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This book is fabulous, sexy, hot and exciting 🥰 i love this book! I don’t eant to spoil, just read and enjoy! You will really like it too! The special one is the Autor of this book bcz she is one of not many autors who really cares of her readers/fans comments and more! A really cool Novolist! 😘
Gave a try with this book and I am HOOKED~❤️😍 This book really kept me on my toes wondering when is the happy ending for the most unlikely ruthless people (Abi and Nathan) to fall in love with each other but somehow will eventually fall for each other with the help from the cutie Ethan and Bam bam🥰~ Still anticipating more chapters and hopefully author will keep updating the chapters~❤️😍 Keep it up, author for such page turner novel 💪💪
I really loved this book; it was one of my favorites. But I got disappointed around chapter 786 or 790 when I think AI started being used. I really loved your writing and don’t know why you introduced AI at that point. Your writing was so good on its own—there was nothing wrong with it. Using AI really broke the experience for me. I really admired you author🧡😫
Am I the only one who doesn't like the way Nathan is being treated. I mean the guy has been forced to go through so much emotional stress just because of some bad dude and an annoying flying cat. Sure he acts sometimes aggressive but his reaction is justified a little. He is given no explanation but expected by his family and friends to always behave in the way they want and when he doesn't, he is at fault because he should showcase blind loyalty like he did with Monica[img=disgusted]. I love all the character{except Ethan, his "I'm more mature than my age personality" is a bit annoying and also he is supposed to be 5 but his action just makes his age just like a number}. Asides from that, the story is good. Keep it up[img=recommend]
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There’s too much delay in updates. As much as I’d like to continue vote this book but I feel that writer’s divided attention has stretched the story too much. The quality of the story an length of the chapters has plunged sharply. 100 days become 1000 days or so☹️ Author has neglected the story because of the new book. Pls take my top and finish what you had started before jumping on new stories/ angle or character
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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaw ❤️❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘😍 just the best .can't wait for more of Jane Nathan and Ethan. Falling for the characters is a real thing you guys 😂 😂 😍💯❤️❤️❤️
You made the characters too pointy, but it is my best book so far, keep on writing 😁
why does all the good stories have fewer reviews? this is definitely a MASTERPIECE the romance, mysteries, cute moments and the side characters romance with plot twists gosh! I can't get enough🧎i was just bored, i was only planning to read a little to kill time🧡I'm so glad i found this💕#no regrets😉
Another fun plot. Plenty of romance with twists and turns. About 3/4 done at this point (going by the 100 days) and it’s been one that’s hard to put down and get actual sleep. I’m fairly sure I’ve called most of the plot twists but they’re still told in such a way I don’t want to skip chapters. Yes the author is not a native English speaker like many on this platform. I don’t think it takes away from the story at all. I just sometimes have to reread to make sure the pronouns used didn’t trip me up. For a notorious skim reader this is really good for me as it forces me to read a little more slowly and carefully 😂 5 stars all around. Great story. I can’t wait to read it in full!
A 100 days of suspense, activations, dramas and love. I pass through different rollercoaster of emotions the author really did a nice work 🥰❤️ love the suspense, the background story infant everything about this book is giving 🥰💕💝. much power to your elbow sweetheart 💖👍
The novel is really interesting. The plot is in sync and keeps the readers glued to their phones. Thanks so much author
This is not the typical genr for me, but I began reading and really enjoyed it. The plot keeps you wanting to know what will happen next, and keeps you interested. Some things are frustrating and hard to accept, like a smart CEO/mob boss being stupid enough to be so madly in love with a woman who has too many holes in her story, and odd behavior, but that is a necessary plot point so I’v overlooked it. I just hope we get to the point of understanding what Nathan did to earn such a crazy revenge plot to be carried out against him, and hopefully it’s not all related to something his dad did. We will see.
