/ Fantasy / [Old version]
摘要
I was on my way home when I suddenly felt something painful and before I knew it, I found myself in a place that I've never seen in my life.
This is a story about a girl who got reincarnated as a doll.
Meeting with goddesses and a girl... how the story will unfold is depending on a unknown fate.
[This is an old version so sorry if there might be many errors, I'm currently revising it so I will post it on a new story.]
標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
7評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
hello guys hehehe~, please feel free to leave a review😊 I'm also accepting tips and suggestions so please don't hesitate to tell me. anyways, I hope you all enjoy my story. thank you~~😁
a story with a lot of potential, the narrative is sometimes a bit awkward but a story without fault doesn't exist so I can ignore that part and enjoy the story, especially for someone like me who is thirsty for some yuri plots
for now I like your story I love the character and I hope you will be going to releasing one chapter per week I and I love your story I just want to give you my review
from what I remember it was great I hope this revision makes it better but author if it possible can you please post the old version as it's own story for new readers to read
i really like this story please continue to update [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
卷 1
- 1 A unknown place..... -------------------------------------- 2 years ago
- 2 A talk with the goddess... -------------------------------------- 2 years ago
- 3 Seeing the girl..... -------------------------------------- 1 years ago
- 4 The abused girl-------------------------------------- 1 years ago
- 5 Before meeting with the girl..... -------------------------------------- 1 years ago
- 6 A short talk with the girl and the goddess.... -------------------------------------- 1 years ago
- 7 A conversation(1)..... -------------------------------------- 1 years ago
- 8 A Conversation (2)..... -------------------------------------------------- 1 years ago
- 9 A Conversation (3).... -------------------------------------------------- 1 years ago
- 10 A Conversation (4)..... -------------------------------------------------- 1 years ago
It is a beautiful idea with brilliant execution. I love the story and I hope you continue to update, author. Thank you!