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The story ending unclear, it’s like the author doesn’t want to continue writing the story, I suggest if you don't want to disappoint readers, it's better if a novel like this doesn't appear
I really enjoyed the story and the character development. The ending was very abrupt and disappointing. I wish that there was a better ending.
I think the story is good. It should be continued ti volume 2 right? please continue the story
I don't know if this is done already but the last chapter is really lacking. .The story is good, the build up is good. Although this is another Mary sue story, this is the first book where an FL has a psychological problem from her part life which makes her interaction with the ML interesting. The ML also was vulnerable with his disability, although a powerful figure in the business world. Too bad the ending is flat and leaves us hanging.. .I hope the author will continue with the ending at least.
This book is NOT completed! Beware. The "ending" is terrible and upsetting. The story is phenomenal and great characters, but it drags getting the characters romantic relationship genuinely started and never reaches that. But the worst thing is the "Finale" chapter. It leaves almost everything hanging and will make you upset and strongly disappointed. Regret wasting my money on this dropped book.
Do not read this book, it’s incomplete. It abruptly ends even though it says finale. Very frustrating wasting hours of read for incomplete book. The story itself I loved but hate to invest in a book with no ending. Urgh!!!!
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I am very disappointed in this book. Thank goodness I skipped to the last chapter before I paid for the whole thing. It ended before the Female lead even got her revenge and you do not know if she and the male lead died or not. Very disappointed
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i like the story but the ending is not clear i wonder if there is a book 2 for this because it's really make me very unsatisfied. it seems that its cut in the meddle, i hope you can give us justice for thi, at least give us a proper ending.
Hey author how can you do this to us readers? It has stopped updating at 620 chapters without continuing the plot and that too it ended at a cliffhanger.How can you do this?😭 Please continue the chapters asap!! please please please ..
how can you abruptly close the book with this you can't be a good author you don't respect the reader views
Good writer but the ending is abrupt which makes me think that this is another partially finished book. Very disappointing. I wasted my time
is it only me Or the ml is really not that good. I just think he is not good I can't explain my feelings but I don't like him I feel like he is being pushy or idk but it's bothering me
I feel cheated. Is this an original or a translation? The book says “complete” but it’s clearly unfinished.
The novel is extremely good to read...but truth to be told the ending gave me an incomplete feeling. it's not because it has a tragic end in the last chapter but in the last few chapters it feels as if many things have been overlooked and skipped...especially the last chapter. I hope the author can add few more chapters.
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If this was the whole story ! I do not recommend don’ waste your money seriously horrible ending!!!!!
The summary is completely unrelated to the book. (I only started reading this book because of the summary and want to give the author a second chance after being disappointed with “My identifies were all exposed after I was pampered by everyone at my grandfather’s house!”)
WARNING!!! MINOR SPOILERS AHEAD!!! Dropping this at chapter 130. I've read a lot of similar plots like this one. Actually, it's very fine for me if some things are a little cliche such as OP FL, secret identities, etc. However, I think the so-called mystery surrounding the FL is poorly executed and not well-written enough. it's just like giving her OP identities one after another just to say she's talented. I mean, there's no sense of mystery or thrill in discovering her hidden vests, instead it just looks cliche. I can't feel any excitement with her hidden identities at all. Also, the faceslapping is not satisfying enough. It's expected for this kind of stories to have a lot of stupid cannon fodders pestering the Fl to serve as her foil but at least make the face slapping interesting and satisfying, for example make sure that they won't appear again, especially if they're just small villains. I'm still in chapter 130 and there's already a lot of stupid fools being arrogant and brainless, I don't know how much more exhausting it'll be when the FL started going to the university. I'm sure that there will be another handful of stupid bunches going after the FL. Also, although I've already accepted the fact that age doesn't matter when having many secret identities in this kind of story, but it still kinda bother me when the author portrays a minor with words such as seductive, sexy, hot, etc. If the author used words like a beauty that can ruin a city to describe the FL's appearance, I'm still fine with it as he/she just want to say that the FL is very beautiful. But the words I've mentioned, I think it's still a little bit inappropriate to describe a 16-year-old girl. If she's already of legal age, I'll be fine with that. Not to mention the ML who went after a 16-year-old girl, albeit not officially. If the setting is in Ancient China, I have no qualms with the FL's young age as it's normal in there for even 14 years old to be engaged, but the setting here is modern. Anyway, aside from age and poor execution of portraying a mysterious FL, I also don't have a first good impression about the FL, thus, I might have a prejudice against her. I don't know if there's a hidden and valid reason but according to the FL, she betrayed the Zhuang family to gain the love of her biological family, then she was betrayed by them. I can't sympathize with her because it's karma. Therefore, I also can't integrate well with the FL's mood when she's out for revenge or when she's protecting the Zhuang family. For the things that she has done to her adopted family in her previous life, I guess it's just made sense even if she dies to protect them. Don't say I'm too ruthless, after all, the consequences of her betrayal also pushed the Zhuang family to death in her previous life. Her so-called protectiveness towards the Zhuang family actually looks atonement for her sins to me. Anyway, the story isn't just engaging for me. As for the translation, pronouns were mistranslated, and some names were mixed up that can lead to confusion.
Why is book shown as completed?? After investing so much money and efforts book is still uncomplete and stopped in the middle.Author please explain..
