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Still waiting for you to come back, love the premise of this story and would really appreciate seeing where it would go
great story , need some World building ,as it only started its understandable 😉 and to author stop giving such a long explanation for delayed release and just give a summary .
Hey author, I'm still waiting on this to release I'm excited and eager to see what else you have in store. The premise is interesting and the potential is limitless
It's Similar to MTL Novel "When the Queens Saw My Past Life, They All Burst Into Tears!" Ughh I love that novel a lot so 5 star for me
I don't have many power stones due to being a free to reader, but I hope it can give you motivation to continue the story and prep your content. Take your time but I see a lot of potential in this story and hope it continues, it's been a really good read and I hope to see more backstories and where it will all go
This is the parody you were looking for. I really like the jokes, fight scenes and the intelligence of the enemies. Only compliant is the irregular release scjhedukle
It's actually a really good story and incredibly well built so far. My only gripe is that it's the very definition elongation a story for the pennies. The chapters by themselves barely tell you things, like it's so incredibly slow, but once again, it doesn't detract from the fact that it is a very good story. I would still recommend it and am still reading it.
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Good enogh for me. Liked the comedy and fighting scenes are described very well. I suggest you to give a try. I warn you though, you need some knowledge about cultivation beforehand. Author just assumes you know everything about it already.
i really enjoyed reading the novel. there are many serious and funny moments that make me crack up so much. the reactions are fabulous as well.
The novel is good and I really recommend it. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
Hello there, this is Sharon here, FL Content Editor from Webnovel. This is regarding your Bronze win for WPC296. Kindly reach out to me via Discord at sharonyap#0439 for your rewards. Thanks!
Did you wrote the novel "Overlord of kunoichi is a gamer" ?? If yes why did you deleted?. Somone told me that it was written by you. Did you wrote the novel "Overlord of kunoichi is a gamer" ?? If yes why did you deleted?. Somone told me that it was written by you
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I got same feels i got reading The Reincarnated Villain Makes the Heroines Tearfully Beg for Forgiveness The live broadcast or storytelling in cultivation world
I just binge read it and its hella good. Trust this stranger I just binge read it and its hella good. Trust this stranger I just binge read it and its hella good. Trust this stranger I just binge read it and its hella good. Trust this stranger
is this harem? Chummy....................................................................................................................
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I have been follwing him for a while and I gotta say, this is just another masterpiece from our 'humbl' lord. Even better if he did some actual planning like he said this time
I have cultivated my Shamelessness Dao to the peak level and decided to give myself 5 stars. I think it's good. Try a few chapters and decide for yourselves.
It just started so cant say much but from what Ive seen so far its good. Give it a try imo, its different than the generic stuff and has good writing quality
Yo man good start but i have a important question will be there some lemon scence or no ? :)
It's going nice so far. There is some good amount of meta humor, an unexpected amount of humor (I thought this would be just face smaking adventure xd), some quality face slaps, and wonderful wordbuilding right now. If it keeps going in this quality, it might be one of the best cultivation stories heh. The only problem is, 1 chapter a day updates... It's stable and stuff, but come on man, we need moarr
Still waiting for you to come back, love the premise of this story and would really appreciate seeing where it would go
great story , need some World building ,as it only started its understandable 😉 and to author stop giving such a long explanation for delayed release and just give a summary .
Hey author, I'm still waiting on this to release I'm excited and eager to see what else you have in store. The premise is interesting and the potential is limitless
It's Similar to MTL Novel "When the Queens Saw My Past Life, They All Burst Into Tears!" Ughh I love that novel a lot so 5 star for me
I don't have many power stones due to being a free to reader, but I hope it can give you motivation to continue the story and prep your content. Take your time but I see a lot of potential in this story and hope it continues, it's been a really good read and I hope to see more backstories and where it will all go
This is the parody you were looking for. I really like the jokes, fight scenes and the intelligence of the enemies. Only compliant is the irregular release scjhedukle
It's actually a really good story and incredibly well built so far. My only gripe is that it's the very definition elongation a story for the pennies. The chapters by themselves barely tell you things, like it's so incredibly slow, but once again, it doesn't detract from the fact that it is a very good story. I would still recommend it and am still reading it.
…………………………………………………………..……………………………....…………………………………………………………..……………………………....…………………………………………………………..……………………………....…………………………………………………………..……………………………..…….. I‘m addicted now
Good enogh for me. Liked the comedy and fighting scenes are described very well. I suggest you to give a try. I warn you though, you need some knowledge about cultivation beforehand. Author just assumes you know everything about it already.
i really enjoyed reading the novel. there are many serious and funny moments that make me crack up so much. the reactions are fabulous as well.
The novel is good and I really recommend it. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
Hello there, this is Sharon here, FL Content Editor from Webnovel. This is regarding your Bronze win for WPC296. Kindly reach out to me via Discord at sharonyap#0439 for your rewards. Thanks!
Did you wrote the novel "Overlord of kunoichi is a gamer" ?? If yes why did you deleted?. Somone told me that it was written by you. Did you wrote the novel "Overlord of kunoichi is a gamer" ?? If yes why did you deleted?. Somone told me that it was written by you
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Its fun Xxxxxxxxxxmxmxmcmcmcmcmxmcmcmcmcmcmcmcmcmccmcncncncncncncncncncnccncncncncnncnccndnxndbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbxbcbdbxbxbxbxbxbxbxbxxbxbznznznxncnxnsnsnsnans
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I got same feels i got reading The Reincarnated Villain Makes the Heroines Tearfully Beg for Forgiveness The live broadcast or storytelling in cultivation world
I just binge read it and its hella good. Trust this stranger I just binge read it and its hella good. Trust this stranger I just binge read it and its hella good. Trust this stranger I just binge read it and its hella good. Trust this stranger
is this harem? Chummy....................................................................................................................
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I have been follwing him for a while and I gotta say, this is just another masterpiece from our 'humbl' lord. Even better if he did some actual planning like he said this time
I have cultivated my Shamelessness Dao to the peak level and decided to give myself 5 stars. I think it's good. Try a few chapters and decide for yourselves.
It just started so cant say much but from what Ive seen so far its good. Give it a try imo, its different than the generic stuff and has good writing quality
Yo man good start but i have a important question will be there some lemon scence or no ? :)
It's going nice so far. There is some good amount of meta humor, an unexpected amount of humor (I thought this would be just face smaking adventure xd), some quality face slaps, and wonderful wordbuilding right now. If it keeps going in this quality, it might be one of the best cultivation stories heh. The only problem is, 1 chapter a day updates... It's stable and stuff, but come on man, we need moarr