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Can anyone give a link to the original of this work ?——————————————————————————————————————————————_______________________________________________________________________________
now the translations aren't perfect at all however it just takes a little bit of thinking to figure it out it's not hard by any means. the characters are very solid so far the world backgrounds accurate updating stability was good I'm not sure if you're going to continue but you really should if you have time or feel like it the stores developing at a nice Pace not too fast not too slow. all in all I'm really enjoying it. yes it makes me think but story-wise it's awesome. and I think if people can get past the iffy translations they love it. I wish I could read the original though.
Another trashy Chinese translation.... Is there anything more to say? ..........................................................................
I mean no harm, but cab u translate names better? I mean good story and etc but... Text have some issuece. Qin is Jean, Yula is Eula, and paragraphs is are little bit broken. When they speak it not 1 solid Block it 3-4 blocks carry 1 sentence. Sorry for bad english.
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Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
please do not drop this I really like the story and have a little problem on the translation but it is readable. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Hmm I already read this at faloo but only free chapter, so it's great if you translate that novel 😁📚 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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I like the story pls continue. although the translations is a little iffy its already good for a beginner. besides I've seen a lot of mtl in the past. this is already good quality mtl.
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Can i get raw link? and thanks for translation..............................................................................................
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Can anyone give a link to the original of this work ?——————————————————————————————————————————————_______________________________________________________________________________
now the translations aren't perfect at all however it just takes a little bit of thinking to figure it out it's not hard by any means. the characters are very solid so far the world backgrounds accurate updating stability was good I'm not sure if you're going to continue but you really should if you have time or feel like it the stores developing at a nice Pace not too fast not too slow. all in all I'm really enjoying it. yes it makes me think but story-wise it's awesome. and I think if people can get past the iffy translations they love it. I wish I could read the original though.
Another trashy Chinese translation.... Is there anything more to say? ..........................................................................
I mean no harm, but cab u translate names better? I mean good story and etc but... Text have some issuece. Qin is Jean, Yula is Eula, and paragraphs is are little bit broken. When they speak it not 1 solid Block it 3-4 blocks carry 1 sentence. Sorry for bad english.
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Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Interesting... Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
please do not drop this I really like the story and have a little problem on the translation but it is readable. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Hmm I already read this at faloo but only free chapter, so it's great if you translate that novel 😁📚 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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I like the story pls continue. although the translations is a little iffy its already good for a beginner. besides I've seen a lot of mtl in the past. this is already good quality mtl.
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Can i get raw link? and thanks for translation..............................................................................................
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