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this is a great story it is hands down the best necro story out there hands down. wish the next chapter would come out already
I think the author should start school again and improve his math skills. There are too many inconsistencies in character development. In one episode, each of MC's stats is more than 150 points, but in the next He barely has 120 points in the episode, there is a lot of inconsistency not only in stat points but also in achievement scores. He used to have 2200 points, but when he did a task, he gained 500 points. Normally, he should be 2700.It was supposed to be 2500. If it was just this, I could ignore it, but when he completed the next achievement mission, he got 500 points. It should have been 3000 with the previous points, but the writer made a mistake again. It is stated as 2900 points. The author is deliberately trying to delay the MC's strengthening, but when he does this, a huge inconsistency occurs in the story. The author needs to correct these mistakes and take this issue lightly.He shouldn't take it
揭示劇透 the best Necro story out there. The only reason its not a perfect score for me is that they take way too long to update
Absolutely terrible. It's literally trying to clone Solo Leveling, but rushing everything so there's no story and the MC straight up starts OP. I decided to give it the benefit of the doubt, but nope. Dropped it after 15 chapters. The MC become sthe weakest combat class, a necromancer - or does he? He gets to dual class with a hidden Undead Monarch too! Daily quests with insane rewards? Check. No backstory? Check.
it was good an all till, but the MC is not even Leveling Up it too focused on the fighting tournaments, it just feels like it repeats the same thing I was looking forward to his classes advanment but almost 300 chapter in that never happen. so my final review is that the writing quality was good. The character design was OK, but a few hole, but overall, OK, the world background was good although I didn't like some aspects of it but it was realistic enough but what kill this story for me is the story development that was overall disappointing I had high hopes but nope it took the phase history repeats it Self too much like all he does is fight but not level ups like he should
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It is too cliche plot, mc has countless undead to help him level up yet he is barely keeping with other characters who should be many times slower at gathering exp. His attributes are so much more than others yet he had to give his all to win. Then once he gets to academy it is all tournaments till latest chapters- 500+. It feels more like tournaments world story than anything else.
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Ooh boy after reading it for like 50+ chapter it's a trash where mc is like f necromancer and go with melee just wow I am going to drop it Simply wast of time[img=faceslap]
I doubt 99% of Chinese novels are written by AI 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎
I quite like the story but many things in it are not explained well or consistent. I still don't know when the mc will get his second class change as it hasn't been stated what level is needed. Also the strength progression and how he increases his strength is not consistent at all .
this book and story are great. The only downside is that the author seems to have a fetish for overusing and misusing the word "directly"
This is one of the novel pattern where the MC is poor and died in it's previous life, reborn with memories of the previous life. Has a SSS talent or ability with cheat system. Either it has best friend who is a fatty or a talkative person; or a big or small sister who is supporting the MC, vice versa. Hardships at the beginning then smooth sailing in the end. Discovers that the level MC knows is just the beginning not the end. Get stronger for either for power, revenge or love.
did someone notice that leveling was easy up to 20 and then even after killing god know how many, not a single up after.🤨
MC is beta male harem cuck. Multiple women constantly around him and he never clarifies the relationships. He gets raped and didn't even feel it even though he's already an expert. (I dropped it here.) Story is pretty nice otherwise.
overall, it's a good novel. HOWEVER, the author forgets half of MCs skills to drag out a battle or make it more interesting. Frankly, I think he's even forgotten some. This is seen more on later chapters, not from webnovel, I doubt it'll change.
the story is very simple but interesting I just wonder does anyone know if this story is a Harem?
Mc is dumb, dropped ch14. Needs to lay low and be careful since he says there are assassins who will attack talented youths. So he immediately goes and shows off his strength in front of the entire school audience. But even without that, he completely wastes his op class he awakened. Melee necromancer makes no sense. He legit just goes in and fights with melee while his op skeletons are sitting back doing nothing...what's the point of having the op skeletons then. His "melee focused necromancer" hidden class has no synergy with melee fighting so no, it's not a melee focused necromancer class, it's just mc wasting stat points so he can fight melee for no reason. Having defenses is fine, but getting strength so he can melee is a waste. Just because you have more stat points doesn't mean you should use them on someone unrelated to your class. It means you should use it to get more ahead of people by using the things you synergies with. You can either have melee stats and magic stats that are comparable to others or you could just have magic stats that are way higher. This is one of the things I hate seeing the most in necromancer novels lol, so a bit unrelated of a rant I guess. Basically, mc has some good op abilities but decides to not use them and instead become a melee fighter for no reason. He didn't need to, he had good skeletons who could fight for him.
