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11.11% Reborn as naruto with system / Chapter 1: New world [Edited]

章節 1: New world [Edited]

"Now naruto, today I am going to teach you to control the power of nine tails," said a white-haired man.

'HOW this man's face is similar to Jiraiya? wait, did he call me Naruto? Wtf is going on! Maybe it's a dream. Let me close my eyes and everything will be returned to normal' The young man said in his mind.

[Ding Binding strongest system. Binding successful. RECEIVED THE STRONGEST GIFT PACKAGE. Do you want to open the gift package?] [y/n]

Hearing a mechanical sound in his mind Yami was startled, now he is sure that this isn't a dream. But how did he cross as Naruto? Yami trying to remember what happened before,

'I was with my girlfriend, then we make out. I was about to taste those juicy boobs then I fainted. wtf!!! He was frustrated !!! He was a fucking virgin for 20 years and on the eve of losing virginity, he crossed over!!!!!! Fuck, at least crossed me after I taste those boobs.

Seeing Naruto, changing his expression many times in seconds Jiraiya was worried. 'Maybe he was excited for nine tails power ' Jiraiya thoughts.

"Ok, Naruto I know you are excited about learning new things but let me tell you it is very dangerous to control nine tails power."

Listening to Jiraiya's voice Yami comes back to reality. Everything happening so fast Yami don't know what to say, but he has to pretend like naruto.AT least for now.

"Hey pervy sage, today I am feeling unwell, I am going to rest for a bit." saying that Yami walks back to the inn where they are staying.

''OK rest for today. we will continue your training from tomorrow." 'Maybe he was tired from training.'

"Now what should I do? of course go to the bathhouse for watching naked women,ahem I mean collecting material,"Jiraiya shamelessly said to himself then went to the route of suna.

In the room,

'so I crossed into the time when Jiraiya bought naruto for 3 years of training. well, I know all the future plots so it will be helpful to me .wait, I think I am forgetting something' Yami thought.

'I think I heard some mechanical sound, of course it's my cheat. How can I forget something like that.. system you there 'Yami said. A mechanical sound again heard in yami's mind,

"Yes. host. please accept the strongest gift package"

"How do I accept this gift," Yami said .

"Just say accept in your mind"

"Accept"

"Host get devil fruit power pika pika no mi, and observation haki "

"SOME OP rewards from start I guess. system tells me the function you have"

"OK HOST.INTRODUCING SYSTEM FUNCTION

SYSTEM status: Here host can see his progress.

System mall: Can buy anything from system . Host can gift powers, skills, and dojutsu to his family{only ninja world}[This option is currently locked. It will be unlocked after the host completed the first major mission]

System points: system points will be given to the host when completing any main mission or side mission or if you change anything from the story. The system will reward system points. with system points, host can buy anything that available in system malls or upgrade his skills.

Mission house: here host can see any side mission or major mission. For not completing a side mission there will be no punishment. But if the host doesn't complete the major mission it can affect the life of the ninja world's people.

Inventory: you know what it does.

[***Author here: FROM NOW I WLL CALL YAMI NARUTO ]

"HMMMM.SYSTEM is there any mission right now"

Dingggg first major mission: KILL KAGUYA [TIME LIMIT: until host dies; Reward: UNLOCKING GIFT FUNCTION AND GIVE HOST A NEW DOJUTSU EYE UNKNOW TO NINJA WORLD.

[IF HOST SEAL KAGUYA THEN ONLY THE FIRST REWARD WILL BE ISSUED]

"Ok, I think first I have to improve my strength. SYSTEM what happened to the Naruto soul"

"Naruto's soul was sacrificed for the start of system. Host doesn't need to worry no one will know you are not real naruto including sage of six paths and kurama"

"Well that's save some of my time .open system interface

System status:

Name : Naruto uzumaki

Age :13

BLOODLINE :UZUMAKI,REINCARNATION OF ASURA

STRENTH: JONIN[after using summoning technique]

chakra:8000/???????

