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Bilal_Arshad

The story is overall good the only problem I have is too many cheats it would have been better to take 1 or 2 cheats and focus on them but he has Strong Mutation, Ver strong quirk which he masters too quickly, Very high IQ, resource realm that contains materials and DNAs, ninja adoptive parents( and many serums).

2mth
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Elon_Husk

Everything was going great man and the love interest being fuyumi i always wanted that but author didn't show a lot of their relationship. Now that it's on hiatus there is 3 possibilities as to why, 1 author forgot about this ff, 2 author forgot his account, 3 author dead.

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6mth
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cardo_sinclair

Mc be hiding his powers and holding back way too much it’s frustrating

7mth
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some_random_person_7621

So far so good, I like the idea, might've been copied from another story but he went through with it, so far it's a nice change of pace from other stories that have plot armor, he has hacks but not bc of plot armor, just that it's op hax

2yr
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Digital_Ink

It’s an amazing story, different power given to the Mac than what we see in all of the other fan fics around. Don’t let the beginning discourage you, I know at first it sound like the MC gets some BS & OP powers but it’ actually a great story. The MC takes a different route than other stories. Honestly it’s refreshing to see this creative change. I also love the quick updates, it’s two chapters a day, and I still wish I could get more.

2yr
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DaoistIBZaii

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2yr
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Ayslan_Gustavo

Very good, thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks

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Paradox2000

Writing Quality: So far the writing quality is good, I mostly keeps my expectations low for writing quality in fanfics but this one is still better than most fanfics out there. Updates: So far the updates are stable and good, I hope the author makes this consistency Story Development: The story develops very well, from character interactions to the power system, I can't really find some big flaws in this fanfic considering it as a fanfic. Protagonist: Well personally I like this protagonist a lot, most fanfics either makes a ruthless edgelord of a protagonist or a harem seeking horney mfs. The MC of this novel seems more human, he doesn't have some top tier character development but his character from the beginning is well shaped. He loves his family, have enemies, loves and hates while making decisions that makes his less childish but also something someone of his age would do. Side Characters: Since it's a fanfic there isn't much to say about the side characters but most fanfics I've read mostly butcher the personalities of the side characters but this fanfic blends the OC MC into the world perfectly. One thing that I would like to highlight a scene when Momo came to pick up MC for school in her car and MC's sister asked Momo if she likes him for which Momo replied with a straight "No", I like this instance personally because unlike in other fanfics girls would probably blush question their feelings and especially for Momo because most MHA fanfics used the past of Momo having no friends as an excuse to make her dumb and not realize the difference between the feelings of love and friendship however in this fanfic that particular instance shows that Momo picks the MC up for school because she considers him a friend while also being mature enough to differentiate between the feelings of love and friendship and her deciding who she wants to be with. My issues with it: I don't have some major issues with this fanfic but I'm gonna list some of them 1. I want the novel to add some of it's own plot to it instead of following the entire plot of MHA 2. I wanted the MC to use his resource realm more, he mostly uses it to extract DNAs, I wants him to be more creative with it and have some new abilities for him or pull out a noble phantasm or something. 3. I need some fight scenes for Hana and I also need some interactions between Hana and her friends who left her because she didn't had any quirk.

2yr
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KingBing96

This story is really great. I started reading it as a way to pass time but man this story sucked me in and is really good. Wish there were way more chapters so I can keep binge reading it.

2yr
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ammie_kaneki

LOVE the idea and author is really good write and i love this fanfic so,. much that i'm waiting for notification of new chapter.......................

2yr
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EddyV
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Love the way author write the story. Hope MC will not take a harem and stick with Fuyumi. Because from what I can see, Momo is a possibility, but don't give in to temptations.

2yr
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Monkey_is_hungry

This is probably gonna be one of my faforite fanfic beside the "that time I got reincarnated with a cheat" ................................................................................................................................

2yr
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Spc_Monk

alright, quick information for you guys that will read this : 1. mc reincarnate but lost his personal memories 2. multiverse (world hopping)

2yr
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Themasterblaster

Love the writing. You could use an editor to edit the mistakes in the chapters. Mostly are spelling mistakes but other than that it's good. I like how you use his powers in a variety way.