I like the story. I find it fun and entertaining. I only found 2 issues with it so far. 1. sometimes the author contradics himself. one chapter he be like "I'm giving up on this skill and won't increase it since I'll get better ones in the future" and then the next chapter "I'll spend 4 skill points to upgrade this." without reason. 2. the MC is OP and I love it but I feel like with how OP he is (the amount of stats and skills he has) he shouldn't have as much trouble defeating his fellow students. He has a dragon summon that doubles his stats (cept agility) and gives it to the 2 dragon summons. his stats are already above 400 total (breaking the record by 200 already) and then he uses a skill that adds like 40% to half his stats then summons the dragons. that means that those dragon summons have around 1k total stats yet one hit from the dragon totally doesn't just wreck his opponent. the opponent should only have like 300 tops. yet with a 700 difference he doesn't get clobbered by 2 dragons after one hit.
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honestly a little generic but solid. the biggest problem is how expensive chapters are in the most recent releases. some of them are 25 coins a chapter.
I liked the story a lot and the world too, but what bothers me a lot is that there always has to be the perverted and disgusting part of the harem with a dozen women and the truth is that it starts to tire, it takes the good out of the story and makes me to stop reading it.
DO NOT LISTEN OR READ THE PEOPLE BELOW FOCUS ON ME. This story is one of a kind, especially in these Chinese novels, i would know since i have read most of them and This one i have read to the latest chapter. Let me tell you right now, this has to be one of the best Chinese novels out there, it starts of with cliches and then later on crushes them, its seriously a jade in hiding as they say, this is amazing you have to read this, if you read to the latest chapter and don't enjoy it then feel free to reply and dis this review, Before you ask there haven't been any romantic interest with the mc, the story doesn't waste time, everything to the detailing was perfect story wise, there are some slight grammar errors but you would barely notice it, I swear once you past chapter 50, it would keep you hooked, you can look at the free chapters as a way to show you classic Chinese cliché but the real story begins where the chapters are locked, check all my reviews everything i have ever reviewed is amazing and awesome and i can promise you this is the same, its just as good as any other novel but definitely better than most of the Chinese novels, i am talking top 10. Things i love about this novel is the pacing, everything is introduced perfectly, there is no info dump, the world just fits, every thing is introduced when needed and this allows for the story to push forward, there are no overlong arcs that make you bored, no every has an equal amount of time, power scaling mwah!! its perfect, SERIOUSLY GIVE THIS A READ, I SWEAR YOU WILL NOT REGRET IT.
the author forget what he writes, the mc's int attributes is already reach 200 and yet after a few chapters it backs to 100+ again 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0
this looks like a harem? the mc has so many annoying girls around him and he is also getting turned on by a woman whose age can pass as his mom! so I'll drop this!
Sorry, I'm from Thailand. I really like your novel. Can I have permission to translate it into Thai? Please send me your email address. Thank you.
The read is good and solid when even compared to others of similar taste. ONly downside is the coin cost to unlock chapters 16/18 etc that to me is a lil to high even, especially when compared to others that are around the 8/9 cost range to unlock. Good read all the same
it's trash but still better than the other trash...........................................................................................................................
This novel is great and all, but the author keeps on forgetting the skills, which the mc acquired in the initial stage. Even the use of system has been decreased. Initailly the skills, used to evolve, but now the author seems to have forgotten that or something, even if the skills don’t evolve, the mc could level them up. This makes the read a bit frustrating.
