3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
So far its pretty good. Its a mafia themed novel. I like it because the female character doesn't sound dumb. Usually the female characters all feel super cringe so I can't read them but the main character here sounds normal.
I like the characters because they seem charismatic! The writings not perfect but the story is interesting! Please keep uploading! The story is getting interesting!
I like the little sister in this story. Please write more about her. She is extremely sassy. I like how carefree the main character is. The other main character hasn't showed up much yet.
So far its pretty good. Its a mafia themed novel. I like it because the female character doesn't sound dumb. Usually the female characters all feel super cringe so I can't read them but the main character here sounds normal.
I like the characters because they seem charismatic! The writings not perfect but the story is interesting! Please keep uploading! The story is getting interesting!
I like the little sister in this story. Please write more about her. She is extremely sassy. I like how carefree the main character is. The other main character hasn't showed up much yet.