2yr
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FunWriter

Cool story. keep up the updating stability then we're cool. By the way thanks for not making it an another harem story. 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇

2yr
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TheRedPlanetMars

The way that the resource realm is used is cool. But just make the resources that make him omnipotent blocked till he's dead in this story. So you could have a good story with a man with limited powers.

2yr
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BenTennyson

I like your writing style. instead of skipping the child hood entirely, you did it with two years interval until he manifested his quirk. And add some attacks from the Naruto.

2yr
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Male_storm

Love the writing. I liked till I have read, and that's at the 16th chapter. Hope you don't drop this one. And also the birth parents, can you just kill them off? 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

2yr
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Ed_Shadow

Take the Angel and rise him to the glory he deserves. Love the writing by the way and you rushed in getting the romance to happen. 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

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2yr
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Primus_Monarch

Thanks for taking it another level up until now. Hope you won't drop this like I did. 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇

2yr
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HatefulRaijin

It's pretty nice the pace is fine imo the only problem I have is that the confession with fuyumi was too fast but ig the progress was just under the time skip. About the resource realm, tho does it have everything resource imaginable? I'm guessing it does cause he gets his DNA from there cause if so there's so much op stuff in there that will help him get to his level easily like the stuff from cultivation novels and stat-increasing stuff from games, Also considering this is a mha fanfic that world has a pretty low power sealing sure there are some conflicts but it could get resolved easily with like city buster strength and he has the resource realm to help himself power up so will he idk go to other worlds after resolving most of the conflicts in mha or will you just end it?

2yr
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_VOIDLESS_

please do something with the resource realm it has so much potential that if the mc wanted to be a god he would have done that in the first 3min he reincarnated for example Dc tenth metal or the celestialsapien dna ben 10 or superman dna etc he can be a god by now

2yr
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EddyV
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I've only read till the seventh eight chapter. and i like the background of character and his powers. Hope you will continue this fic and finish it in the right way. I like the love intrest by the way

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2yr
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Bilal_Arshad

The story is overall good the only problem I have is too many cheats it would have been better to take 1 or 2 cheats and focus on them but he has Strong Mutation, Ver strong quirk which he masters too quickly, Very high IQ, resource realm that contains materials and DNAs, ninja adoptive parents( and many serums).

2mth
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Elon_Husk

Everything was going great man and the love interest being fuyumi i always wanted that but author didn't show a lot of their relationship. Now that it's on hiatus there is 3 possibilities as to why, 1 author forgot about this ff, 2 author forgot his account, 3 author dead.

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6mth
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cardo_sinclair

Mc be hiding his powers and holding back way too much it’s frustrating

7mth
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some_random_person_7621

So far so good, I like the idea, might've been copied from another story but he went through with it, so far it's a nice change of pace from other stories that have plot armor, he has hacks but not bc of plot armor, just that it's op hax

2yr
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Digital_Ink

It’s an amazing story, different power given to the Mac than what we see in all of the other fan fics around. Don’t let the beginning discourage you, I know at first it sound like the MC gets some BS & OP powers but it’ actually a great story. The MC takes a different route than other stories. Honestly it’s refreshing to see this creative change. I also love the quick updates, it’s two chapters a day, and I still wish I could get more.

2yr
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DaoistIBZaii

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2yr
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Ayslan_Gustavo

