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One of the amazing story that I have came across. Everything is perfect. The characters are just too sweet. The author has done an amazing job. Good luck.❤️
Nice work Biva. Cool cool cool. No writing errors, very easy to follow. The start is especially unique, the kinda start that makes you wonder what went down. A romance that will attract your attention and keep it. Great work author. I like this
It's easy to flow and has good writing. There are no grammatical errors and the author has done a good job in going with a background and then jumping into the plot.
Girl this story seems like a dramatic romance and I'm loving it! Synopsis is great and I think that ML and FL will have a good chemistry together thought they are really different from each other. Writing style is amazing I don't see any grammatical errors. Thumbs up author 👍
Why is this story so good yet makes me so angry at the characters at the same time. Man this novel messes with my emotions way to much, I love the FL but she can be so annoying sometimes.
everything about the book is heartbreaking. the love and duty of Roy and his conflicting emotions hopefully the book has an hea or I'll be heart broken. also I would request the author to edit the sypnosis as it doesn't explain the book as good as it is.
I love adding the amnesia in this story. you could tell from chapter 1 that author is good at writing sweet romance. they balance mystery and cute moments really well so you are always left wanting more. the characters are cute and the FL is charming. the innocent of ML also makes your heart swooned. this is a good story, author!
Hi author, your book is keeping me captive all the time. it's good worth of time. I'm looking forward to it. your concept is getting interested with every passing day. "more ink to your pen, author"
Now I like the dynamics between the main characters. Even more interesting is the fact that the story begins with their rivalry despite the deep feelings they share.
Nice story author..... Keep it up... The story is really nice and fresh...l really like the author's writting... Plz do upload more so that l can read more.... Thank u.....
Well writen story. characters were relatable, the synopsis caught my attention, the mystery in the first chapter was good, this story is a gem. keep up the good work
Hmmm 🤔 Interesting!! Though I don't read this types of story, it's really amazing! I wanna keep reading.... The story is well written and I like the style of writing. Great job author! Keep it up! 😊😊
The story was very easy to follow. I really loved it.The plot was also interesting. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep up the good work. 😊
I honestly think its a good story. The starting was awesome. Every plot is so beautifully designed. I hope i can read the rest of the story soon.
wow! This is really good! The character development is very creative, though you need to update with more charters. But overall, this is pretty good! the story progression and character build-up is great
Amazing!!! Had ne hooked in the first half itself... What a way of writing. The Author really showed each emotion really well.. I enjoyed the chapters so kindly keep uploading more 👏🏼👏🏼🥳
The flow of the story makes it an exciting read. The main chapters are so relateble that I am curious what will happens next, but I'm not too fond of Roy duo. Who leaves the person they love in a dangerous place when they are unconscious? I wish he is not the male lead.
Best of the best I have read ever. Interesting concept to start from the heartbreak back to the past. Can't wait to read more of it... please update more. I recommend every one to read it. Hope it will be a hit. Bravo author!!!
Cool story. I liked the progression of the plot, it was decent, but there are some things that need to be corrected. Otherwise, the narrating style is good. I feel sad for the characters and author did a great job in potraying their sadness and inner turmoil.
I'm really loving this novel. The FL's suffering makes my heart feel tight, the way the scenarios and pacing of the story are very immersing. As a reader, I could fully immerse myself in the feelings of the characters. And for me that is a great writing. Please update more chapters author! I'll look forward to it!
The setting of the story is good. The main characters' histories are discernable from cliches. Overall, waiting for the romance. The writing is good enough. Hoping for more chapters and a thrilling story.
Wow just wow. I don't have more than the word to describe the story and it's turn of events. Please upload more..I can't stop my curiosity. Hoping to see more romance soon. Great book... Please, all do read it and recommend to othes too.
