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Yo Author-san ive had a brilliant time reading mathews story (leaving It where it was was a bit if a Pain but whatever i guess ) cant wait to read this novel Thank you :)
(C91) the mc seems almost too childish despite the harsh conditions he was in and even the goal seems so weak? something he can achieve once he evolves. Also the story it self the development is so how would you say it? boring? slow? like its so incredibly slow that it takes like 2-3 chapters to just explain how tasty a soul is and the fights oml i believe the fights his has arent worth the 3 or so or even more chapters on em since they arent that significant imo to have that much focus on to the point that i can just skip the fight and get told what happened in the chapter after the fight and i miss out on nothing. Also his bloodline power you might as well say he has a better version of the mcs power in solo levelling. As well his use of the dark element is boring and not at all 'smart' since darkness imo is either like how most stories show it as either a necromancy type of element or an assassin type of element with silent and quick qualities, in this its just show to be a binding and kinda just useless element. -- -- -- But despite all that its a good premise that mixes the plot of becoming a demon and there being different levels of realms that lower you go more stronger overall the demons are and the quality of nether and having the way of conquering planets is very interesting and probably the thing that intrigues me the most since it would be funny to see such a childish mc conquer a world. --
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Mediocre is the best way to describe everything, not bad but not good either. -Demons don't feel demonic in any way beyond appearance. -MC is just kindoff doing stuff without motivation or any compelling traits. -General origin plot/world is the same as many of other novels in this site but doesn't actually make as much sense in context as humanity isn't in desperate need. -Supporting characters are forgettable.
It's good but I think it can be better if the story is a bit fast It's a little slow for my taste or the chapters could be a bit longer Whatever works
well the story is good but alas the mc makes me quite annoyed so I'm not going to continue I read to have fun not to get annoyed 😃 ............
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Yo Author-san ive had a brilliant time reading mathews story (leaving It where it was was a bit if a Pain but whatever i guess ) cant wait to read this novel Thank you :)
(C91) the mc seems almost too childish despite the harsh conditions he was in and even the goal seems so weak? something he can achieve once he evolves. Also the story it self the development is so how would you say it? boring? slow? like its so incredibly slow that it takes like 2-3 chapters to just explain how tasty a soul is and the fights oml i believe the fights his has arent worth the 3 or so or even more chapters on em since they arent that significant imo to have that much focus on to the point that i can just skip the fight and get told what happened in the chapter after the fight and i miss out on nothing. Also his bloodline power you might as well say he has a better version of the mcs power in solo levelling. As well his use of the dark element is boring and not at all 'smart' since darkness imo is either like how most stories show it as either a necromancy type of element or an assassin type of element with silent and quick qualities, in this its just show to be a binding and kinda just useless element. -- -- -- But despite all that its a good premise that mixes the plot of becoming a demon and there being different levels of realms that lower you go more stronger overall the demons are and the quality of nether and having the way of conquering planets is very interesting and probably the thing that intrigues me the most since it would be funny to see such a childish mc conquer a world. --
揭示劇透 Mediocre is the best way to describe everything, not bad but not good either. -Demons don't feel demonic in any way beyond appearance. -MC is just kindoff doing stuff without motivation or any compelling traits. -General origin plot/world is the same as many of other novels in this site but doesn't actually make as much sense in context as humanity isn't in desperate need. -Supporting characters are forgettable.
It's good but I think it can be better if the story is a bit fast It's a little slow for my taste or the chapters could be a bit longer Whatever works
well the story is good but alas the mc makes me quite annoyed so I'm not going to continue I read to have fun not to get annoyed 😃 ............
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The novel is terrible. Continue to read if you like someone that’s a simp