I really love this story. It is very worth reading. I really wish I could read it all at once though. It kills me to have to waist for more.
ahhhhhh this book is fire iIam sooo obsessed with it oh my am in heven i cant' stop reading it thank you for such a lovely book
This book immediately draws you in to the story and is perfectly paced and I can’t think of much that would make this story any better. It’ s so addicting to read and I can’ t wait to find out how it ends
Love this book sooo much... Nathan and Jane are just made for each other❤️❤️❤️
I love this book soooo much... but I don't like Nathan's character that much, I mean he says that he loves shining star but he can't even differentiate between real and fake after so many years . I like Ethan the most , looks like he got his brain from his mom.and I am pretty sure Jane is his mother, cause that's too much of coincidence that she was pregnant and lost her child at the same time Ethan was born. I love Jane's character and I hope Abigail and Jane get along well .Overall I love this book, definitely recommending to my friends..and author , can you please update atleast 1 Chapter per day? I am always waiting for it
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I just reached chapter 368 and it's so cool but I want to say something that might sound nonsense 🤔 but!!! does our Phantomflakes' baby really die? I have a gut to say that Ethan might be her child and not Monica's 😭 does it match the plot? like... I'm hoping that Monica fakes her pregnancy and I wish that Ethan is really our FL's child IDK whether the author will reply or not but this is what I thought as far as I read this story 😭 but whatever it is... this story is my favorite!! 💟💟
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One of my favorite writer. The beginning of this story is already exciting. Despite being enemies, I like the FL and ML. There is humor in it, story flows very smoothly. The side characters are well included in this story. Besides the ML and FL I have another favorite that I like. Wonder if it will be your favorite too. 😆Have read all her books and this one is definitely worth put in your library!
I don't know how to describe this story but it's definitely my favorite💟💟 it's good, I'm not so into transmigration story but this is different... you are one of my favorite authors! by the way, how many chapters does this story contains? I'm waiting for your reply, author-nim 🙏🏻
love love love ❤️😍 I don't normally read ebooks or Web novels but I love this novel
please give us more pages I would like to see how this is I know you I have so much going on probably you know cuz it's live but I definitely would love for more chapters to come out!!!!!!
Hello Author is Here! To all my readers who read my other creations... this book is the combination of my other books. Another fantasy book mixed with Contemporary which has a modern world setting. a magical cute naughty fluffy creature✅ a strong but alluring FL✅ a cold but doting ML✅ a cute and charming Baby Boy✅ Comedy, Hot Scenes, Romance, Mystery ✅ Faceslapping✅ Revenge✅
This book is fabulous, sexy, hot and exciting 🥰 i love this book! I don’t eant to spoil, just read and enjoy! You will really like it too! The special one is the Autor of this book bcz she is one of not many autors who really cares of her readers/fans comments and more! A really cool Novolist! 😘
Gave a try with this book and I am HOOKED~❤️😍 This book really kept me on my toes wondering when is the happy ending for the most unlikely ruthless people (Abi and Nathan) to fall in love with each other but somehow will eventually fall for each other with the help from the cutie Ethan and Bam bam🥰~ Still anticipating more chapters and hopefully author will keep updating the chapters~❤️😍 Keep it up, author for such page turner novel 💪💪
I really loved this book; it was one of my favorites. But I got disappointed around chapter 786 or 790 when I think AI started being used. I really loved your writing and don’t know why you introduced AI at that point. Your writing was so good on its own—there was nothing wrong with it. Using AI really broke the experience for me. I really admired you author🧡😫
Am I the only one who doesn't like the way Nathan is being treated. I mean the guy has been forced to go through so much emotional stress just because of some bad dude and an annoying flying cat. Sure he acts sometimes aggressive but his reaction is justified a little. He is given no explanation but expected by his family and friends to always behave in the way they want and when he doesn't, he is at fault because he should showcase blind loyalty like he did with Monica[img=disgusted]. I love all the character{except Ethan, his "I'm more mature than my age personality" is a bit annoying and also he is supposed to be 5 but his action just makes his age just like a number}. Asides from that, the story is good. Keep it up[img=recommend]
揭示劇透 There’s too much delay in updates. As much as I’d like to continue vote this book but I feel that writer’s divided attention has stretched the story too much. The quality of the story an length of the chapters has plunged sharply. 100 days become 1000 days or so☹️ Author has neglected the story because of the new book. Pls take my top and finish what you had started before jumping on new stories/ angle or character
揭示劇透 Aaaaaaaaaaaaaw ❤️❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘😍 just the best .can't wait for more of Jane Nathan and Ethan. Falling for the characters is a real thing you guys 😂 😂 😍💯❤️❤️❤️
You made the characters too pointy, but it is my best book so far, keep on writing 😁
why does all the good stories have fewer reviews? this is definitely a MASTERPIECE the romance, mysteries, cute moments and the side characters romance with plot twists gosh! I can't get enough🧎i was just bored, i was only planning to read a little to kill time🧡I'm so glad i found this💕#no regrets😉
Another fun plot. Plenty of romance with twists and turns. About 3/4 done at this point (going by the 100 days) and it’s been one that’s hard to put down and get actual sleep. I’m fairly sure I’ve called most of the plot twists but they’re still told in such a way I don’t want to skip chapters. Yes the author is not a native English speaker like many on this platform. I don’t think it takes away from the story at all. I just sometimes have to reread to make sure the pronouns used didn’t trip me up. For a notorious skim reader this is really good for me as it forces me to read a little more slowly and carefully 😂 5 stars all around. Great story. I can’t wait to read it in full!