The story ending unclear, it’s like the author doesn’t want to continue writing the story, I suggest if you don't want to disappoint readers, it's better if a novel like this doesn't appear
I really enjoyed the story and the character development. The ending was very abrupt and disappointing. I wish that there was a better ending.
I think the story is good. It should be continued ti volume 2 right? please continue the story
I don't know if this is done already but the last chapter is really lacking. .The story is good, the build up is good. Although this is another Mary sue story, this is the first book where an FL has a psychological problem from her part life which makes her interaction with the ML interesting. The ML also was vulnerable with his disability, although a powerful figure in the business world. Too bad the ending is flat and leaves us hanging.. .I hope the author will continue with the ending at least.
This book is NOT completed! Beware. The "ending" is terrible and upsetting. The story is phenomenal and great characters, but it drags getting the characters romantic relationship genuinely started and never reaches that. But the worst thing is the "Finale" chapter. It leaves almost everything hanging and will make you upset and strongly disappointed. Regret wasting my money on this dropped book.
Do not read this book, it’s incomplete. It abruptly ends even though it says finale. Very frustrating wasting hours of read for incomplete book. The story itself I loved but hate to invest in a book with no ending. Urgh!!!!
揭示劇透 I am very disappointed in this book. Thank goodness I skipped to the last chapter before I paid for the whole thing. It ended before the Female lead even got her revenge and you do not know if she and the male lead died or not. Very disappointed
揭示劇透 i like the story but the ending is not clear i wonder if there is a book 2 for this because it's really make me very unsatisfied. it seems that its cut in the meddle, i hope you can give us justice for thi, at least give us a proper ending.
Hey author how can you do this to us readers? It has stopped updating at 620 chapters without continuing the plot and that too it ended at a cliffhanger.How can you do this?😭 Please continue the chapters asap!! please please please ..
how can you abruptly close the book with this you can't be a good author you don't respect the reader views
Good writer but the ending is abrupt which makes me think that this is another partially finished book. Very disappointing. I wasted my time
is it only me Or the ml is really not that good. I just think he is not good I can't explain my feelings but I don't like him I feel like he is being pushy or idk but it's bothering me
I feel cheated. Is this an original or a translation? The book says “complete” but it’s clearly unfinished.
The novel is extremely good to read...but truth to be told the ending gave me an incomplete feeling. it's not because it has a tragic end in the last chapter but in the last few chapters it feels as if many things have been overlooked and skipped...especially the last chapter. I hope the author can add few more chapters.
揭示劇透 If this was the whole story ! I do not recommend don’ waste your money seriously horrible ending!!!!!
The summary is completely unrelated to the book. (I only started reading this book because of the summary and want to give the author a second chance after being disappointed with “My identifies were all exposed after I was pampered by everyone at my grandfather’s house!”)
WARNING!!! MINOR SPOILERS AHEAD!!! Dropping this at chapter 130. I've read a lot of similar plots like this one. Actually, it's very fine for me if some things are a little cliche such as OP FL, secret identities, etc. However, I think the so-called mystery surrounding the FL is poorly executed and not well-written enough. it's just like giving her OP identities one after another just to say she's talented. I mean, there's no sense of mystery or thrill in discovering her hidden vests, instead it just looks cliche. I can't feel any excitement with her hidden identities at all. Also, the faceslapping is not satisfying enough. It's expected for this kind of stories to have a lot of stupid cannon fodders pestering the Fl to serve as her foil but at least make the face slapping interesting and satisfying, for example make sure that they won't appear again, especially if they're just small villains. I'm still in chapter 130 and there's already a lot of stupid fools being arrogant and brainless, I don't know how much more exhausting it'll be when the FL started going to the university. I'm sure that there will be another handful of stupid bunches going after the FL. Also, although I've already accepted the fact that age doesn't matter when having many secret identities in this kind of story, but it still kinda bother me when the author portrays a minor with words such as seductive, sexy, hot, etc. If the author used words like a beauty that can ruin a city to describe the FL's appearance, I'm still fine with it as he/she just want to say that the FL is very beautiful. But the words I've mentioned, I think it's still a little bit inappropriate to describe a 16-year-old girl. If she's already of legal age, I'll be fine with that. Not to mention the ML who went after a 16-year-old girl, albeit not officially. If the setting is in Ancient China, I have no qualms with the FL's young age as it's normal in there for even 14 years old to be engaged, but the setting here is modern. Anyway, aside from age and poor execution of portraying a mysterious FL, I also don't have a first good impression about the FL, thus, I might have a prejudice against her. I don't know if there's a hidden and valid reason but according to the FL, she betrayed the Zhuang family to gain the love of her biological family, then she was betrayed by them. I can't sympathize with her because it's karma. Therefore, I also can't integrate well with the FL's mood when she's out for revenge or when she's protecting the Zhuang family. For the things that she has done to her adopted family in her previous life, I guess it's just made sense even if she dies to protect them. Don't say I'm too ruthless, after all, the consequences of her betrayal also pushed the Zhuang family to death in her previous life. Her so-called protectiveness towards the Zhuang family actually looks atonement for her sins to me. Anyway, the story isn't just engaging for me. As for the translation, pronouns were mistranslated, and some names were mixed up that can lead to confusion.
Why is book shown as completed?? After investing so much money and efforts book is still uncomplete and stopped in the middle.Author please explain..
the ending was sooooooooo disappointing and I've spent a lot to finish it