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:P This is my second account, buuuuuuttttttt, I feel It deserves at least one review before anything else. Origionally, I wanted to do something funny, along with a bit of romance, but it changed to this xD For those wondering what's going to happen, and is it all gonna be Animal Pokémon? Lots of things, and no, it's not strictly Animal type Pokemon, but you'll just have to wait and see, isn't that right, Ekiros, and Jack?
:P This is my second account, buuuuuuttttttt, I feel It deserves at least one review before anything else. Origionally, I wanted to do something funny, along with a bit of romance, but it changed to this xD For those wondering what's going to happen, and is it all gonna be Animal Pokémon? Lots of things, and no, it's not strictly Animal type Pokemon, but you'll just have to wait and see, isn't that right, Ekiros, and Jack?
Will you continue this fic? It was really good so I hope you do.