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dropper at chap 20story is really slow paced MC first apparence is at chap 9 since the author was just dragging a useless fight.and the rest of the 11 chapters was nothing but pure waste of time, basically the MC wake up late in the morning, make a friend, meet his classmate, and become ennemy with à senior cause he bump into him, troll his 2 females classmate, and since he is in class E he get looked down à lot like with à Guy in class A.MC is a clown. if you like it then good for you.idk why there is a villain tag since he is not evil, maybe the villain will get his POV but since he is still not the MC the tag dont belong there
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Finally a book worth my time...No too much heroic lines like other novels ... Certainly love this book...recommend it💝💝[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good novel for me, i honestly the story pacing in this story. And the description of this never bore me. The character devemepment is needed!
What I enjoyed most about this story was that the MC wasn't the generic hero that other novels have. The author has really good storytelling and makes you want to keep reading more.
Romance Action forever has a special place in my heart, as does this novel. It’s rare to stumble upon a good villain, others are either corny or not “villainous” enough. Thanks for writing a villain worth reading about ❤️ Much love, S.T <3
The story is captivating, the world is rich and the main character is funny. The writting is clean and the flow of the story seems natural. Great job keep it up ;)
Great story development indeed. Not slow and not fast. I'm interested on where this story will going. Keep up the good work author! Fighting!
Very dark but in a good way🤣 I can relate to some of the MC's thought processes. But keep up the good work!
The English and grammar are actually very good. I suspect that the supervillain MC isn't as evil as he looks. This reminds me of the Classroom Alien Manga. But this is a good read with a good mystery as well.
Why did I thought the settings is in different era? after reading the next chapter, I just realized it was sets in modern era, I think. Must be because I was so invest with the mc's laugh for the entire first chapter lol
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Chapter Review: "Aiden Arkram: Harbinger of Chaos" In this chapter, the city lies in ruin as Aiden Arkram, an eighteen-year-old with extraordinary power, revels in the destruction he has caused. His laughter echoes through the desolate streets as he embraces his newfound abilities, seeing himself as the architect of a new era. However, a fleeting moment of introspection raises doubts about his path. Despite this, Aiden ultimately embraces his dark nature, relishing in the chaos and destruction. The chapter ends with Aiden laughing amidst the ruins, embodying his role as a harbinger of destruction and maestro of chaos. it is well written and is attractive for most readers . i personally liked it .
omg, i love Aiden's character this is easily a 5/5 the writing superb and development of Aiden and showing the side of a villain just amazing
Saw myself living in the book...my imaginations went wild...pretty much good and recommend.[img=recommend][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
I LOVE your chapters titles! Your story is consistent and well-paced. Great work!
Ok I do love my novels some action and this actually quite good. There hasn’t been to much romance so far. But the writing and dialogue is pretty good the only thing is the occasional odd word choice. Super well written and overall a good read!
A great work for sure. I am truly impressed by the talent that the author has shown in this work. We can clearly tell that the author took their time to create this piece of otherworldly book. Truly great.Great, so great.
First, the synopsis piqued my interest, but I think it's quite lengthy so I skipped the last paragraphs. As for the contents of the novel, the way the author described each scene is astounding and used words that I could easily understand. The author doesn't use such such lengthy words just to describe a scene, which makes the flow smoother. The grammar is on point, so I had no troubles in reading efficiently. I love the mystery in this novel, so keep it up, author-nim! [img=update]
The pacing is great. It has an interesting story and plot. I also like the actions and fighting scenes. Overall it's a good novel, I'm going to continue reading it! Would recommend.
Interesting story. The strongest thing this novel has is the writing style. I was pleasantly surprised with how good it is; descriptive and smooth. The author does well to establish our MC as villainous 'madman' with the monologue and some epic powers. This is certainly pulling and attractive.where I feel the novel falls short is progression and giving the reader time to understand the world before heading into the roughhousing and face slapping. I do feel like I can't care about other characters if I dont who they are and how strong they should be according to the power system.This is only my personal opinion though, a slower pace and reverse application of common writing rules isn't a bad thing. I still think is book is headed in a very interesting direction
From what I read, The action and fighting scene is very good. the descriptive on destruction and chaos is very detailed and exciting. However, in my opinion, just my opinion, Aiden dialogue and actions are too crazy in the beginning and it make me feel funny a little bit, but overall the story is pretty solid and well written.
This story really captures that, true villain, madness with a side of backstory vibe. It's great at delivering stunning moments with epically described visuals. Would recommend.
Nice work Author San. The plot is amazing and the writing is sublime. Please continue on doing so!
The book captivates readers from the very beginning, immediately drawing them into its intriguing narrative. The author's impressive writing style is apparent from the first page, displaying a skillful command of language ^^ With a captivating writing style, an awe-inspiring storyline, and meticulous attention to detail, it's a must-read for anyone seeking an immersive and thrilling reading experience >.<
A very intriguing concept, instantly capturing my attention. The protagonist is very compelling, his complex personality motivations make for an engaging read. Additionally, the chapter maintains a steady pace, leaving readers eagerly anticipating the next twist and turn. A great novel so far...
