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The puns are funny imho, the setting of the story is passable, and the plot piqued my interest with the fast developments at the first three chapters. It somewhat gives me the vibe of light suspense with a fluttery feeling because of the puns and good detail descriptions.
top notch although i still lack the knowladge about the novel still gud no matter what it is <3 9/10 over all for everything. also nice novel btw
Hmmm.. I can say this is definitely a unique story and the settings make you wanna expect more and more which the author is meticulously delivering. Waiting for more chapters 😊😊😊
I like how the plot goes, bet the Princess gonna got scammed by her 'boyfriend'. The grammar needs some improvement, although I currently now still on chapter 3 I'll give it 8/10. Definitely on my library, cant wait for another chapter!
Hi guys, I hope you enjoy reading Yumeko-chan. I created this novel so that everyone will have good laughter and time reading it. It have a simple plot and the story itself revolves around the main character Princess-Yumeko and her daily sufferings. Special shoutout to my Ravenfalls's readers to follow me here in my new work. Everyone, have a great time reading "When will Yumeko-chan ever stop suffering?"
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The puns are funny imho, the setting of the story is passable, and the plot piqued my interest with the fast developments at the first three chapters. It somewhat gives me the vibe of light suspense with a fluttery feeling because of the puns and good detail descriptions.
top notch although i still lack the knowladge about the novel still gud no matter what it is <3 9/10 over all for everything. also nice novel btw
Hmmm.. I can say this is definitely a unique story and the settings make you wanna expect more and more which the author is meticulously delivering. Waiting for more chapters 😊😊😊
I like how the plot goes, bet the Princess gonna got scammed by her 'boyfriend'. The grammar needs some improvement, although I currently now still on chapter 3 I'll give it 8/10. Definitely on my library, cant wait for another chapter!
Hi guys, I hope you enjoy reading Yumeko-chan. I created this novel so that everyone will have good laughter and time reading it. It have a simple plot and the story itself revolves around the main character Princess-Yumeko and her daily sufferings. Special shoutout to my Ravenfalls's readers to follow me here in my new work. Everyone, have a great time reading "When will Yumeko-chan ever stop suffering?"
Type your review here. Please write your review as detailed as you can. Your reviews would be very important to the story (at least 140 characters)