A 100 days of suspense, activations, dramas and love. I pass through different rollercoaster of emotions the author really did a nice work 🥰❤️ love the suspense, the background story infant everything about this book is giving 🥰💕💝. much power to your elbow sweetheart 💖👍
The novel is really interesting. The plot is in sync and keeps the readers glued to their phones. Thanks so much author
This is not the typical genr for me, but I began reading and really enjoyed it. The plot keeps you wanting to know what will happen next, and keeps you interested. Some things are frustrating and hard to accept, like a smart CEO/mob boss being stupid enough to be so madly in love with a woman who has too many holes in her story, and odd behavior, but that is a necessary plot point so I’v overlooked it. I just hope we get to the point of understanding what Nathan did to earn such a crazy revenge plot to be carried out against him, and hopefully it’s not all related to something his dad did. We will see.
I really love this story. It is very worth reading. I really wish I could read it all at once though. It kills me to have to waist for more.
ahhhhhh this book is fire iIam sooo obsessed with it oh my am in heven i cant' stop reading it thank you for such a lovely book
This book immediately draws you in to the story and is perfectly paced and I can’t think of much that would make this story any better. It’ s so addicting to read and I can’ t wait to find out how it ends
Love this book sooo much... Nathan and Jane are just made for each other❤️❤️❤️
I love this book soooo much... but I don't like Nathan's character that much, I mean he says that he loves shining star but he can't even differentiate between real and fake after so many years . I like Ethan the most , looks like he got his brain from his mom.and I am pretty sure Jane is his mother, cause that's too much of coincidence that she was pregnant and lost her child at the same time Ethan was born. I love Jane's character and I hope Abigail and Jane get along well .Overall I love this book, definitely recommending to my friends..and author , can you please update atleast 1 Chapter per day? I am always waiting for it
揭示劇透 I just reached chapter 368 and it's so cool but I want to say something that might sound nonsense 🤔 but!!! does our Phantomflakes' baby really die? I have a gut to say that Ethan might be her child and not Monica's 😭 does it match the plot? like... I'm hoping that Monica fakes her pregnancy and I wish that Ethan is really our FL's child IDK whether the author will reply or not but this is what I thought as far as I read this story 😭 but whatever it is... this story is my favorite!! 💟💟
揭示劇透 One of my favorite writer. The beginning of this story is already exciting. Despite being enemies, I like the FL and ML. There is humor in it, story flows very smoothly. The side characters are well included in this story. Besides the ML and FL I have another favorite that I like. Wonder if it will be your favorite too. 😆Have read all her books and this one is definitely worth put in your library!
I don't know how to describe this story but it's definitely my favorite💟💟 it's good, I'm not so into transmigration story but this is different... you are one of my favorite authors! by the way, how many chapters does this story contains? I'm waiting for your reply, author-nim 🙏🏻
love love love ❤️😍 I don't normally read ebooks or Web novels but I love this novel
please give us more pages I would like to see how this is I know you I have so much going on probably you know cuz it's live but I definitely would love for more chapters to come out!!!!!!
Hello Author is Here! To all my readers who read my other creations... this book is the combination of my other books. Another fantasy book mixed with Contemporary which has a modern world setting. a magical cute naughty fluffy creature✅ a strong but alluring FL✅ a cold but doting ML✅ a cute and charming Baby Boy✅ Comedy, Hot Scenes, Romance, Mystery ✅ Faceslapping✅ Revenge✅