Agility:125

Dexterity:85

Balance:200

Chakra nature: WIND

NINJUTSU:45/100

taijutsu:50/100

GENJUTSU:00/100

KENJUTSU:OO/100

SHURIKEN AND KUNAI THROWING:50/100

Chakra control:75/100

Change in chakra nature: WIND {00/100}

SKILLS: Rasengan lvl1

Shadow clone [MAX]

Transformation technique[max]

Special skills: PICA PICA NO MI [5%]

Observation Haki [5%]

System points ;00


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章節 2: Training start

'So that sums it up. I have two more years before going back to Konoha. In these two years, I have to do one thing which is training my ass out. First thing I have to select one direction, let's start with developing my devil fruit ability and observation haki.'

Naruto then closes his eyes and try to feel his surrounding with observation haki.

'I can feel surrounding things but within range of 20m. Maybe it's because the lower percentage is shown by the system [of course it's because of that dumbass]. SO I have to practice to increase its mastery. let's concentrate on mastering this.'

Ding, creating a new skill zone[passive LVL max]: when entering the zone host concentration will be 100%. The host can master thing faster when the host's concentration reaches 100%.

"What, you can use this system this way? nice let's try this new skill"

Naruto then cross his leg and sat down trying to use this skill.

[Passive skill zone active host concentration reaches 100%.]

NARUTO can feel his observation range is gradually increasing. He can feel leaves falling from trees, and birds chirping on the branch of trees.

In the blink of an eye 5 hours passed by naruto's observation zone gradually increased from 20m to 1 km.

"SYSTEM status:

Name :Naruto Uzumaki

Age:13

BLOODLINE:UZUMAKI, REINCARNATION OF ASURA

STRENTH:SPECIAL JOIN[after using summoning technique]

chakra:8000/???????(+4000)

Agility:125

Dexterity:85

Balance:200

Chakra nature: WIND

NINJUTSU:45/100

taijutsu:50/100

GENJUTSU:00/100

KENJUTSU:OO/100

SHURIKEN AND KUNAI THROWING:50/100

Chakra control :75/100

Change in chakra nature: WIND {00/100}

SKILLS: Rasengan lvl1

Shadow clone [MAX]

Transformation technique[max]

Zone {passive [max[}

Special skills: PICA PICA NO MI [5%]

Observation Haki [30%][+25%]

System points;00

"Observation Haki reach 30%, new feature unlock host can see 2 sec ahead of time''

'"Why my chakra increased system"

[Host is kuybi jinchuriki ,when zone skill activate concentration reach 100% host unknowingly merge some of kurama chakra with himself, that's why host chakra increased]

"Ok seems interesting"

Grawl...

I forgot to eat , lets's eat something then continue with training.

Jiraya pov:

Today naruto seems to be different.I Can feel something change in him maybe it's better for his future .well let him rest today I will continue his practice from tomorrow.

Naruto pov:

In the room, light particles can be seen. Naruto trying to use his devil fruit, trying to create a ball shape light particles in his hand just the copy of Rasengan. It can also increase the percentage of devil fruit.

The next day,

"Naruto, Today I am going to teach you to control nine tails chakra. so I am going to open the seal."

"PERVY sage I think it's too early for me to control the nine tails. I think, I should improve my taijutsu first'" said naruto.

Hearing these there was a surprising reaction on Jiraiya's face and then he asked "why do you think that?"

Hearing these naruto smiled and said, "In the chunin exam I was aware of that .when I play against Neji. so I think I need to improve my taijutsu."

"Good observation naruto. we will go ahead with taijutsu . Naruto,why do I feel that you are changing?" -ASKED JIRAIYA.

Naruto doesn't know what to say then he remembers a quotes from past . "Pervy sage I am indeed changing because Change is inevitable. Change is constant".

'pretend! you have to pretend to be cool.' [kekeke evil grin]


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