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The part where MC gets transported to many different worlds is a turn off for me though i enjoyed reading it. its quite good if not for that fact and its hard to find decent fanfic in webnovel.
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Mc uses a katana ……………………………..………………………….. Dont mind me just balancing things
Kenapa kebanyakan fanfic yang bagus mempunyai chapter sangat dikit, tapi fanfic yang alur ceritanya berantakan atau rata rata mempunyai chapter banyak
first of all the writing quality it's not good.for story development no orgnality,classic stick to the cast,care about people,help,be a slave.the character design classic trash that thinks they deserve anything.for updates it's stoped hopefully the athour quits webnovel so his lazy,slave trash will not destroy more truth seekers.world background straight up copy.
please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 don't drop it please continue this amazing novel please 🥺🥺🥺🥺
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I have nothing against the author, the story is very illogical and tiresome. It's not something I can like. ................................................................ ................................................................
Thanks to the Author for this wonderful FF. I hope to see more world travelling in the future and I am glad that I give it a try to this. I also want to see more about the romantic development so please update more.
horrible, pure "plot armor"... As the lack of awareness is noticeable, imagine an 8-year-old boy with an earthling mentality starting to train daily doing 100 of everything... Until he faints... Ha... How nice it must be to not have made an effort in your entire life and assume that it's easy to do so... Not to mention the amount of willpower you must have to train until you pass out (At most I reach the point of not being able to move your limbs), just think about the physical damage you do to yourself after that, you'll be at least a week without training, not to mention doing it daily...
Its quite good but the power system isnt built right. he went to tales of demons and gods and came back a god rank but didnt reach the level of a captain. its a tad bit rediculous to over eagerate what the captains are able to do. the fact that he isnt really ranking up in strength despite the advantages given is only proof that the authour doesnt know the power systems well. futhermore the ability to easily use all of the worlds he visits power systems but not the one from which the charicter originates makes no sense especialy when the authour nerfs all of the other power systems into oblivion. all together it makes a book thats quite nice antaganizing to read when not intoxicated or muddy headed.
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The story starts in a fun possibly unique way with a system that at a glance held potential for a truly interesting straight forward adventure until… Readers complained *—* From there the story seemed to shift from a grounded story with a uncertain yet creative future to well fantasy op mc land. Now that’s not to take away from the entertainment value just plot, compared to a omnipotent system that provides everything imagine the awesomeness of robin if he had came out on top with nothing but a purportional training system without perks, magic, talent or skills. That’d be so cool with sheer stats alone!
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I like the concept of the story. It gives me might guy vibes mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
very good still, I'd recommend reading it if you like op mc that works for their strength and go on crazy adventures. it has a good story and has some bad grammar but tis to be expected. has many things that will get the attention of many so I hope anyone else who readers this story liked it as much as I did.
This story could have been alot better if the chapters were longer you could put 2 chapters together
The ff is good but it's not the best. There are grammatical mistakes and the only downer for me is this is supposed to be black clover ff, a world all about magic yet u make the mc manaless (it's ok) but he instead gets something called arts which do things similar to magic (like flight) and I'm like what's the point of being manaless if he has something similar to it (just make the mc have mana and the arts are his book's abilities and it would be the same). The other thing is that he travels to danmachi world. While I'm not against world traveling and the danmachi world, it's the fact that he went there for 'training' when his world is more dangerous than danmachi so there are some good training partners to choose from (which makes this ff purely a black clover ff better tbh) but this is just my opinion in the end
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Mc usa katana .................mmm.............m................mmmm..................................mmm ........ Enserio lo que los haters hacen cuando alguien hace algo que ellos no pueden.
MS uses a katana and that's great. A real warrior uses a sword, a spear, an axe, a knife, brass knuckles, a gun, and a rubber...well, you get the idea.
The part where MC gets transported to many different worlds is a turn off for me though i enjoyed reading it. its quite good if not for that fact and its hard to find decent fanfic in webnovel.