congrats author you have really exceeded the limits :) even with my brain turned off I cant read this novel -_- I have finally found something I cant read even while doing my best if I try to continue I might really die. Like I swear to God I am genuinely curious and not being sarcastic or anything how can someone write something like this??_?? the only way I see for this to be feasible is for the author to have a condition where his memory gets wiped every 5 seconds -_- Mc is your typical OP mc, that has a hidden profession and a system and his stats are "astronomically"higher cus of it... that is until that tournament arc where the people (some of which are his seniors) are who got clapped by mobs and had to be saved by the mc are now one shotting semi epic lvl boss monsters that mc barely won against (because apparently epic level monsters have high stats, but thats only the case when they are facing mc??_??) -_- and its not like these events are so far apart that its somehow excusable, this all happened in like 10 chapters ffs. X character almost dies to lvl 20 normal-elite monster, gets saved by mc, return to school with mc, one shots lvl 20 half epic monster ??_?? to sum my review: this novel made me realize how harsh my previous reviews were, what I deemed trash novel had at least somewhat of a logic in them -_-
this is a great story it is hands down the best necro story out there hands down. wish the next chapter would come out already
I think the author should start school again and improve his math skills. There are too many inconsistencies in character development. In one episode, each of MC's stats is more than 150 points, but in the next He barely has 120 points in the episode, there is a lot of inconsistency not only in stat points but also in achievement scores. He used to have 2200 points, but when he did a task, he gained 500 points. Normally, he should be 2700.It was supposed to be 2500. If it was just this, I could ignore it, but when he completed the next achievement mission, he got 500 points. It should have been 3000 with the previous points, but the writer made a mistake again. It is stated as 2900 points. The author is deliberately trying to delay the MC's strengthening, but when he does this, a huge inconsistency occurs in the story. The author needs to correct these mistakes and take this issue lightly.He shouldn't take it
揭示劇透 the best Necro story out there. The only reason its not a perfect score for me is that they take way too long to update
Absolutely terrible. It's literally trying to clone Solo Leveling, but rushing everything so there's no story and the MC straight up starts OP. I decided to give it the benefit of the doubt, but nope. Dropped it after 15 chapters. The MC become sthe weakest combat class, a necromancer - or does he? He gets to dual class with a hidden Undead Monarch too! Daily quests with insane rewards? Check. No backstory? Check.
it was good an all till, but the MC is not even Leveling Up it too focused on the fighting tournaments, it just feels like it repeats the same thing I was looking forward to his classes advanment but almost 300 chapter in that never happen. so my final review is that the writing quality was good. The character design was OK, but a few hole, but overall, OK, the world background was good although I didn't like some aspects of it but it was realistic enough but what kill this story for me is the story development that was overall disappointing I had high hopes but nope it took the phase history repeats it Self too much like all he does is fight but not level ups like he should
揭示劇透 It is too cliche plot, mc has countless undead to help him level up yet he is barely keeping with other characters who should be many times slower at gathering exp. His attributes are so much more than others yet he had to give his all to win. Then once he gets to academy it is all tournaments till latest chapters- 500+. It feels more like tournaments world story than anything else.
揭示劇透 Ooh boy after reading it for like 50+ chapter it's a trash where mc is like f necromancer and go with melee just wow I am going to drop it Simply wast of time[img=faceslap]
I doubt 99% of Chinese novels are written by AI 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎 👎
I quite like the story but many things in it are not explained well or consistent. I still don't know when the mc will get his second class change as it hasn't been stated what level is needed. Also the strength progression and how he increases his strength is not consistent at all .
this book and story are great. The only downside is that the author seems to have a fetish for overusing and misusing the word "directly"
This is one of the novel pattern where the MC is poor and died in it's previous life, reborn with memories of the previous life. Has a SSS talent or ability with cheat system. Either it has best friend who is a fatty or a talkative person; or a big or small sister who is supporting the MC, vice versa. Hardships at the beginning then smooth sailing in the end. Discovers that the level MC knows is just the beginning not the end. Get stronger for either for power, revenge or love.
did someone notice that leveling was easy up to 20 and then even after killing god know how many, not a single up after.🤨
MC is beta male harem cuck. Multiple women constantly around him and he never clarifies the relationships. He gets raped and didn't even feel it even though he's already an expert. (I dropped it here.) Story is pretty nice otherwise.
overall, it's a good novel. HOWEVER, the author forgets half of MCs skills to drag out a battle or make it more interesting. Frankly, I think he's even forgotten some. This is seen more on later chapters, not from webnovel, I doubt it'll change.
the story is very simple but interesting I just wonder does anyone know if this story is a Harem?
Mc is dumb, dropped ch14. Needs to lay low and be careful since he says there are assassins who will attack talented youths. So he immediately goes and shows off his strength in front of the entire school audience. But even without that, he completely wastes his op class he awakened. Melee necromancer makes no sense. He legit just goes in and fights with melee while his op skeletons are sitting back doing nothing...what's the point of having the op skeletons then. His "melee focused necromancer" hidden class has no synergy with melee fighting so no, it's not a melee focused necromancer class, it's just mc wasting stat points so he can fight melee for no reason. Having defenses is fine, but getting strength so he can melee is a waste. Just because you have more stat points doesn't mean you should use them on someone unrelated to your class. It means you should use it to get more ahead of people by using the things you synergies with. You can either have melee stats and magic stats that are comparable to others or you could just have magic stats that are way higher. This is one of the things I hate seeing the most in necromancer novels lol, so a bit unrelated of a rant I guess. Basically, mc has some good op abilities but decides to not use them and instead become a melee fighter for no reason. He didn't need to, he had good skeletons who could fight for him.
