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- 寫作品質
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寫檢討
overall everything is good but how the heck did rolycoly transform into Aron . if you're giving starter than keep constant somehow I felt disappointed after rolycoly transforms into Aron in right next chapter. honestly dissapointing. I even gave stones
Another heavily dependent on coincidence fanfic... mc reincarnated with basic status screen of every pokemon he looks at... then someone the day before he goes to buy pokemon egg puts a ultra rare egg between the normal ones... Tipical heavy plot armor no struggle fanfic
Its great so far. I like the starter and the world setting. Cant wait for more
overall everything is good but how the heck did rolycoly transform into Aron . if you're giving starter than keep constant somehow I felt disappointed after rolycoly transforms into Aron in right next chapter. honestly dissapointing. I even gave stones
Another heavily dependent on coincidence fanfic... mc reincarnated with basic status screen of every pokemon he looks at... then someone the day before he goes to buy pokemon egg puts a ultra rare egg between the normal ones... Tipical heavy plot armor no struggle fanfic
Its great so far. I like the starter and the world setting. Cant wait for more