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This review is for new readers afraid to read this novel because of slow progress in realm. The slow progress in realms is manly because the power-system is completely training focused rather than resource-based so training can't be time-skipped. Usually in cultivation novels Authors can time-skip 500+ years of grinding since all MC needs to do is cultivate, gather qi in dantain and progress, so the training arc can be summarized in one line like "MC ate ying-yang pill and cultivated for 500 years and broke through." But this novel is complete science based martial novel where the only way to progress is by training and creating new martial arts unique to your martial path. And each new technique needs some source of inspiration, a training model with planning, followed by an elaborate training arc. And training-arcs in this novel are the BEST. The novel is slow but not lazy, author could had definitely time-skipped training arcs but then the technique would be way less impactful to readers.
2nd Review of Book, Continues to be one of the most gripping stories I've read. Everyone has their own taste in novels but not all authors are created equal. Too often chapters include repetitive info like a half page rehash of stats or whatever, ppl trying to fill the pages. Lord_Streak continually advances the storyline. He doesn't repeat himself or spend excessive space on irrelevant info. Last Point - The amount of material he's pumping out while maintaining a level of quality must be difficult. This guy is Hella creative.
While there are minor grammarical errors and sometimes the word used is out of context with the sentence. Amazing Read, Great World Building, Creative Characters, I'm totally immersed everytime I'm reading. I can build a pretty clear mental image when reading and the flow seems organic. Glad Author decided to share this work with us.
I hope Rui dies post this novel and gets reborn in new world like Tang San gets reborn in Dolou Dalu. Please consider this idea Mr. @Lord_Streak
I have absolutely loved this book and it is fantastic, it is my daily read, and I can’t wait to see where it goes
i am currently on 2264.The novel was great till the master breakthrough but after that i must say the character development took a downturn. the main character through portrayed as smart is shown as extremely dumb at times. I just don’t get it how the character development is progressing.The novel mentions how breaking through higher levels is difficult and sure for MC it’s difficult but for his friend and allies that not true. This novel story is degrading because of this nonsense. i am dropping this novel, i hope you don’t waste your time with this as i have
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A very good work done. Background, characterization, and development or story line are wow.
I really want to like this novel, I really do. The author however spends a large chunk of chapters explaining things instead of letting the story play out so the chapter payoff feels much to be desired. While there are a ton of chapters the story takes forever to unravel.
I first drop this novel 10 or less chapter in , after looking at some bad review ... but THANK GOD i came back ! what a incredible story with creative and scientifique reference , without too much complexe thing that dont make any sense . love the mc , love the side character, ennemy are well tought the background his insane i cant wait to see what the futur will look like ! A MASTERPIECE in my opinion ! and thank you for keeping up with a good gremmar ( probably did more mistake in this comment than the whole novel )
I'm barely 30? chapters in but this dude not only inflates the story with irrelevant chatter of side characters but the mc will go on tangents that go nowhere about the same chatter. And then a chapter later you will get what you were actually were supposed to learn from that chatter with MC correcting his thoughts knowing that what was said earlier was misinterpreted a d then you have his friends chiming in calling him dumb for thinking it was how he first thought it was, and then he breaks it down with modern science and it turns out it wasn't science it's just how this world works. This is a first for me, I just stopped halfway through a chapter and just thought that I don't want to read this. 2000+ chapters of filler words. Usually when plot goes out the window I start skimming and the drop, with this I didn't even get to skimming. You have characters with zero educational background going toe to toe with this worlds top nobility and they somehow are able to carry the argument. The characters don't feel unique, it just feels like the author is narrating the story because all the characters talk the same way, as in they all sound like they are defending the sport thesis MC wrote about martial arts in this world. If you make a roast and the ends are burnt but the center is good, you rate the whole roast not just the center, and this story is made in such a way that I can't even dig into just the center by skimming it, because he made sure to vomit enough words over it that it's impossible to skim.
