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I hope that you continue this Fic since finding one were an MC uses Magic Hybrid Dinosaurs is rare
I have a question and when you going to restart doing this because it's a pretty good book
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I just read this on a whim because I was bored and I thought it was a crazy idea to use dinosaurs to fight in draconic deus verse but who would have thought this was an amazing fic, dont drop the fic
It's a fun read. The problem I have mostly presents itself with how easily everyone accepts the MC, his alien-like powers, and his decisions. Basically, he's a Mary Sue. If you don't mind that type of MC, then this is a fun read.
Well, I stopped reading when the MC accepted to join ria peerage (in another word become her slave ) not even a day after reincarnating, plus the whole nerffing thing : he asked a wish to have his dinosaurs with him but than when they were linked to his soul it was badly injured ( for each soul contract with a dinosaurs needs a piece of his soul) but than he wasn't healed just sent like that so when he woke up in DxD he forgot some of his memories which make it quite a useless reincarnation !!!!??????
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Dinosaurs, interesting MC that isn't a pushover or a simp, isn't some obnoxious harem collector. Did I mention the dinosaurs? Love his interactions with the dinos and their neat abilities. In the latest chapters, as of writing this, Issei got put in his place too which is nice.
Eu estava gostando até você fazer com que o MC virasse um " escravo ", dropei, sinto muito, mas fiquei bastante decepcionado.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Honestly, it's my first review so… well, it's not very good, but I think this story is worth it. Grammar 3.5/5: this part is a bit bad, the grammar is understandable but it has several visible errors like some words that do not match the sentence, etc. but in general it won't bother you much update stability 4/5: generally good, although the author does not have a fixed schedule but it does not take long between each update. development of the story 4/5: I'm liking how the story unfolds, although there are some things that don't quite convince me, like the other champion, honestly I'm not very interested, I had already forgotten it by the time they mentioned it again, there is nothing interesting, at least in my opinion, the author does it for the blessing of Hades but I don't think he really needs it, with what he has now he can become one of the strongest, besides the author does not put a clear goal for the protagonist (unless I forgot) Character design 2.5/5: not very good, that's all you need to know world background 3/5: so-so, borderline bad, the author has not really delved into the construction of the world, in addition to not even mentioning the other factions, so we do not know much about the world (although we have to wait, after of everything not even 30 chapters have passed) this review was translated from spanish with google translator, sorry for the mistakes
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This is Actually really good for a dxd fanfic and the concept really caught my eye, i have no complaints grammar is good, world background is spot on and overall hoped it won't get dropped since this might be my new "favorite dxd ff"
More chp's. I love the story only wish i had waited så ut got more chp's. Sluyldluøurpueuøduæføuøudøuuæfjæfhødøyødøuæudøueuææufæuræuåråueåuepuøudæurøpupuepuepuepuåupypppuepypueptpuepueåuåup rå Rå rå eller ppråuræriåurepueeuætopdypdæy
writing this after 10 chapters . so far the story is great , the mc is charming honestly his quirks are endearing , well paced with no issues and overall a solid read 👏
Good one if u want detaild rewiew i am to monkey brain to do it lol englhis is my third launage lol.
Big magic Dinosaurs, if that's not awesome than I need to get my head checked. Nice unique take on the ye-old Isekai style. Is quite good so far, looking forward to seeing this story continue to unfold.
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while it's a DXD fanfic it's good to read not something to right home about but still above the common fics keep it up you are going great..
Honestly think this is an amazing novel with a unique twist that i havent seen Before plz author dont drop keep updating and plzzzzzzzzz dont drop
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I Really Like The Idea But Do The Dinosaurs Have Magical Abilities If No They're Pretty Much Useless [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I from time to time write things ona whim and this was one of those. My main account is kind to full so I used my seocndary account for this. Should be fun.
I love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!over 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope that you continue this Fic since finding one were an MC uses Magic Hybrid Dinosaurs is rare
I have a question and when you going to restart doing this because it's a pretty good book
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I just read this on a whim because I was bored and I thought it was a crazy idea to use dinosaurs to fight in draconic deus verse but who would have thought this was an amazing fic, dont drop the fic
It's a fun read. The problem I have mostly presents itself with how easily everyone accepts the MC, his alien-like powers, and his decisions. Basically, he's a Mary Sue. If you don't mind that type of MC, then this is a fun read.
Well, I stopped reading when the MC accepted to join ria peerage (in another word become her slave ) not even a day after reincarnating, plus the whole nerffing thing : he asked a wish to have his dinosaurs with him but than when they were linked to his soul it was badly injured ( for each soul contract with a dinosaurs needs a piece of his soul) but than he wasn't healed just sent like that so when he woke up in DxD he forgot some of his memories which make it quite a useless reincarnation !!!!??????
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Dinosaurs, interesting MC that isn't a pushover or a simp, isn't some obnoxious harem collector. Did I mention the dinosaurs? Love his interactions with the dinos and their neat abilities. In the latest chapters, as of writing this, Issei got put in his place too which is nice.
Eu estava gostando até você fazer com que o MC virasse um " escravo ", dropei, sinto muito, mas fiquei bastante decepcionado.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Honestly, it's my first review so… well, it's not very good, but I think this story is worth it. Grammar 3.5/5: this part is a bit bad, the grammar is understandable but it has several visible errors like some words that do not match the sentence, etc. but in general it won't bother you much update stability 4/5: generally good, although the author does not have a fixed schedule but it does not take long between each update. development of the story 4/5: I'm liking how the story unfolds, although there are some things that don't quite convince me, like the other champion, honestly I'm not very interested, I had already forgotten it by the time they mentioned it again, there is nothing interesting, at least in my opinion, the author does it for the blessing of Hades but I don't think he really needs it, with what he has now he can become one of the strongest, besides the author does not put a clear goal for the protagonist (unless I forgot) Character design 2.5/5: not very good, that's all you need to know world background 3/5: so-so, borderline bad, the author has not really delved into the construction of the world, in addition to not even mentioning the other factions, so we do not know much about the world (although we have to wait, after of everything not even 30 chapters have passed) this review was translated from spanish with google translator, sorry for the mistakes
揭示劇透 This is Actually really good for a dxd fanfic and the concept really caught my eye, i have no complaints grammar is good, world background is spot on and overall hoped it won't get dropped since this might be my new "favorite dxd ff"
More chp's. I love the story only wish i had waited så ut got more chp's. Sluyldluøurpueuøduæføuøudøuuæfjæfhødøyødøuæudøueuææufæuræuåråueåuepuøudæurøpupuepuepuepuåupypppuepypueptpuepueåuåup rå Rå rå eller ppråuræriåurepueeuætopdypdæy
writing this after 10 chapters . so far the story is great , the mc is charming honestly his quirks are endearing , well paced with no issues and overall a solid read 👏
Good one if u want detaild rewiew i am to monkey brain to do it lol englhis is my third launage lol.
Big magic Dinosaurs, if that's not awesome than I need to get my head checked. Nice unique take on the ye-old Isekai style. Is quite good so far, looking forward to seeing this story continue to unfold.
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while it's a DXD fanfic it's good to read not something to right home about but still above the common fics keep it up you are going great..
Honestly think this is an amazing novel with a unique twist that i havent seen Before plz author dont drop keep updating and plzzzzzzzzz dont drop
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I Really Like The Idea But Do The Dinosaurs Have Magical Abilities If No They're Pretty Much Useless [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I from time to time write things ona whim and this was one of those. My main account is kind to full so I used my seocndary account for this. Should be fun.
I love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!over 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!