I like the story. I find it fun and entertaining. I only found 2 issues with it so far. 1. sometimes the author contradics himself. one chapter he be like "I'm giving up on this skill and won't increase it since I'll get better ones in the future" and then the next chapter "I'll spend 4 skill points to upgrade this." without reason. 2. the MC is OP and I love it but I feel like with how OP he is (the amount of stats and skills he has) he shouldn't have as much trouble defeating his fellow students. He has a dragon summon that doubles his stats (cept agility) and gives it to the 2 dragon summons. his stats are already above 400 total (breaking the record by 200 already) and then he uses a skill that adds like 40% to half his stats then summons the dragons. that means that those dragon summons have around 1k total stats yet one hit from the dragon totally doesn't just wreck his opponent. the opponent should only have like 300 tops. yet with a 700 difference he doesn't get clobbered by 2 dragons after one hit.
揭示劇透 honestly a little generic but solid. the biggest problem is how expensive chapters are in the most recent releases. some of them are 25 coins a chapter.
I liked the story a lot and the world too, but what bothers me a lot is that there always has to be the perverted and disgusting part of the harem with a dozen women and the truth is that it starts to tire, it takes the good out of the story and makes me to stop reading it.
DO NOT LISTEN OR READ THE PEOPLE BELOW FOCUS ON ME. This story is one of a kind, especially in these Chinese novels, i would know since i have read most of them and This one i have read to the latest chapter. Let me tell you right now, this has to be one of the best Chinese novels out there, it starts of with cliches and then later on crushes them, its seriously a jade in hiding as they say, this is amazing you have to read this, if you read to the latest chapter and don't enjoy it then feel free to reply and dis this review, Before you ask there haven't been any romantic interest with the mc, the story doesn't waste time, everything to the detailing was perfect story wise, there are some slight grammar errors but you would barely notice it, I swear once you past chapter 50, it would keep you hooked, you can look at the free chapters as a way to show you classic Chinese cliché but the real story begins where the chapters are locked, check all my reviews everything i have ever reviewed is amazing and awesome and i can promise you this is the same, its just as good as any other novel but definitely better than most of the Chinese novels, i am talking top 10. Things i love about this novel is the pacing, everything is introduced perfectly, there is no info dump, the world just fits, every thing is introduced when needed and this allows for the story to push forward, there are no overlong arcs that make you bored, no every has an equal amount of time, power scaling mwah!! its perfect, SERIOUSLY GIVE THIS A READ, I SWEAR YOU WILL NOT REGRET IT.
the author forget what he writes, the mc's int attributes is already reach 200 and yet after a few chapters it backs to 100+ again 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0
this looks like a harem? the mc has so many annoying girls around him and he is also getting turned on by a woman whose age can pass as his mom! so I'll drop this!
Sorry, I'm from Thailand. I really like your novel. Can I have permission to translate it into Thai? Please send me your email address. Thank you.
The read is good and solid when even compared to others of similar taste. ONly downside is the coin cost to unlock chapters 16/18 etc that to me is a lil to high even, especially when compared to others that are around the 8/9 cost range to unlock. Good read all the same
it's trash but still better than the other trash...........................................................................................................................
This novel is great and all, but the author keeps on forgetting the skills, which the mc acquired in the initial stage. Even the use of system has been decreased. Initailly the skills, used to evolve, but now the author seems to have forgotten that or something, even if the skills don’t evolve, the mc could level them up. This makes the read a bit frustrating.
congrats author you have really exceeded the limits :) even with my brain turned off I cant read this novel -_- I have finally found something I cant read even while doing my best if I try to continue I might really die. Like I swear to God I am genuinely curious and not being sarcastic or anything how can someone write something like this??_?? the only way I see for this to be feasible is for the author to have a condition where his memory gets wiped every 5 seconds -_- Mc is your typical OP mc, that has a hidden profession and a system and his stats are "astronomically"higher cus of it... that is until that tournament arc where the people (some of which are his seniors) are who got clapped by mobs and had to be saved by the mc are now one shotting semi epic lvl boss monsters that mc barely won against (because apparently epic level monsters have high stats, but thats only the case when they are facing mc??_??) -_- and its not like these events are so far apart that its somehow excusable, this all happened in like 10 chapters ffs. X character almost dies to lvl 20 normal-elite monster, gets saved by mc, return to school with mc, one shots lvl 20 half epic monster ??_?? to sum my review: this novel made me realize how harsh my previous reviews were, what I deemed trash novel had at least somewhat of a logic in them -_-