I'm at chapter 990 now and can tell you this is one of the best novel I ever read. I find myself not liking romances and cant really finish those stories. But with this You see he doesnt deviate from his path. I heard he is part of the royal family. I can see he is fit to be a leader and would be perfect as prince and then challenge other empires
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I feel like this game have no emotion, I tried my best but it's just the main character talking to himself. starting on that fodder squirrel guard, that little fei girl or during the weird interaction on his roommate
This starts off strong but gets boring relatively quickly. It falls into the common tropes of the protagonist becoming a boring machine that vaguely tells us that they’re doing the same thing as everyone else but somehow better. The world is interesting and a few of the side characters show promise, just not the main character.
Not sure I understand the positive reviews. The grammar is frustrating due to missing words, wrong word choices, and improper tense usage. The long paragraphs of supposition at a “technical level” followed by a simplified or dumbed down paragraph is annoying. Why not just use the simplified version? I get it’s make the MC look smart, but it’s not the smoothest reading experience. Add on the academy sanctioning murder in their qualification rounds. Makes this story insufferable. It gets bonuses for the fact that the MC is not talented in fighting but makes up for it with hard work and friendship! Also, the MC is targeted for no reason in the murder hobo academy testing and he just fangirls over the fighting ability of the other “student.”
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This is my favourite book on Webnovel and I have read a fair few. Give it a try, if it's not for you, you can always stop reading. 😘
A lot of BS by this blinded author who can’t seperate reality from fiction failing to create a new viable reality. If you aren’t convincing me then you are failing to give me immersion. BS#1 - And this one is repeated a lot which is the muscle memory. First of all he transmigrated as a newborn not in a random already used body. He had 13 years to fix it and he’s still complaining. BS#2 MC going on tirades about certain theories and naming them then the side characters having no idea who he’s talking about. Then suddenly the next chapter the author still uses names of excercises NAMED after Earths people. Example is Pallof Practices named after John Pallof in his curriculum. The author has no creativity to make new names thats how he ended up with the Martial Apprentice Master Sage travesty. BS#3 MC and AUTHOR narrating how he has a better training methodology than a literal SAGE. How out of touch is this MC and author. This world is literally built on Martial Arts and have sages that can raze countries and he as a 50 yo vegetable thinking he has a better way to practice??! Does that even make sense? BS#4 Him suddenly not knowing what a one inch punch is or lateral running walking then having a chapter long explanation to it in his mind? SO DOES HE KNOW IT OR NOT? So many contradiction and ramblings limited by the authors sight, originality and creativity. It’s very hard to immerse in something filled with plot holes.
In the earlier chapters when Rui takes third exam to join the academy, he gets attached by a older girl Fae who is also direct disciple of some sage, and gets defeated but our mc doesn't show any anger towards her despite his all efforts until now to become a martial artists. That was too unreal and more unreal is that if it were a boy who did it, would he had the same feelings. I don't care of he gets accepted or not latter. I don't see gender equality and appreciate emotions in him. he is more like a monk already and it becomes more monotonouse and boring when you know how the charector will act without any brain. its more like bland food.
I really loved it. Unique and interesting power system. The story is really great, and I was genuinely surprised at some points. One of my favorite novels of all time.
can anyone please answer me this is there going to be weapon in this novel because all I see is martial arts martial arts martial arts no sword no Dagger no nothing just wash your hands
This is a great read. I read it overall very high. The only thing that makes me wonder and think is how it’s going to develop into a bigger world or cosmos. I’m over 2000 chapters and we haven’t seen anything that would make the world bigger. The story is very grounded on a giant Jupiter size planet.
This is my second review in two years now. The novel has gained a much more defined identity since then, having defined strengths and areas that some consider shortcomings. With this review, I wish to convey the core domains of focus of this novel to manage your expectations. This novel focuses on the intersection between martial art with science and the world. I have created a framework of martial art centered around science and an intricate and deep world centered around martial art. If you are interested in exploring a refreshingly unique hard power system centered around science, then this novel is for you. If you're interested in an intricately constructed world woven around martial art and its impact on civilization, then this novel is for you. I would advise you to be patient when reading this story, it is slow by any reasonable measure.
