It is very good, the bad thing would be is that it says it is from another reality. Even so I kept reading and forgetting that, if you forget the beginning everything is good. This trilogy if you can say, is interesting Like the soul lad that is good.
I really liked marvel: Sudoper venom, I hope this can be better than it. I do love the concept of symbiotes but I have never seen a good fanfics with them.
I so wanted to read it, but then you had to go and add that he tells him that he is from another reality/dimension. Rule number one of doing SI's, the SI never tells he or she who they were in their last life and never tells that it's from another dimension, you just don't do that. Story not for me, Good day.
Isn't there a Chinese novel called Marvel: Super Venom. is it rewrited or copied or your novel. 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
I always wanted a fanfiction like this I always wanted a fanfiction like this I always wanted a fanfiction like this I always wanted a fanfiction like this please don't drop 🙏
This story has a great idea going. The whole wishes thing and multiple yet same protagonists. And since its in the original marvel, it seems more interesting than most. But I do have some problem with It. 1st. The pace. yeah it's true it didn't happen instantly, but Natasha got too interested too fast. I mean she is a spy for goodness sake. She should have been skeptical for at least 30 chapters in my opinion. 2nd. I dont know if you just don't care, but when you are writing a story, you don't just change stuff out of nowhere. Once something is published, you stick with it. Even if it's trash. okay I guess i can understand that driving yourself further down a black hole is bad, but at least cover your tracks. Rewrite of as if the chapter you want changed. Then put a note to the original readers that there was change. This way, the new readers will have a smooth experience.
I read several stories about ms symbiotes and I liked this one the most, looking forward to more chapters!! (Writing through google translator)
man I love this story,but can anyone recommend some fanfiction where MC is symbiot .
Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.
hi authors I really like the concept of scattering his soul across the multiverse but i sincerely hope that iI will not see all the soul peaces( main characters of the the different stories) battling among themselves to see who is going to be the main conscience at the end please 🥺 🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲
J'ai adoré cette fanfiction, sûrement une des meilleures que j'ai lues🤩. J'attends et j'espère la suite avec impatience. Bon travail a vous, vous avez une inspiration qui me convient bien.😉
Could you add the non-human tag please. I dont like this one bit but since i did not read it i will rate it from that. I just dont understand why a human would give up havIng a human body to gaing a body that requires a host to thrive.
It is very good, the bad thing would be is that it says it is from another reality. Even so I kept reading and forgetting that, if you forget the beginning everything is good. This trilogy if you can say, is interesting Like the soul lad that is good.
I really liked marvel: Sudoper venom, I hope this can be better than it. I do love the concept of symbiotes but I have never seen a good fanfics with them.
I so wanted to read it, but then you had to go and add that he tells him that he is from another reality/dimension. Rule number one of doing SI's, the SI never tells he or she who they were in their last life and never tells that it's from another dimension, you just don't do that. Story not for me, Good day.
Isn't there a Chinese novel called Marvel: Super Venom. is it rewrited or copied or your novel. 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
I always wanted a fanfiction like this I always wanted a fanfiction like this I always wanted a fanfiction like this I always wanted a fanfiction like this please don't drop 🙏
This story has a great idea going. The whole wishes thing and multiple yet same protagonists. And since its in the original marvel, it seems more interesting than most. But I do have some problem with It. 1st. The pace. yeah it's true it didn't happen instantly, but Natasha got too interested too fast. I mean she is a spy for goodness sake. She should have been skeptical for at least 30 chapters in my opinion. 2nd. I dont know if you just don't care, but when you are writing a story, you don't just change stuff out of nowhere. Once something is published, you stick with it. Even if it's trash. okay I guess i can understand that driving yourself further down a black hole is bad, but at least cover your tracks. Rewrite of as if the chapter you want changed. Then put a note to the original readers that there was change. This way, the new readers will have a smooth experience.