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Will give it 5 stars but...it needs a lot of work, it doesn't give me the feeling that I'm reading a novel. I'm still in the process of reading it and the chapters are very short but there is something about this writing that I can't put my finger on that just makes it seem...incomplete. Maybe someone with better critiquing abilities will be able to spot it but this novel just doesn't feel like a novel, it's somewhere between that and a journal. I plan on continuing to read it for now but these are my thoughts. I recommend readers check it out for themselves. Good luck, author, I don't like leaving bad reviews since I think everyone should give a novel a try before they bash it and especially for new novels, leaving a poor review (star wise), can be detrimental
nice novel. I wish the author didn't make the novel for a fee :D................................................................................
Thanks to the all readers. reading my book and sending power stones to me to upgrade the book even further. Thank you all. It means a lot to me
It goes to a good place this book that I can see without forcing my eyes. I believe with time and more chapters. It would better and more fleshed out.
Okay I have read a lot of book and after a while you can just tell how much potential a book has. Its not always accurate but pretty close. Now this book right here has one of the greatest level of potential I have seen and the Author is really harnessing that potential to a greater degree. I hope he keeps it up. Author on a personal note I love your work keep it up 👍
Interesting plot with cool, intelligent MC. This is definelitely worth reading in my opinion. Also Power system and world building is pretty good.
Another great work from our very own woundy. You can except thrilling and breath-taking adventure, which won't get boring any time soon. Good luck on WSA 2022!
A book involves Starsigns and other things integrated with fantasys elements and system. I believe with time and more chapters. It would be in a good level and position to read.
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Amazing novel! World background is amazing and the mc is amazing. Mc is very smart as to how far i've seen. Everything is fine, the only thing that needs some improving is the writing quality, there are some minor mistakes but thats fine. Keep up the great work, I'll give you 5 stars!
I liked the cover so i said lets give this a try. Was i wrong for doing that:no i enjoy the novel:yes. Its an interesting concept of system base novel, but i also feel that the mc wants to grow further and be independent of it. To bad there arent more chapters yet.
Great book on chapter 28 love it already giving me naruto vibes kinda would love extra chapters other than that this a very good book recommend for everyone.
Will give it 5 stars but...it needs a lot of work, it doesn't give me the feeling that I'm reading a novel. I'm still in the process of reading it and the chapters are very short but there is something about this writing that I can't put my finger on that just makes it seem...incomplete. Maybe someone with better critiquing abilities will be able to spot it but this novel just doesn't feel like a novel, it's somewhere between that and a journal. I plan on continuing to read it for now but these are my thoughts. I recommend readers check it out for themselves. Good luck, author, I don't like leaving bad reviews since I think everyone should give a novel a try before they bash it and especially for new novels, leaving a poor review (star wise), can be detrimental
nice novel. I wish the author didn't make the novel for a fee :D................................................................................
Thanks to the all readers. reading my book and sending power stones to me to upgrade the book even further. Thank you all. It means a lot to me
It goes to a good place this book that I can see without forcing my eyes. I believe with time and more chapters. It would better and more fleshed out.
Okay I have read a lot of book and after a while you can just tell how much potential a book has. Its not always accurate but pretty close. Now this book right here has one of the greatest level of potential I have seen and the Author is really harnessing that potential to a greater degree. I hope he keeps it up. Author on a personal note I love your work keep it up 👍
Interesting plot with cool, intelligent MC. This is definelitely worth reading in my opinion. Also Power system and world building is pretty good.
Another great work from our very own woundy. You can except thrilling and breath-taking adventure, which won't get boring any time soon. Good luck on WSA 2022!
A book involves Starsigns and other things integrated with fantasys elements and system. I believe with time and more chapters. It would be in a good level and position to read.
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Amazing novel! World background is amazing and the mc is amazing. Mc is very smart as to how far i've seen. Everything is fine, the only thing that needs some improving is the writing quality, there are some minor mistakes but thats fine. Keep up the great work, I'll give you 5 stars!
I liked the cover so i said lets give this a try. Was i wrong for doing that:no i enjoy the novel:yes. Its an interesting concept of system base novel, but i also feel that the mc wants to grow further and be independent of it. To bad there arent more chapters yet.
Great book on chapter 28 love it already giving me naruto vibes kinda would love extra chapters other than that this a very good book recommend for everyone.
it's a great novel but pity the author isn't releasing anymore chapters