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Just could not get into the story without some quip from author or mc just breaking the fourth wall had high hopes but not my cup of tea
The author trys so hard to be funny and quirky in this book, but achieves neither for me, I'm not sure about other people but I find cringing more reading this than laughing or even being pulled into the plot like a good book should, so I'm giving it a low raring and dropping it, doesn't seem to be for me, also author bro stop being cringe.
Ey bro! How do you do the 『』bracket? I have been trying to find how to do it in 3 days already! If you know, please let me know...P.S I am in Mobile
This stuff's really interesting, only 2 chaps in but still the writing style is kinda unique and fun, love the work! hence I conclude, that: I NEED MOREEE!!! also good work author!
Lol amaing first two chaps. Like the writing style. Just waiting for more amaing chaps and then I’ll continue this review. Have a good day to anyone reading this.
Bad constantly skipping 4th wall breaks rather read something else which requires less work. The idea of the story is sound but it's hard to take in information when the author is constantly switching to 4th wall right in the middle of describing stuff
Just could not get into the story without some quip from author or mc just breaking the fourth wall had high hopes but not my cup of tea
The author trys so hard to be funny and quirky in this book, but achieves neither for me, I'm not sure about other people but I find cringing more reading this than laughing or even being pulled into the plot like a good book should, so I'm giving it a low raring and dropping it, doesn't seem to be for me, also author bro stop being cringe.
Ey bro! How do you do the 『』bracket? I have been trying to find how to do it in 3 days already! If you know, please let me know...P.S I am in Mobile
This stuff's really interesting, only 2 chaps in but still the writing style is kinda unique and fun, love the work! hence I conclude, that: I NEED MOREEE!!! also good work author!
Lol amaing first two chaps. Like the writing style. Just waiting for more amaing chaps and then I’ll continue this review. Have a good day to anyone reading this.
Bad constantly skipping 4th wall breaks rather read something else which requires less work. The idea of the story is sound but it's hard to take in information when the author is constantly switching to 4th wall right in the middle of describing stuff