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Excellent plotline and very unique. It really give you a fresh and unique plot about HP. Probably my only problem is having few chapters and update stability, but overall excellent novel and I really recommend this.
Great Concept and World Building... This Unique way of Pushing System into the storyline is quite intriguing ... I wish you would continue this story..
This is an excellent story. I Like how you used a non reincarnated main character. I also like how he isn’t overpowered nor from a repeated wizarding family used in other fanfics. I also like how his growth rate is realistic.
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I have greatly enjoyed reading this story so far and look forward to more chapters in the future. As it is now I believe that this story is probably one of the better written stories on this site and will continue to be so in the future. I have great hopes for this story and will continue to follow its development.
😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲 Ooh my!!! This is a refreshing take on the system and cultivation theme of fanfiction and I truly enjoyed what you have done with your take on it. I just started this book 📖 today and I have not stop 🛑 reading it yet! Keep up the good 👍 work! I look forward to what you do next.
This is truly one of the best harry potter fanfics I've read. 100% READ!!! the MC is not reincarnated but is given a book that was written by merlin and is Smart, Hardworking, and is ambitious and want to be the greatest wizard in the warldo!!! It has great potential, NEEDS MORE CHAPTERS!!!!
quite the good story about an OC without Reinkarnation i hope this will not be an oneshot and this story will be continued, it would be quite the shame if such a good start will not get an equally good ending.
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Really good fanfic. I am enjoying it a lot. I highly recommend it to all H.P. fanfic readers. Looking forward to reading more chapters Thank you very much for your work Mr/Ms Author.
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I hope you don't drop the book. The concept is nice so is the environment setting.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Pretty good fic after a long amount of time.....not that great fan of a harry potter fanfics but this one is different, I can bet.I will definitely reccomend you this one.
It's my first time seeing a fan fic for the Ollivanders. I have read many Fan fictions yet never came across one where it's about the Ollivanders. well I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters. good luck
It's a good start and the writing structure is good too. I'm looking forward to more adventure and excitement coming from this book. I hope you do good in the coming chapters .I cannot wait for the next one✨ keep up the good work ☺️
t's a good start and the writing structure is good too. I'm looking forward to more adventure and excitement coming from this book. It's a shame you didn't continue this story because it had great potential.
Excellent plotline and very unique. It really give you a fresh and unique plot about HP. Probably my only problem is having few chapters and update stability, but overall excellent novel and I really recommend this.
Great Concept and World Building... This Unique way of Pushing System into the storyline is quite intriguing ... I wish you would continue this story..
This is an excellent story. I Like how you used a non reincarnated main character. I also like how he isn’t overpowered nor from a repeated wizarding family used in other fanfics. I also like how his growth rate is realistic.
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I have greatly enjoyed reading this story so far and look forward to more chapters in the future. As it is now I believe that this story is probably one of the better written stories on this site and will continue to be so in the future. I have great hopes for this story and will continue to follow its development.
😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲😳😲 Ooh my!!! This is a refreshing take on the system and cultivation theme of fanfiction and I truly enjoyed what you have done with your take on it. I just started this book 📖 today and I have not stop 🛑 reading it yet! Keep up the good 👍 work! I look forward to what you do next.
This is truly one of the best harry potter fanfics I've read. 100% READ!!! the MC is not reincarnated but is given a book that was written by merlin and is Smart, Hardworking, and is ambitious and want to be the greatest wizard in the warldo!!! It has great potential, NEEDS MORE CHAPTERS!!!!
quite the good story about an OC without Reinkarnation i hope this will not be an oneshot and this story will be continued, it would be quite the shame if such a good start will not get an equally good ending.
until now it's really interesting. Keep going [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Really good fanfic. I am enjoying it a lot. I highly recommend it to all H.P. fanfic readers. Looking forward to reading more chapters Thank you very much for your work Mr/Ms Author.
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揭示劇透 I hope you don't drop the book. The concept is nice so is the environment setting.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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揭示劇透 Pretty good fic after a long amount of time.....not that great fan of a harry potter fanfics but this one is different, I can bet.I will definitely reccomend you this one.
It's my first time seeing a fan fic for the Ollivanders. I have read many Fan fictions yet never came across one where it's about the Ollivanders. well I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters. good luck
It's a good start and the writing structure is good too. I'm looking forward to more adventure and excitement coming from this book. I hope you do good in the coming chapters .I cannot wait for the next one✨ keep up the good work ☺️
t's a good start and the writing structure is good too. I'm looking forward to more adventure and excitement coming from this book. It's a shame you didn't continue this story because it had great potential.