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When i started reading the ist few chapters are making me excited but for some reason i decided to check the last chapter ending to make sure its worth my time and boy! Im glad i did cos the ending is horrible and disappointing as theres no point reading the rest.i dont know if theres a continuation of these story but last chapter is definitely not what readers like me would like to encounter.
Don’ t waste your money reading this book The ending was horrible and made no sense Especially since it’s about trying to cope with trauma and at the end the FL does the samething she was trying to help the ML overcome Honestly very disappointing to read who leaves newborn babies behind for a career that she could of had regardless Do not read this book unless you want to be upset as I am
I would not engage too deeply. Some parts were really good others not so much. I kept going to the end to hope it got better but I was kinda disappointed. If you just want a light numb read feel free. I do believe the author will get better over time.
I just love how you describe everything....amazing, keep it up❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
I love this kind of tropes even though they are common, still, Author did great in executing the plots well. Will read in the future when I have all the time. Great work and good luck!😊
The story is a page turner it will leave you reading for more. There are some errors but it us still readable. Good job, Author and good luck!😊
This is a unique approach story that leaves the readers hanging and wanting for more! truly loves how the MC is not the typical ones I often read in this platform.
The story was good. I wanted to read more of it! I wish author update more and more. I like mc and ml's hotness and coldness. I wish they have a swap!
I like your writing style. Grammatical is on point and I can understand what is happening by only reading once. I am definitely in love with the character of taylor
Storyline✅Plot✅ Description✅ This book is a rare find. Not your usual romance. It's also detailed and interesting. Authors has done a good job. Kudos to you
Nice book by the author. I love the characters and everything. The story development is nice and i can say the author knows what he or she is doing. Great job author. Keep it up.
The opening of chapter one really hooks you; I was immediately interested. I also like how the characters' backgrounds and motives are clearly painted. This work has great potential. Continue to write and polish it!
The story is very interesting, the male lead's name is so unique. I am curious with their love story. Jessie don't refuse Din as your future husband 😄 and Din, you don't hate her ok.
I only read the first chapter but Your writing style is very unique and immersive I also didn’t notice any serious grammatical errors I feel like you could’ve done just a tad bit better at the beginning very confusing for abit. Overall pretty good tho
Author review. ❤️❤️❤️😅 Let me give you all tips that will make you enjoy my book. When reading this book, just imagine it as if you are watching a movie. That way, you will enjoy it more. It is that simple. The characters' names are not complicated and the words are easy to understand. Thank you, readers. ❤️❤️
When i started reading the ist few chapters are making me excited but for some reason i decided to check the last chapter ending to make sure its worth my time and boy! Im glad i did cos the ending is horrible and disappointing as theres no point reading the rest.i dont know if theres a continuation of these story but last chapter is definitely not what readers like me would like to encounter.
Don’ t waste your money reading this book The ending was horrible and made no sense Especially since it’s about trying to cope with trauma and at the end the FL does the samething she was trying to help the ML overcome Honestly very disappointing to read who leaves newborn babies behind for a career that she could of had regardless Do not read this book unless you want to be upset as I am
I would not engage too deeply. Some parts were really good others not so much. I kept going to the end to hope it got better but I was kinda disappointed. If you just want a light numb read feel free. I do believe the author will get better over time.
I just love how you describe everything....amazing, keep it up❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
I love this kind of tropes even though they are common, still, Author did great in executing the plots well. Will read in the future when I have all the time. Great work and good luck!😊
The story is a page turner it will leave you reading for more. There are some errors but it us still readable. Good job, Author and good luck!😊
This is a unique approach story that leaves the readers hanging and wanting for more! truly loves how the MC is not the typical ones I often read in this platform.
The story was good. I wanted to read more of it! I wish author update more and more. I like mc and ml's hotness and coldness. I wish they have a swap!
I like your writing style. Grammatical is on point and I can understand what is happening by only reading once. I am definitely in love with the character of taylor
Storyline✅Plot✅ Description✅ This book is a rare find. Not your usual romance. It's also detailed and interesting. Authors has done a good job. Kudos to you
Nice book by the author. I love the characters and everything. The story development is nice and i can say the author knows what he or she is doing. Great job author. Keep it up.
The opening of chapter one really hooks you; I was immediately interested. I also like how the characters' backgrounds and motives are clearly painted. This work has great potential. Continue to write and polish it!
The story is very interesting, the male lead's name is so unique. I am curious with their love story. Jessie don't refuse Din as your future husband 😄 and Din, you don't hate her ok.
I only read the first chapter but Your writing style is very unique and immersive I also didn’t notice any serious grammatical errors I feel like you could’ve done just a tad bit better at the beginning very confusing for abit. Overall pretty good tho
Author review. ❤️❤️❤️😅 Let me give you all tips that will make you enjoy my book. When reading this book, just imagine it as if you are watching a movie. That way, you will enjoy it more. It is that simple. The characters' names are not complicated and the words are easy to understand. Thank you, readers. ❤️❤️