This review is for new readers afraid to read this novel because of slow progress in realm. The slow progress in realms is manly because the power-system is completely training focused rather than resource-based so training can't be time-skipped. Usually in cultivation novels Authors can time-skip 500+ years of grinding since all MC needs to do is cultivate, gather qi in dantain and progress, so the training arc can be summarized in one line like "MC ate ying-yang pill and cultivated for 500 years and broke through." But this novel is complete science based martial novel where the only way to progress is by training and creating new martial arts unique to your martial path. And each new technique needs some source of inspiration, a training model with planning, followed by an elaborate training arc. And training-arcs in this novel are the BEST. The novel is slow but not lazy, author could had definitely time-skipped training arcs but then the technique would be way less impactful to readers.
2nd Review of Book, Continues to be one of the most gripping stories I've read. Everyone has their own taste in novels but not all authors are created equal. Too often chapters include repetitive info like a half page rehash of stats or whatever, ppl trying to fill the pages. Lord_Streak continually advances the storyline. He doesn't repeat himself or spend excessive space on irrelevant info. Last Point - The amount of material he's pumping out while maintaining a level of quality must be difficult. This guy is Hella creative.
While there are minor grammarical errors and sometimes the word used is out of context with the sentence. Amazing Read, Great World Building, Creative Characters, I'm totally immersed everytime I'm reading. I can build a pretty clear mental image when reading and the flow seems organic. Glad Author decided to share this work with us.
I hope Rui dies post this novel and gets reborn in new world like Tang San gets reborn in Dolou Dalu. Please consider this idea Mr. @Lord_Streak
I have absolutely loved this book and it is fantastic, it is my daily read, and I can’t wait to see where it goes
i am currently on 2264.The novel was great till the master breakthrough but after that i must say the character development took a downturn. the main character through portrayed as smart is shown as extremely dumb at times. I just don’t get it how the character development is progressing.The novel mentions how breaking through higher levels is difficult and sure for MC it’s difficult but for his friend and allies that not true. This novel story is degrading because of this nonsense. i am dropping this novel, i hope you don’t waste your time with this as i have
揭示劇透 A very good work done. Background, characterization, and development or story line are wow.
I really want to like this novel, I really do. The author however spends a large chunk of chapters explaining things instead of letting the story play out so the chapter payoff feels much to be desired. While there are a ton of chapters the story takes forever to unravel.
I first drop this novel 10 or less chapter in , after looking at some bad review ... but THANK GOD i came back ! what a incredible story with creative and scientifique reference , without too much complexe thing that dont make any sense . love the mc , love the side character, ennemy are well tought the background his insane i cant wait to see what the futur will look like ! A MASTERPIECE in my opinion ! and thank you for keeping up with a good gremmar ( probably did more mistake in this comment than the whole novel )
I'm barely 30? chapters in but this dude not only inflates the story with irrelevant chatter of side characters but the mc will go on tangents that go nowhere about the same chatter. And then a chapter later you will get what you were actually were supposed to learn from that chatter with MC correcting his thoughts knowing that what was said earlier was misinterpreted a d then you have his friends chiming in calling him dumb for thinking it was how he first thought it was, and then he breaks it down with modern science and it turns out it wasn't science it's just how this world works. This is a first for me, I just stopped halfway through a chapter and just thought that I don't want to read this. 2000+ chapters of filler words. Usually when plot goes out the window I start skimming and the drop, with this I didn't even get to skimming. You have characters with zero educational background going toe to toe with this worlds top nobility and they somehow are able to carry the argument. The characters don't feel unique, it just feels like the author is narrating the story because all the characters talk the same way, as in they all sound like they are defending the sport thesis MC wrote about martial arts in this world. If you make a roast and the ends are burnt but the center is good, you rate the whole roast not just the center, and this story is made in such a way that I can't even dig into just the center by skimming it, because he made sure to vomit enough words over it that it's impossible to skim.
