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I see hxh, I will like !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the plot became bad in less than 20 chapters, early romance coupled with early pregnancy then hiding it for a drama nahh im not here to read some useless drama author should also put that in the tag
Finley some HxH FF🤯 ,I have been waiting for this moment since the ancient Times (lies),I didn't really read it yet, since it's the beginning of this story, and I'm not a fan of reading 1 ch per day so let accumulate chapters, at least 50 ch that's better right? I hope it will surprise me, adding another great FF to my library is wonderful thing, and as the first HxH ff I read, I have high expectations on it🥳.
I don’t see many HxH fan fiction and most that are there are dropped so I hope that you complete this and not dropping it. ### # ###################################################################################################################
Unfortunately, I hate stories written like this : " blabla blabla" : MC " blabla blabla" : character B It killed my motivation to read the second chapter.
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Excellent idea, good power build, good grammar, good background settings. All in all, a well-deserved 5-star-novel in my opinion,
I see hxh, I will like !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the plot became bad in less than 20 chapters, early romance coupled with early pregnancy then hiding it for a drama nahh im not here to read some useless drama author should also put that in the tag
Finley some HxH FF🤯 ,I have been waiting for this moment since the ancient Times (lies),I didn't really read it yet, since it's the beginning of this story, and I'm not a fan of reading 1 ch per day so let accumulate chapters, at least 50 ch that's better right? I hope it will surprise me, adding another great FF to my library is wonderful thing, and as the first HxH ff I read, I have high expectations on it🥳.
I don’t see many HxH fan fiction and most that are there are dropped so I hope that you complete this and not dropping it. ### # ###################################################################################################################
Unfortunately, I hate stories written like this : " blabla blabla" : MC " blabla blabla" : character B It killed my motivation to read the second chapter.
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Excellent idea, good power build, good grammar, good background settings. All in all, a well-deserved 5-star-novel in my opinion,