It's really interesting to see a merged background that's both fantasy and modern day. The writing is really good and fast-paced. From chapter 1, l've been cheering for the FL hoping she can not be with the ML but its romance so l don't know. The only thing that could be changed is just having longer chapters is all which is something that speaks to how high quality the book is. Good job!
I've only read a few pages so far, and I really liked it. The novel is engaging, and I really enjoyed the plot, so I'm looking forward to reading more of it. The synopsis is written effectively as well. There are only a few mistakes, which I think might be rectified, and good characterization. So keep it up writer; I found it enjoyable.
I think I am quite frankly frustrated with the male lead always being a CEO. Cheering for the FL. I'm now ready for a new roller coaster experience!
This is a superb story whoever reads this story surely gets immersed in it. I like the character Abha, and her broken heart. Great work author ! Don't stop this story it will be a masterpiece.
This one of good gem of stories i get tot read, I see that the author puts a lot of effort into this story, the storyline is decent, the language is easy to read although the chapters are kind of short try making a bit longer 1k words per chapter, the story seems rand new hopefully it turn to be a good story.
I really acknowledge the work of author. The storyline is amazing. The language is easy to comprehend. I really like the main character of this book. The story is however starting yet and I hope it will turn out to be one of the best books.
Shameless author review!! Hello readers!! Hope you like the story. This is a story of loving someone and trying hard to forget. I will try my best to make it more interesting. with some suspense and thriller. This work is totally based on imagination. Stay tuned and support me.
One of the amazing story that I have came across. Everything is perfect. The characters are just too sweet. The author has done an amazing job. Good luck.❤️
Nice work Biva. Cool cool cool. No writing errors, very easy to follow. The start is especially unique, the kinda start that makes you wonder what went down. A romance that will attract your attention and keep it. Great work author. I like this
It's easy to flow and has good writing. There are no grammatical errors and the author has done a good job in going with a background and then jumping into the plot.
Girl this story seems like a dramatic romance and I'm loving it! Synopsis is great and I think that ML and FL will have a good chemistry together thought they are really different from each other. Writing style is amazing I don't see any grammatical errors. Thumbs up author 👍
Why is this story so good yet makes me so angry at the characters at the same time. Man this novel messes with my emotions way to much, I love the FL but she can be so annoying sometimes.
everything about the book is heartbreaking. the love and duty of Roy and his conflicting emotions hopefully the book has an hea or I'll be heart broken. also I would request the author to edit the sypnosis as it doesn't explain the book as good as it is.
I love adding the amnesia in this story. you could tell from chapter 1 that author is good at writing sweet romance. they balance mystery and cute moments really well so you are always left wanting more. the characters are cute and the FL is charming. the innocent of ML also makes your heart swooned. this is a good story, author!
Hi author, your book is keeping me captive all the time. it's good worth of time. I'm looking forward to it. your concept is getting interested with every passing day. "more ink to your pen, author"
Now I like the dynamics between the main characters. Even more interesting is the fact that the story begins with their rivalry despite the deep feelings they share.
Nice story author..... Keep it up... The story is really nice and fresh...l really like the author's writting... Plz do upload more so that l can read more.... Thank u.....
Well writen story. characters were relatable, the synopsis caught my attention, the mystery in the first chapter was good, this story is a gem. keep up the good work
Hmmm 🤔 Interesting!! Though I don't read this types of story, it's really amazing! I wanna keep reading.... The story is well written and I like the style of writing. Great job author! Keep it up! 😊😊
The story was very easy to follow. I really loved it.The plot was also interesting. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep up the good work. 😊
I honestly think its a good story. The starting was awesome. Every plot is so beautifully designed. I hope i can read the rest of the story soon.
wow! This is really good! The character development is very creative, though you need to update with more charters. But overall, this is pretty good! the story progression and character build-up is great
Shameless author review!! Hello readers!! Hope you like the story. This is a story of loving someone and trying hard to forget. I will try my best to make it more interesting. with some suspense and thriller. This work is totally based on imagination. Stay tuned and support me.