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I think this book is interesting and different from the others. A unique title with a unique story, even I myself do not understand what the title of the book means. I like the cover [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Wow… This story started out normal then I got whiplash. Not bad, but wow… I really like the story of Simonand Periphae. It was very detailed and well done. I also like the characters. While Julianna seems to easily switch moods as much as her sister Lucy, she seems cool. Eric is very soft for someone who’s had a violent life. I’m hoping to see him become stronger in the chapters to come. Keep up the good work, Author!
Interesting topic with many twists and turns. Juliana goes on an epic journey where everything she thinks she knows will be turned on its head. Give it a try! 🎉
The start of the story is really good, I personally like a good mystery so I would recommend it, the writing quality along with the plot of the story is good, quite easy to understand and enjoyable. Nicely done!
The story development and the world background were really planned, and the author obviously worked hard to outline this world and the character design. However, it seems that from the writing quality it shows, the author is obviously still in a novice phase. All the author starts from here, and I'm pretty sure if she continues writing novels, she will grow alongside her writing quality.
The story is really good, the start is with some of the truth of life and I'll say that is a pretty good job, chapters are interesting too, you are doing a good job🍃
The story has very interesting characters. Also, a very nice concept and the story was well structured. And grammar flows well to readers' understanding.
when we say a piece of art is fire this is what we mean,it's interesting to the point of addiction... your creativity is something that should be appreciated,I have always loved a story of controversy between darkness and light and I think I found my pie🐝💕💕💕
Wow Wow Wow!! Well done Author-nim 🥳 Amazing work. I love the plot and I really appriciate the hard work you have put in in describing the emotions of all the characters. The pace is well set and I think it is a book that needs to be given the opportunity to shine!!
What a flashback, I mean it's great just from the first chapter I was so intrigued to read more chapters. Great work Author for the amazing characters and the plot was breathtaking I loved it so much, I loved reading the first 4 chapters and I really enjoyed them .Can't wait to read more soon. Great work Author well done !!! DEAR READERS PLEASE CHECK THIS BOOK OUT AND ADD IT TO YOUR LIBRARY !!!
A really nice beginning and even better chapters, each chapter is better than the last which is something to look forward to. this is not an average book.
The story plot seemed interesting, but I am very confused about who Liana is. The first chapter where she is introduced leave me in a great confusion, I had to read the description paragraphs thrice to understand the family tree. So, as a reader, it put me off a little bit. Also, your synopsis is good, but there is a minor mistake, you may correct it and it will be improved. Other than that, your writing style is very nice and comfortable for all the readers, and the story is escalating in a friendly manner. All the best with future updates, I hope this review helps!!
The story idea is so unique and different, one I've rarely seen. The synopsis easily got me hooked and I'm seriously just loving the new concept the author has attempted in introducing. I want more of this definitely!!
The writing at the start is pretty subpar, you don't have to put a period after an exclamation point or question mark. It looks like the author uploads normally, daily, as it seems. The story is moving quite fast, which sometimes kills the emotions. The characters are well thought out, so that's a good thing. The world background is okay, in my eyes. Alright, my review is over, goodbye!
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A very melodic yet beautifully woven story, it reminds me of some all-time classics by Alfred Hitchcock and Arthur Doyle, for anyone looking for a mystery and thriller type of book, I definitely recommend this book.
The story started with surprises and curiousity fields. one can see the author hardwork in making the readers to see the 17th century world and the current world. She told what to expect and what she was gonna write. It is surprising that... story is clear with surprises unlike many stories that takes the stories in circles. all the best author.
Hi, first of all, the characters were well written. Second of all, the way you write the story will make you get immersed. Hopefully you won't drop this novel so many readers will have to enjoy.
I love the slow build up to where mc finds out about the "other world." The description can be worked on a little, for example when an item or if a person is important spend at least a paragraph on the person or object. It lets the readers subconsciously think "hun this must be important" or "why does author san put so much detail about this?" Overall its a great story
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It is definitely an interesting read as the author put a lot of thought into the plot. Most people would end up sympathizing with the characters as they continue to read the story.
This story is very good, the flow, twists and turns make it as interesting as it could be. Some things are confusing sometimes, but, there is always an explanation in the next chapter. And also this novel seems new, at least it didn't start with a cliche... All in all, good work author, nice novel
A nice read. Feels so heavy, and the setting is perfect. The word draws readers attention and the situation makes u confuse and read more. A very fine grammar good writing skill. Nice novel.
Such amazing work deserves all the credit I truly love and appreciate the story. The author should write more though there were some bits I didn't understand, it was indeed a good read
loved the way story is written without boring descriptions. I loved the idea of the author showing 'what's going on' with dialogues. good work author.
Am in love with the flow of the story. Each chapter is weaved better than the previous one and it just makes you eager to read more. Keep it up girl! I do love your work.
The twist and turn from the beginning makes me hooked. Interesting plot and story developed is good.The thriller with adventure and drama makes the flow smooth. But the scenario and character changes so fast it makes me difficult to understand some part.But overall is wow. Keep going on.[img=recommend][img=update]
The mystery and supernatural elements are very strong in this novel. There are a lot of secrets to discover. Definitely an interesting and fresh plot to look into. Keep writing, Author!
Title✓ Synopsis✓ I think the author really has a great potential. This is really good and I appreciate the author's effort. Good luck with this piece!
This is an honest review The book cover is great, like it matches with the tittle of the novel. The synopsis is good. There a bit grammar's problem but the author can solve it by reviewing again the chapters, overall the story is unique and hard work pays back the fruit..I wish all good luck
the great read! this book very recommended to add to the library, keep going author!
