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So: a really good premise and an interesting ability. Special forces and an ability that can multiply or reduce the laws of physics and other peoples powers, which gives a solid base to build a story on. Character design: Starts out really good, the MC seems well thought of. But then the "legal loli" appears and he turns into a horn dog. She pampers him, he is - this close to fudging her and what the heck happened to my nice story and the good premise? World Background: Actually great, well thought of and interesting. Writing Quality: Pretty good for a Webnovel.
This premise is stupid, even if you ignore the fact that this is a wish fulfilment novel, the power levels, and the harem et all, a lot of us don't care much about that stuff after all. But the fact that this novel is all of that YET the MC is a dog from some federation while he can overpower said federation is ridiculous.-
Well first 19 chapters are not bad. But the mc too money oriented. With his ability it should only be his small goal. So first 19 chapters are ok but i'm not sure if the others be ok or not in the future and if i will be ok with mc personality.... For now i will read more for sure.
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well, I want to read more of it, even if it's the literary equivalent of popcorn. word word words words words wor dsword word words words words wor ds
Kinda a let down, started off strong and the mc has actually cool and well designed powers. But theres a giant letdown in plot especially with other characters. Author just has to put in a “legal loli” - that acts ”just like a mom” to mc and is just in general a creepy dynamic. There’s been 3 love interests so far and all of them are cliché. Could be great but author fumbled the bag
The MC forms a team and the first member of that team is, in the words of the author "a legal loli" and it's creepy af. the author constantly sexualised the person who "looks like a 12 year old girl" and it's weird af
ok, ok, ok so you can Multiply anything? So you need to ger money from a federation instead of just multiplying it? Even if you can'tmultiply money as long as you can multiply matter like it is said just go and multiply some Gold, diamonds etc and done? So why again did you join some federation? 😅
Honestly the synopsis makes this look like Mc is a federation dog who has it not necessary to work there bur still chose to with a stupid excuse that he earns money. (Look at MC'S ability he has if not necessary)
liked it, accept no other opinion, and want more chapter. prepared to declare war, (mental one at least cuz why more?) 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐
So: a really good premise and an interesting ability. Special forces and an ability that can multiply or reduce the laws of physics and other peoples powers, which gives a solid base to build a story on. Character design: Starts out really good, the MC seems well thought of. But then the "legal loli" appears and he turns into a horn dog. She pampers him, he is - this close to fudging her and what the heck happened to my nice story and the good premise? World Background: Actually great, well thought of and interesting. Writing Quality: Pretty good for a Webnovel.
This premise is stupid, even if you ignore the fact that this is a wish fulfilment novel, the power levels, and the harem et all, a lot of us don't care much about that stuff after all. But the fact that this novel is all of that YET the MC is a dog from some federation while he can overpower said federation is ridiculous.-
Well first 19 chapters are not bad. But the mc too money oriented. With his ability it should only be his small goal. So first 19 chapters are ok but i'm not sure if the others be ok or not in the future and if i will be ok with mc personality.... For now i will read more for sure.
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well, I want to read more of it, even if it's the literary equivalent of popcorn. word word words words words wor dsword word words words words wor ds
Kinda a let down, started off strong and the mc has actually cool and well designed powers. But theres a giant letdown in plot especially with other characters. Author just has to put in a “legal loli” - that acts ”just like a mom” to mc and is just in general a creepy dynamic. There’s been 3 love interests so far and all of them are cliché. Could be great but author fumbled the bag
The MC forms a team and the first member of that team is, in the words of the author "a legal loli" and it's creepy af. the author constantly sexualised the person who "looks like a 12 year old girl" and it's weird af
ok, ok, ok so you can Multiply anything? So you need to ger money from a federation instead of just multiplying it? Even if you can'tmultiply money as long as you can multiply matter like it is said just go and multiply some Gold, diamonds etc and done? So why again did you join some federation? 😅
Honestly the synopsis makes this look like Mc is a federation dog who has it not necessary to work there bur still chose to with a stupid excuse that he earns money. (Look at MC'S ability he has if not necessary)
liked it, accept no other opinion, and want more chapter. prepared to declare war, (mental one at least cuz why more?) 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