4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
I wrote a review previously, but the situation changed so my review will as well. For future readers, I stopped at Ch 22 because this Chapter, in particular, showed me that I can't expect anything from this Novel and Author because of inconsistencies. Before WQ- 5 Stars SD - 2 Stars CD- 1 Star Update Stability -4 Stars WB - 3 Stars Now: WQ-3 Stars SD - 1 Star CD - 1 Star US - 3 Stars WB - 1 Star Bye
MC is absolutely stupid i mean dumb AF and the author confirmed he will stay dumb forever with the power of a saiyan Mc even sold his sole to get this power to a conformed evil God even though he doesn't have his memories Mc also has no idea about marvel nor DBZ i mean NOTHING at all .. Not my cup of tea at all but author can write somewhat well .Peace i'm out ✌
揭示劇透
people, today I declare with the power that I conferred on myself, that someone has achieved something, that neither the most seasoned Chinese in the art of writing, nor the perverted Japanese sages have achieved, and that is to create the mc with absolute stupidity, That scale of power is incredible, isn't it? I'm going to make a request on the power list, so that they include that amazing and heartbreaking power.
Hey guys! First attempt to write a novel, trying my best to give a readable story that will entertain you and me. Leave a review, telling me your thoughts on my approach and my writing style. Thank you and enjoy! 😙😙
I wrote a review previously, but the situation changed so my review will as well. For future readers, I stopped at Ch 22 because this Chapter, in particular, showed me that I can't expect anything from this Novel and Author because of inconsistencies. Before WQ- 5 Stars SD - 2 Stars CD- 1 Star Update Stability -4 Stars WB - 3 Stars Now: WQ-3 Stars SD - 1 Star CD - 1 Star US - 3 Stars WB - 1 Star Bye
MC is absolutely stupid i mean dumb AF and the author confirmed he will stay dumb forever with the power of a saiyan Mc even sold his sole to get this power to a conformed evil God even though he doesn't have his memories Mc also has no idea about marvel nor DBZ i mean NOTHING at all .. Not my cup of tea at all but author can write somewhat well .Peace i'm out ✌
揭示劇透 people, today I declare with the power that I conferred on myself, that someone has achieved something, that neither the most seasoned Chinese in the art of writing, nor the perverted Japanese sages have achieved, and that is to create the mc with absolute stupidity, That scale of power is incredible, isn't it? I'm going to make a request on the power list, so that they include that amazing and heartbreaking power.
Hey guys! First attempt to write a novel, trying my best to give a readable story that will entertain you and me. Leave a review, telling me your thoughts on my approach and my writing style. Thank you and enjoy! 😙😙