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What is this trash? The grammar is bad, the story is bad, everything is just trash. Also, the title is completely misleading. King? What king? The MC is just a loser who listens to his mommy’s every word, and lets his servant order him around.
Two chapters in, and I’m already very disappointed. The grammar sucks, and overall, it seems like this was written by a child, using words like “nappy,” when you mean diaper. I’ll continue reading just to see if it gets even remotely better. (Definitely not because I’m a degenerate)
Thanks for all the support, Ill try my best to make something enjoyable and fun to read. 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters.
Love it 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
what foes AGS stand for?.................... and what animes/games/mangas/etc are in this? And is the mc evil or not?[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Hella interesting. I'm hoping for more so pls don't drop [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
very good[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
More Chapters Brother Heheheh Thanks For Novel Brother Hopefully Not DROPPED In Novel GOD BLESS YOU BROTHER AND Keep Spirit Brother Heheheh [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is such a boring novel and so cringe as well [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
揭示劇透 What is this trash? The grammar is bad, the story is bad, everything is just trash. Also, the title is completely misleading. King? What king? The MC is just a loser who listens to his mommy’s every word, and lets his servant order him around.
Two chapters in, and I’m already very disappointed. The grammar sucks, and overall, it seems like this was written by a child, using words like “nappy,” when you mean diaper. I’ll continue reading just to see if it gets even remotely better. (Definitely not because I’m a degenerate)
Thanks for all the support, Ill try my best to make something enjoyable and fun to read. 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters.
Love it 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
what foes AGS stand for?.................... and what animes/games/mangas/etc are in this? And is the mc evil or not?[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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what foes AGS stand for?............................................................................................................................................................
Hella interesting. I'm hoping for more so pls don't drop [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
very good[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
More Chapters Brother Heheheh Thanks For Novel Brother Hopefully Not DROPPED In Novel GOD BLESS YOU BROTHER AND Keep Spirit Brother Heheheh [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is such a boring novel and so cringe as well [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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