揭示劇透 Hi there is an important poll up in Patre*xn for the future of marvel in template novel. Please see. It is open for public & free
Mc uses a katana ……………………………..………………………….. Dont mind me just balancing things
Kenapa kebanyakan fanfic yang bagus mempunyai chapter sangat dikit, tapi fanfic yang alur ceritanya berantakan atau rata rata mempunyai chapter banyak
first of all the writing quality it's not good.for story development no orgnality,classic stick to the cast,care about people,help,be a slave.the character design classic trash that thinks they deserve anything.for updates it's stoped hopefully the athour quits webnovel so his lazy,slave trash will not destroy more truth seekers.world background straight up copy.
please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 don't drop it please continue this amazing novel please 🥺🥺🥺🥺
дерьмо! дааддададададададсдаддададааддадададададададдадададададададададдадададададададаададададададададададададададдададададададдадада дерьмо! дааддададададададсдаддададааддадададададададдадададададададададдадададададададаададададададададададададададдададададададдадада
#cultivation #xianxian [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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I have nothing against the author, the story is very illogical and tiresome. It's not something I can like. ................................................................ ................................................................
Thanks to the Author for this wonderful FF. I hope to see more world travelling in the future and I am glad that I give it a try to this. I also want to see more about the romantic development so please update more.
horrible, pure "plot armor"... As the lack of awareness is noticeable, imagine an 8-year-old boy with an earthling mentality starting to train daily doing 100 of everything... Until he faints... Ha... How nice it must be to not have made an effort in your entire life and assume that it's easy to do so... Not to mention the amount of willpower you must have to train until you pass out (At most I reach the point of not being able to move your limbs), just think about the physical damage you do to yourself after that, you'll be at least a week without training, not to mention doing it daily...
Its quite good but the power system isnt built right. he went to tales of demons and gods and came back a god rank but didnt reach the level of a captain. its a tad bit rediculous to over eagerate what the captains are able to do. the fact that he isnt really ranking up in strength despite the advantages given is only proof that the authour doesnt know the power systems well. futhermore the ability to easily use all of the worlds he visits power systems but not the one from which the charicter originates makes no sense especialy when the authour nerfs all of the other power systems into oblivion. all together it makes a book thats quite nice antaganizing to read when not intoxicated or muddy headed.
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The story starts in a fun possibly unique way with a system that at a glance held potential for a truly interesting straight forward adventure until… Readers complained *—* From there the story seemed to shift from a grounded story with a uncertain yet creative future to well fantasy op mc land. Now that’s not to take away from the entertainment value just plot, compared to a omnipotent system that provides everything imagine the awesomeness of robin if he had came out on top with nothing but a purportional training system without perks, magic, talent or skills. That’d be so cool with sheer stats alone!
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FIVE STAR by ininininininijijijinijijib July jinibibubjjjubujububububububub bububububububububuhhuhuhu....................................⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐✨✨✨✨⭐✨⭐✨⭐✨⭐✨⭐✨⭐⭐✨⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐✨✨⭐⭐✨⭐⭐⭐✨✨✨✨✨✨ Asriel Hope and Dream
揭示劇透 I like the concept of the story. It gives me might guy vibes mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
very good still, I'd recommend reading it if you like op mc that works for their strength and go on crazy adventures. it has a good story and has some bad grammar but tis to be expected. has many things that will get the attention of many so I hope anyone else who readers this story liked it as much as I did.
This story could have been alot better if the chapters were longer you could put 2 chapters together
The ff is good but it's not the best. There are grammatical mistakes and the only downer for me is this is supposed to be black clover ff, a world all about magic yet u make the mc manaless (it's ok) but he instead gets something called arts which do things similar to magic (like flight) and I'm like what's the point of being manaless if he has something similar to it (just make the mc have mana and the arts are his book's abilities and it would be the same). The other thing is that he travels to danmachi world. While I'm not against world traveling and the danmachi world, it's the fact that he went there for 'training' when his world is more dangerous than danmachi so there are some good training partners to choose from (which makes this ff purely a black clover ff better tbh) but this is just my opinion in the end
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Mc usa katana .................mmm.............m................mmmm..................................mmm ........ Enserio lo que los haters hacen cuando alguien hace algo que ellos no pueden.
MS uses a katana and that's great. A real warrior uses a sword, a spear, an axe, a knife, brass knuckles, a gun, and a rubber...well, you get the idea.