Fell in love with Aiden from the get go. Reading about him makes me recall how other people get unlucky and get labeled as villains jus because they dont see the world as the rest of the world.looking forward to seeing what Aiden will bring especially in his disguise. A very wonderful story dt tackles d deepest secrets and shows d side of villainy.💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃
I like your writing style .I was so immersed in, that at some point I forgot I wasn't even there ..... I want more ! Love it !
A more constructive review.The story is well written for the most part, after six chapters ideas tend to be more recycled, I'm thinking either get to the point or introduce more to the book like build the world or more characters or the main character more. At the point of chapter six you already established the main character's hate for everyone but not exactly why and that he was the one to destroy the city, it is not super necessary to go on and on and on about his fight with the heroes.
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I really like this novel's storyline, it's interesting as well as engaging got me hooked just from the first chapter. The writing style is also really good, looking forward to read more!
PLEASE READ BEFORE YOU START READING. Hello, The author here! Yes i rated it 5 stars, I'm really sorry, I think that it deserves atleast one 5 star review. Now that I have your attention, Welcome to Villain Supreme! The first thing i would want to say is the starting 8 chapters are purely action, so don't expect any sort of character or world building just yet. The second thing is, If you don't like story building, then this isn't for you. The entire novel will be slowly built through each chapter and will be taken slow, describing about everything happening one by one. But when it gets to action, you get insane action details as well, trust me, if you love action, you'll love this too. Third, I have 91 chapters up right now, and as you read through it, you might think about why the author had added the Villain Tag to this novel whereas you don't see any EVIL Villain. The answer for this is my second point. Slow. Story. Building. If you can stick through this with me, I'm pretty sure you'll love the way it'll turn out. Fourth, Yes, This will have some romance, but no harem, I hate harem. It will not be tolerated by any means in my novel. Yes, I have a lot in my mind, and I do plan to write it for you. But I do need your support in order to do so. Give me all the support you can, be it through comments, stones, votes, gifts, everything will matter. And i love reading the comments! I'll try to reply to every one of them as well. So overall, If you like some good action fantasy novel with an academy setting (atleast for some arcs) then you'll love this as well. Thank you for reading till here. The author gives you big hug for the effort. Happy Reading then!
dropper at chap 20story is really slow paced MC first apparence is at chap 9 since the author was just dragging a useless fight.and the rest of the 11 chapters was nothing but pure waste of time, basically the MC wake up late in the morning, make a friend, meet his classmate, and become ennemy with à senior cause he bump into him, troll his 2 females classmate, and since he is in class E he get looked down à lot like with à Guy in class A.MC is a clown. if you like it then good for you.idk why there is a villain tag since he is not evil, maybe the villain will get his POV but since he is still not the MC the tag dont belong there
揭示劇透 Finally a book worth my time...No too much heroic lines like other novels ... Certainly love this book...recommend it💝💝[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good novel for me, i honestly the story pacing in this story. And the description of this never bore me. The character devemepment is needed!
What I enjoyed most about this story was that the MC wasn't the generic hero that other novels have. The author has really good storytelling and makes you want to keep reading more.
Romance Action forever has a special place in my heart, as does this novel. It’s rare to stumble upon a good villain, others are either corny or not “villainous” enough. Thanks for writing a villain worth reading about ❤️ Much love, S.T <3
The story is captivating, the world is rich and the main character is funny. The writting is clean and the flow of the story seems natural. Great job keep it up ;)
Great story development indeed. Not slow and not fast. I'm interested on where this story will going. Keep up the good work author! Fighting!
Very dark but in a good way🤣 I can relate to some of the MC's thought processes. But keep up the good work!
The English and grammar are actually very good. I suspect that the supervillain MC isn't as evil as he looks. This reminds me of the Classroom Alien Manga. But this is a good read with a good mystery as well.
Why did I thought the settings is in different era? after reading the next chapter, I just realized it was sets in modern era, I think. Must be because I was so invest with the mc's laugh for the entire first chapter lol
揭示劇透 Chapter Review: "Aiden Arkram: Harbinger of Chaos" In this chapter, the city lies in ruin as Aiden Arkram, an eighteen-year-old with extraordinary power, revels in the destruction he has caused. His laughter echoes through the desolate streets as he embraces his newfound abilities, seeing himself as the architect of a new era. However, a fleeting moment of introspection raises doubts about his path. Despite this, Aiden ultimately embraces his dark nature, relishing in the chaos and destruction. The chapter ends with Aiden laughing amidst the ruins, embodying his role as a harbinger of destruction and maestro of chaos. it is well written and is attractive for most readers . i personally liked it .
omg, i love Aiden's character this is easily a 5/5 the writing superb and development of Aiden and showing the side of a villain just amazing
Saw myself living in the book...my imaginations went wild...pretty much good and recommend.[img=recommend][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
I LOVE your chapters titles! Your story is consistent and well-paced. Great work!
