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To the Author, all in all very good novel- but just a small suggestion take it or leave it- *Hope to MC creates his own invention/Cultivation Technique - with the combination of Magic, Runes(if there are but with the combination of coding types) and Pure Martial Arts(only physical like body practitioner from WUXIA/XIANXIA- making the body stronger than excaliber sword or any weapon i hope with the process of making him nigh-immortal with instant super regeneration) his technique-(Get hard as it get higher in levels) including to which he also creates science and tech(like scientist+engineer+smithery+researcher) Reader.with Magical and internal energy combine with his own arts(Get hard as it get higher in levels)- Teach it's people anywhere about it and preserve the nature of the world/universe. Thanks- Reader.
well...would have love to read it but incent is a no-no for me..................................😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😪😔😔😔😔😔😔
IT seems nice............................................................................................................................................
Only 4 Harem? But you just said that he will create a harem of beauties from different of kingdom? Will you increase the harem in the future author?.
More Chapters Every Day Brother Heheheh Hopefully Not DROPPED In Novel Brother And Thanks For Novel Brother And God Bless You Brother And Keep Spirit Brother Nice Novel Brother
The story is similar to vampire’s slice of life, but with less scenes. The good part is that it actually focuses on plot line more. Unfortunately, as a vampire mc, the story hardly focuses on the vampire part . The story is like any other story, where there is academy ark, but the mc is a vampire. The story doesn’t go into much details like his flying training and wings, when they are clearly different from others, but no reaction has been given out. The story focuses more on the magic part like any other mage story, which kind of makes it disappointing if you want to read it cause of a vampire mc. Otherwise, the story is good.
To the Author, all in all very good novel- but just a small suggestion take it or leave it- *Hope to MC creates his own invention/Cultivation Technique - with the combination of Magic, Runes(if there are but with the combination of coding types) and Pure Martial Arts(only physical like body practitioner from WUXIA/XIANXIA- making the body stronger than excaliber sword or any weapon i hope with the process of making him nigh-immortal with instant super regeneration) his technique-(Get hard as it get higher in levels) including to which he also creates science and tech(like scientist+engineer+smithery+researcher) Reader.with Magical and internal energy combine with his own arts(Get hard as it get higher in levels)- Teach it's people anywhere about it and preserve the nature of the world/universe. Thanks- Reader.
well...would have love to read it but incent is a no-no for me..................................😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😪😔😔😔😔😔😔
IT seems nice............................................................................................................................................
Only 4 Harem? But you just said that he will create a harem of beauties from different of kingdom? Will you increase the harem in the future author?.
More Chapters Every Day Brother Heheheh Hopefully Not DROPPED In Novel Brother And Thanks For Novel Brother And God Bless You Brother And Keep Spirit Brother Nice Novel Brother
The story is similar to vampire’s slice of life, but with less scenes. The good part is that it actually focuses on plot line more. Unfortunately, as a vampire mc, the story hardly focuses on the vampire part . The story is like any other story, where there is academy ark, but the mc is a vampire. The story doesn’t go into much details like his flying training and wings, when they are clearly different from others, but no reaction has been given out. The story focuses more on the magic part like any other mage story, which kind of makes it disappointing if you want to read it cause of a vampire mc. Otherwise, the story is good.