Very good, thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks

2yr
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Paradox2000

Writing Quality: So far the writing quality is good, I mostly keeps my expectations low for writing quality in fanfics but this one is still better than most fanfics out there. Updates: So far the updates are stable and good, I hope the author makes this consistency Story Development: The story develops very well, from character interactions to the power system, I can't really find some big flaws in this fanfic considering it as a fanfic. Protagonist: Well personally I like this protagonist a lot, most fanfics either makes a ruthless edgelord of a protagonist or a harem seeking horney mfs. The MC of this novel seems more human, he doesn't have some top tier character development but his character from the beginning is well shaped. He loves his family, have enemies, loves and hates while making decisions that makes his less childish but also something someone of his age would do. Side Characters: Since it's a fanfic there isn't much to say about the side characters but most fanfics I've read mostly butcher the personalities of the side characters but this fanfic blends the OC MC into the world perfectly. One thing that I would like to highlight a scene when Momo came to pick up MC for school in her car and MC's sister asked Momo if she likes him for which Momo replied with a straight "No", I like this instance personally because unlike in other fanfics girls would probably blush question their feelings and especially for Momo because most MHA fanfics used the past of Momo having no friends as an excuse to make her dumb and not realize the difference between the feelings of love and friendship however in this fanfic that particular instance shows that Momo picks the MC up for school because she considers him a friend while also being mature enough to differentiate between the feelings of love and friendship and her deciding who she wants to be with. My issues with it: I don't have some major issues with this fanfic but I'm gonna list some of them 1. I want the novel to add some of it's own plot to it instead of following the entire plot of MHA 2. I wanted the MC to use his resource realm more, he mostly uses it to extract DNAs, I wants him to be more creative with it and have some new abilities for him or pull out a noble phantasm or something. 3. I need some fight scenes for Hana and I also need some interactions between Hana and her friends who left her because she didn't had any quirk.

2yr
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KingBing96

This story is really great. I started reading it as a way to pass time but man this story sucked me in and is really good. Wish there were way more chapters so I can keep binge reading it.

2yr
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ammie_kaneki

LOVE the idea and author is really good write and i love this fanfic so,. much that i'm waiting for notification of new chapter.......................

2yr
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EddyV
LV 3 Badge

Love the way author write the story. Hope MC will not take a harem and stick with Fuyumi. Because from what I can see, Momo is a possibility, but don't give in to temptations.

2yr
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Monkey_is_hungry

This is probably gonna be one of my faforite fanfic beside the "that time I got reincarnated with a cheat" ................................................................................................................................

2yr
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Spc_Monk

alright, quick information for you guys that will read this : 1. mc reincarnate but lost his personal memories 2. multiverse (world hopping)

2yr
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Themasterblaster

Love the writing. You could use an editor to edit the mistakes in the chapters. Mostly are spelling mistakes but other than that it's good. I like how you use his powers in a variety way.

2yr
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FunWriter

Cool story. keep up the updating stability then we're cool. By the way thanks for not making it an another harem story. 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇

2yr
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TheRedPlanetMars

The way that the resource realm is used is cool. But just make the resources that make him omnipotent blocked till he's dead in this story. So you could have a good story with a man with limited powers.

2yr
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BenTennyson

I like your writing style. instead of skipping the child hood entirely, you did it with two years interval until he manifested his quirk. And add some attacks from the Naruto.

2yr
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Male_storm

Love the writing. I liked till I have read, and that's at the 16th chapter. Hope you don't drop this one. And also the birth parents, can you just kill them off? 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

2yr
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Ed_Shadow

Take the Angel and rise him to the glory he deserves. Love the writing by the way and you rushed in getting the romance to happen. 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

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2yr
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Primus_Monarch

Thanks for taking it another level up until now. Hope you won't drop this like I did. 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇

2yr
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HatefulRaijin

It's pretty nice the pace is fine imo the only problem I have is that the confession with fuyumi was too fast but ig the progress was just under the time skip. About the resource realm, tho does it have everything resource imaginable? I'm guessing it does cause he gets his DNA from there cause if so there's so much op stuff in there that will help him get to his level easily like the stuff from cultivation novels and stat-increasing stuff from games, Also considering this is a mha fanfic that world has a pretty low power sealing sure there are some conflicts but it could get resolved easily with like city buster strength and he has the resource realm to help himself power up so will he idk go to other worlds after resolving most of the conflicts in mha or will you just end it?

2yr
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_VOIDLESS_

please do something with the resource realm it has so much potential that if the mc wanted to be a god he would have done that in the first 3min he reincarnated for example Dc tenth metal or the celestialsapien dna ben 10 or superman dna etc he can be a god by now

2yr
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EddyV
LV 3 Badge

I've only read till the seventh eight chapter. and i like the background of character and his powers. Hope you will continue this fic and finish it in the right way. I like the love intrest by the way

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2yr
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