Ok I do love my novels some action and this actually quite good. There hasn’t been to much romance so far. But the writing and dialogue is pretty good the only thing is the occasional odd word choice. Super well written and overall a good read!
A great work for sure. I am truly impressed by the talent that the author has shown in this work. We can clearly tell that the author took their time to create this piece of otherworldly book. Truly great.Great, so great.
First, the synopsis piqued my interest, but I think it's quite lengthy so I skipped the last paragraphs. As for the contents of the novel, the way the author described each scene is astounding and used words that I could easily understand. The author doesn't use such such lengthy words just to describe a scene, which makes the flow smoother. The grammar is on point, so I had no troubles in reading efficiently. I love the mystery in this novel, so keep it up, author-nim! [img=update]
The pacing is great. It has an interesting story and plot. I also like the actions and fighting scenes. Overall it's a good novel, I'm going to continue reading it! Would recommend.
Interesting story. The strongest thing this novel has is the writing style. I was pleasantly surprised with how good it is; descriptive and smooth. The author does well to establish our MC as villainous 'madman' with the monologue and some epic powers. This is certainly pulling and attractive.where I feel the novel falls short is progression and giving the reader time to understand the world before heading into the roughhousing and face slapping. I do feel like I can't care about other characters if I dont who they are and how strong they should be according to the power system.This is only my personal opinion though, a slower pace and reverse application of common writing rules isn't a bad thing. I still think is book is headed in a very interesting direction
From what I read, The action and fighting scene is very good. the descriptive on destruction and chaos is very detailed and exciting. However, in my opinion, just my opinion, Aiden dialogue and actions are too crazy in the beginning and it make me feel funny a little bit, but overall the story is pretty solid and well written.
This story really captures that, true villain, madness with a side of backstory vibe. It's great at delivering stunning moments with epically described visuals. Would recommend.
Nice work Author San. The plot is amazing and the writing is sublime. Please continue on doing so!
The book captivates readers from the very beginning, immediately drawing them into its intriguing narrative. The author's impressive writing style is apparent from the first page, displaying a skillful command of language ^^ With a captivating writing style, an awe-inspiring storyline, and meticulous attention to detail, it's a must-read for anyone seeking an immersive and thrilling reading experience >.<
A very intriguing concept, instantly capturing my attention. The protagonist is very compelling, his complex personality motivations make for an engaging read. Additionally, the chapter maintains a steady pace, leaving readers eagerly anticipating the next twist and turn. A great novel so far...
Fell in love with Aiden from the get go. Reading about him makes me recall how other people get unlucky and get labeled as villains jus because they dont see the world as the rest of the world.looking forward to seeing what Aiden will bring especially in his disguise. A very wonderful story dt tackles d deepest secrets and shows d side of villainy.💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃
I like your writing style .I was so immersed in, that at some point I forgot I wasn't even there ..... I want more ! Love it !
A more constructive review.The story is well written for the most part, after six chapters ideas tend to be more recycled, I'm thinking either get to the point or introduce more to the book like build the world or more characters or the main character more. At the point of chapter six you already established the main character's hate for everyone but not exactly why and that he was the one to destroy the city, it is not super necessary to go on and on and on about his fight with the heroes.
揭示劇透 I really like this novel's storyline, it's interesting as well as engaging got me hooked just from the first chapter. The writing style is also really good, looking forward to read more!
PLEASE READ BEFORE YOU START READING. Hello, The author here! Yes i rated it 5 stars, I'm really sorry, I think that it deserves atleast one 5 star review. Now that I have your attention, Welcome to Villain Supreme! The first thing i would want to say is the starting 8 chapters are purely action, so don't expect any sort of character or world building just yet. The second thing is, If you don't like story building, then this isn't for you. The entire novel will be slowly built through each chapter and will be taken slow, describing about everything happening one by one. But when it gets to action, you get insane action details as well, trust me, if you love action, you'll love this too. Third, I have 91 chapters up right now, and as you read through it, you might think about why the author had added the Villain Tag to this novel whereas you don't see any EVIL Villain. The answer for this is my second point. Slow. Story. Building. If you can stick through this with me, I'm pretty sure you'll love the way it'll turn out. Fourth, Yes, This will have some romance, but no harem, I hate harem. It will not be tolerated by any means in my novel. Yes, I have a lot in my mind, and I do plan to write it for you. But I do need your support in order to do so. Give me all the support you can, be it through comments, stones, votes, gifts, everything will matter. And i love reading the comments! I'll try to reply to every one of them as well. So overall, If you like some good action fantasy novel with an academy setting (atleast for some arcs) then you'll love this as well. Thank you for reading till here. The author gives you big hug for the effort. Happy Reading then!