I'm at chapter 990 now and can tell you this is one of the best novel I ever read. I find myself not liking romances and cant really finish those stories. But with this You see he doesnt deviate from his path. I heard he is part of the royal family. I can see he is fit to be a leader and would be perfect as prince and then challenge other empires
揭示劇透 I feel like this game have no emotion, I tried my best but it's just the main character talking to himself. starting on that fodder squirrel guard, that little fei girl or during the weird interaction on his roommate
This starts off strong but gets boring relatively quickly. It falls into the common tropes of the protagonist becoming a boring machine that vaguely tells us that they’re doing the same thing as everyone else but somehow better. The world is interesting and a few of the side characters show promise, just not the main character.
Not sure I understand the positive reviews. The grammar is frustrating due to missing words, wrong word choices, and improper tense usage. The long paragraphs of supposition at a “technical level” followed by a simplified or dumbed down paragraph is annoying. Why not just use the simplified version? I get it’s make the MC look smart, but it’s not the smoothest reading experience. Add on the academy sanctioning murder in their qualification rounds. Makes this story insufferable. It gets bonuses for the fact that the MC is not talented in fighting but makes up for it with hard work and friendship! Also, the MC is targeted for no reason in the murder hobo academy testing and he just fangirls over the fighting ability of the other “student.”
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揭示劇透 This is my favourite book on Webnovel and I have read a fair few. Give it a try, if it's not for you, you can always stop reading. 😘
A lot of BS by this blinded author who can’t seperate reality from fiction failing to create a new viable reality. If you aren’t convincing me then you are failing to give me immersion. BS#1 - And this one is repeated a lot which is the muscle memory. First of all he transmigrated as a newborn not in a random already used body. He had 13 years to fix it and he’s still complaining. BS#2 MC going on tirades about certain theories and naming them then the side characters having no idea who he’s talking about. Then suddenly the next chapter the author still uses names of excercises NAMED after Earths people. Example is Pallof Practices named after John Pallof in his curriculum. The author has no creativity to make new names thats how he ended up with the Martial Apprentice Master Sage travesty. BS#3 MC and AUTHOR narrating how he has a better training methodology than a literal SAGE. How out of touch is this MC and author. This world is literally built on Martial Arts and have sages that can raze countries and he as a 50 yo vegetable thinking he has a better way to practice??! Does that even make sense? BS#4 Him suddenly not knowing what a one inch punch is or lateral running walking then having a chapter long explanation to it in his mind? SO DOES HE KNOW IT OR NOT? So many contradiction and ramblings limited by the authors sight, originality and creativity. It’s very hard to immerse in something filled with plot holes.
In the earlier chapters when Rui takes third exam to join the academy, he gets attached by a older girl Fae who is also direct disciple of some sage, and gets defeated but our mc doesn't show any anger towards her despite his all efforts until now to become a martial artists. That was too unreal and more unreal is that if it were a boy who did it, would he had the same feelings. I don't care of he gets accepted or not latter. I don't see gender equality and appreciate emotions in him. he is more like a monk already and it becomes more monotonouse and boring when you know how the charector will act without any brain. its more like bland food.
I really loved it. Unique and interesting power system. The story is really great, and I was genuinely surprised at some points. One of my favorite novels of all time.
can anyone please answer me this is there going to be weapon in this novel because all I see is martial arts martial arts martial arts no sword no Dagger no nothing just wash your hands
This is a great read. I read it overall very high. The only thing that makes me wonder and think is how it’s going to develop into a bigger world or cosmos. I’m over 2000 chapters and we haven’t seen anything that would make the world bigger. The story is very grounded on a giant Jupiter size planet.
This is my second review in two years now. The novel has gained a much more defined identity since then, having defined strengths and areas that some consider shortcomings. With this review, I wish to convey the core domains of focus of this novel to manage your expectations. This novel focuses on the intersection between martial art with science and the world. I have created a framework of martial art centered around science and an intricate and deep world centered around martial art. If you are interested in exploring a refreshingly unique hard power system centered around science, then this novel is for you. If you're interested in an intricately constructed world woven around martial art and its impact on civilization, then this novel is for you. I would advise you to be patient when reading this story, it is slow by any reasonable measure.