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Been waiting for 4 months now. . . Please update author. I really like this story... 😢🙏🏻 Update or I will track you down.. (Just kidding. Hope you are doing well.)
Please update pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
it is good story but it is copied from other novel name - please i don't want to fall in love with my sect master! d
this has a been one of the more entertaining yandere novels I have read in a while.plz update soon
Why am I laughing 😂😂😂😂😂 good start I am liking this protagonist more and more 😂😂😂😂😂😂 I feel so bad for so reason 😂😂😂😂 2 chapters and I am laughing crazily 😂😂😂😂
Me gusta mucho lo malo es que no ha actualizado y creo que ya no lo ara pero es muy buena para mí a mí me gusta mucho y espero que vuelva a escribir y le deseo buena suerte y salud al escritor
Esta historia es patética, con un Mc demasiado débil, impulsivo, tonto. marica, en resumen de sentimientos débiles es muy frágil y no puede ver mas allá de todas las posibilidades que puede reunir a su favor lo ciegan las emociones, típica historia de mc, retrasado y asustadizo.
Is this one dropped or will it come back I enjoy it a lot and it’s a great story so far?
I hope you update soon this one is so good so far I want to see how it turns out!
It's a good story but please update this story fast ☺️........................................................................................
Amazing work! This is one of these super enjoyable novels here imo 🙂. I don't dare say that this is a masterpiece, but you will definitely not regret giving this novel a chance.
It's a really good novel and plus yanderes, it made it perfect. It's just a pity that now it's premium, [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
good premise and interesting take on reincarnation and systems and the story itself isn't bad. I quite liked it. however there is way too many contradictions that ruin immersion and frustrate readers immensely. mainly me so I will wait for it to be edited.
I love this novel so please don't drop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Maybe if this had a different system and wasn't a cultivation world it would be fine. Scatter ft ft cert free exe refer defect f Skksksks
The story was insanely liked as well as the despair of mc and his progress, the author please update the novel much more often 57 chapters were not enough for me.
I hope many authors are inspired to make MCs like ff this.... Because most of them often make typical Japanese beta MCs that are annoying. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
The story is getting interesting. The author did a great job. Keep up the good work. I recommend giving this book a read. It's great. Need more chapters as soon as possible.
All I can say is that it does not deserve anything less than 5 Star Rating. Character development, story building, mc mentality | all points are very good. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ One of the best is mc's thinking and nature. Well I never personally liked over kind protagonist. Good Job Author-san😋💯
SO. after reading your synopsis... is the system, a slavery system? It seems that he is forced to system quests or he dies[img=exp][img=exp]
read 25 chapters. I've always loved and been a fan of yandere novels so it wasn't a big surprise to check this one out. in addition the mc just dumped his fiance and now anticipating how she's gonna regret it is oddly satisfying. anyways it was worth my time reading. keep working hard author sama and don't drop this masterpiece.
It's exactly what you expect and well written. I really hope this continues and I will try to support it. My only thing is that I hope the mc doesn't keep being extremely salty at his past and can move on in the future.
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What drew my attention to this novel? The Yande-*cough* definitely the System tag, always been a big system enjoyer. The story is very promising and doesn't have anything to complain about, yet. I'm gonna keep following this novel to hopefully see it prosper.
I didn't expect that story will be like this. In other words, I enjoy it. [img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp] Keep on your writing to make your readers enjoy your story. There's nothing to say more.
Great novel, but the author can publish more chapters I'm literally waiting a day to get just one chapter! Otherwise it's awesome, and I'm waiting for Yandere!
This is my second original novel, I will be improving the content of the chapters as I write the novel. The more active you are, the more chapters I will publish. I hope you enjoy it!
Been waiting for 4 months now. . . Please update author. I really like this story... 😢🙏🏻 Update or I will track you down.. (Just kidding. Hope you are doing well.)
Please update pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
it is good story but it is copied from other novel name - please i don't want to fall in love with my sect master! d
this has a been one of the more entertaining yandere novels I have read in a while.plz update soon
Why am I laughing 😂😂😂😂😂 good start I am liking this protagonist more and more 😂😂😂😂😂😂 I feel so bad for so reason 😂😂😂😂 2 chapters and I am laughing crazily 😂😂😂😂
Me gusta mucho lo malo es que no ha actualizado y creo que ya no lo ara pero es muy buena para mí a mí me gusta mucho y espero que vuelva a escribir y le deseo buena suerte y salud al escritor
Esta historia es patética, con un Mc demasiado débil, impulsivo, tonto. marica, en resumen de sentimientos débiles es muy frágil y no puede ver mas allá de todas las posibilidades que puede reunir a su favor lo ciegan las emociones, típica historia de mc, retrasado y asustadizo.
Is this one dropped or will it come back I enjoy it a lot and it’s a great story so far?
I hope you update soon this one is so good so far I want to see how it turns out!
It's a good story but please update this story fast ☺️........................................................................................
Amazing work! This is one of these super enjoyable novels here imo 🙂. I don't dare say that this is a masterpiece, but you will definitely not regret giving this novel a chance.
It's a really good novel and plus yanderes, it made it perfect. It's just a pity that now it's premium, [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
good premise and interesting take on reincarnation and systems and the story itself isn't bad. I quite liked it. however there is way too many contradictions that ruin immersion and frustrate readers immensely. mainly me so I will wait for it to be edited.
I love this novel so please don't drop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Maybe if this had a different system and wasn't a cultivation world it would be fine. Scatter ft ft cert free exe refer defect f Skksksks
The story was insanely liked as well as the despair of mc and his progress, the author please update the novel much more often 57 chapters were not enough for me.
I hope many authors are inspired to make MCs like ff this.... Because most of them often make typical Japanese beta MCs that are annoying. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
The story is getting interesting. The author did a great job. Keep up the good work. I recommend giving this book a read. It's great. Need more chapters as soon as possible.
All I can say is that it does not deserve anything less than 5 Star Rating. Character development, story building, mc mentality | all points are very good. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ One of the best is mc's thinking and nature. Well I never personally liked over kind protagonist. Good Job Author-san😋💯
SO. after reading your synopsis... is the system, a slavery system? It seems that he is forced to system quests or he dies[img=exp][img=exp]
read 25 chapters. I've always loved and been a fan of yandere novels so it wasn't a big surprise to check this one out. in addition the mc just dumped his fiance and now anticipating how she's gonna regret it is oddly satisfying. anyways it was worth my time reading. keep working hard author sama and don't drop this masterpiece.
It's exactly what you expect and well written. I really hope this continues and I will try to support it. My only thing is that I hope the mc doesn't keep being extremely salty at his past and can move on in the future.
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What drew my attention to this novel? The Yande-*cough* definitely the System tag, always been a big system enjoyer. The story is very promising and doesn't have anything to complain about, yet. I'm gonna keep following this novel to hopefully see it prosper.
I didn't expect that story will be like this. In other words, I enjoy it. [img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp] Keep on your writing to make your readers enjoy your story. There's nothing to say more.
Great novel, but the author can publish more chapters I'm literally waiting a day to get just one chapter! Otherwise it's awesome, and I'm waiting for Yandere!
This is my second original novel, I will be improving the content of the chapters as I write the novel. The more active you are, the more chapters I will publish. I hope you enjoy it!