I think this book is interesting and different from the others. A unique title with a unique story, even I myself do not understand what the title of the book means. I like the cover [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Wow… This story started out normal then I got whiplash. Not bad, but wow… I really like the story of Simonand Periphae. It was very detailed and well done. I also like the characters. While Julianna seems to easily switch moods as much as her sister Lucy, she seems cool. Eric is very soft for someone who’s had a violent life. I’m hoping to see him become stronger in the chapters to come. Keep up the good work, Author!
Interesting topic with many twists and turns. Juliana goes on an epic journey where everything she thinks she knows will be turned on its head. Give it a try! 🎉
The start of the story is really good, I personally like a good mystery so I would recommend it, the writing quality along with the plot of the story is good, quite easy to understand and enjoyable. Nicely done!
The story development and the world background were really planned, and the author obviously worked hard to outline this world and the character design. However, it seems that from the writing quality it shows, the author is obviously still in a novice phase. All the author starts from here, and I'm pretty sure if she continues writing novels, she will grow alongside her writing quality.
The story is really good, the start is with some of the truth of life and I'll say that is a pretty good job, chapters are interesting too, you are doing a good job🍃
The story has very interesting characters. Also, a very nice concept and the story was well structured. And grammar flows well to readers' understanding.
when we say a piece of art is fire this is what we mean,it's interesting to the point of addiction... your creativity is something that should be appreciated,I have always loved a story of controversy between darkness and light and I think I found my pie🐝💕💕💕
Wow Wow Wow!! Well done Author-nim 🥳 Amazing work. I love the plot and I really appriciate the hard work you have put in in describing the emotions of all the characters. The pace is well set and I think it is a book that needs to be given the opportunity to shine!!
What a flashback, I mean it's great just from the first chapter I was so intrigued to read more chapters. Great work Author for the amazing characters and the plot was breathtaking I loved it so much, I loved reading the first 4 chapters and I really enjoyed them .Can't wait to read more soon. Great work Author well done !!! DEAR READERS PLEASE CHECK THIS BOOK OUT AND ADD IT TO YOUR LIBRARY !!!
A really nice beginning and even better chapters, each chapter is better than the last which is something to look forward to. this is not an average book.
The story plot seemed interesting, but I am very confused about who Liana is. The first chapter where she is introduced leave me in a great confusion, I had to read the description paragraphs thrice to understand the family tree. So, as a reader, it put me off a little bit. Also, your synopsis is good, but there is a minor mistake, you may correct it and it will be improved. Other than that, your writing style is very nice and comfortable for all the readers, and the story is escalating in a friendly manner. All the best with future updates, I hope this review helps!!
The story idea is so unique and different, one I've rarely seen. The synopsis easily got me hooked and I'm seriously just loving the new concept the author has attempted in introducing. I want more of this definitely!!
The writing at the start is pretty subpar, you don't have to put a period after an exclamation point or question mark. It looks like the author uploads normally, daily, as it seems. The story is moving quite fast, which sometimes kills the emotions. The characters are well thought out, so that's a good thing. The world background is okay, in my eyes. Alright, my review is over, goodbye!
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揭示劇透 A very melodic yet beautifully woven story, it reminds me of some all-time classics by Alfred Hitchcock and Arthur Doyle, for anyone looking for a mystery and thriller type of book, I definitely recommend this book.
The story started with surprises and curiousity fields. one can see the author hardwork in making the readers to see the 17th century world and the current world. She told what to expect and what she was gonna write. It is surprising that... story is clear with surprises unlike many stories that takes the stories in circles. all the best author.
Hi, first of all, the characters were well written. Second of all, the way you write the story will make you get immersed. Hopefully you won't drop this novel so many readers will have to enjoy.
I love the slow build up to where mc finds out about the "other world." The description can be worked on a little, for example when an item or if a person is important spend at least a paragraph on the person or object. It lets the readers subconsciously think "hun this must be important" or "why does author san put so much detail about this?" Overall its a great story
揭示劇透 It is definitely an interesting read as the author put a lot of thought into the plot. Most people would end up sympathizing with the characters as they continue to read the story.
This story is very good, the flow, twists and turns make it as interesting as it could be. Some things are confusing sometimes, but, there is always an explanation in the next chapter. And also this novel seems new, at least it didn't start with a cliche... All in all, good work author, nice novel
A nice read. Feels so heavy, and the setting is perfect. The word draws readers attention and the situation makes u confuse and read more. A very fine grammar good writing skill. Nice novel.
Such amazing work deserves all the credit I truly love and appreciate the story. The author should write more though there were some bits I didn't understand, it was indeed a good read
loved the way story is written without boring descriptions. I loved the idea of the author showing 'what's going on' with dialogues. good work author.
Am in love with the flow of the story. Each chapter is weaved better than the previous one and it just makes you eager to read more. Keep it up girl! I do love your work.
The twist and turn from the beginning makes me hooked. Interesting plot and story developed is good.The thriller with adventure and drama makes the flow smooth. But the scenario and character changes so fast it makes me difficult to understand some part.But overall is wow. Keep going on.[img=recommend][img=update]
The mystery and supernatural elements are very strong in this novel. There are a lot of secrets to discover. Definitely an interesting and fresh plot to look into. Keep writing, Author!
Title✓ Synopsis✓ I think the author really has a great potential. This is really good and I appreciate the author's effort. Good luck with this piece!
This is an honest review The book cover is great, like it matches with the tittle of the novel. The synopsis is good. There a bit grammar's problem but the author can solve it by reviewing again the chapters, overall the story is unique and hard work pays back the fruit..I wish all good luck
the great read! this book very recommended to add to the library, keep going author!