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this story grabbed me and kept me entertained from the first chapter. if the author gets published I will be buying their novels.
I love this author’s Star Wars stories. If this reads like another one, then it’s because it is a r
This novel is truly amazing and is this star wars fan and gamers dream wish I could write half as good a novel. thank you oh great and wonderful author for this masterwork of a dream on paper. the characters and settings expand the imagination and are well fleshed out. the old republic is my favorite star wars time period the MC seems to be truly turning into what I would call a Je'daii from my favorite star wars legend novel (next to this one [img=recommend]) into the void. just excellent Laissez les bons temps roulerand may the force be with you.
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please oh please don't drop this book. I don't want to be without this story.
please oh please don't drop this. I don't think I have red anything this week read that is free in a long time. I would even pay for it
I love this novel but my one complaint is that I'm not sure if he dropped it or not because there's been no update in 2 months.
Please continue updating it's really good. ..................................................................................................................
this book has a lot of potential. However, the downside is that it's lack of updates, but that's understandable for this author and writer because of the growing problems of lack of jobs and/or family issues.
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I'm only a fraction of the way into this but I'm hooked hardcore Genuinely a very unique idea, and an interesting take on it as well. It being a prequel of sorts to Swtor leaves a whole lot of paths open, and it has my thoughts on overdrive trying to figure out what might come next This may update once I'm caught up with the remainder of what's up now, but so far, definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes
It's almost been a MONTH~! soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo~
I Need more!!! The story fire!!!🔥 The development fire!!!🔥 The world building fire!!!🔥
It's nice to see a star wars adaptation like this, the character has real personality and actually has to take his time and learn the force. It's also nice to see the star wars side of it based in a very interesting and underused era of star wars. My only small negative from this story is the slight rushness going between some chapters and can be a little confusing at times, but I can understand the author not wanting to get bogged down in the tiny details. All in all I love where the story has taken us so far and I can't wait to read more, thanks author
great story and hope can keep writing it👺👺👺👺👺👺😎😎😎😎✌️✌️✌️😊😊💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯🙈🙉🙉☠️☠️☠️☠️💀💀💀💀💀🎅🎅🎅🎅🤶🤶🤶🤶🤶💑👩❤️👨👨❤️👨👩❤️👩
This story is great especially since it’s set in the old republic haven’t found many of those so this is especially great!
perfect be black about your life and watch this come on you can do it nothing to it we all count on you to see us through it I love this book and everything about it all about it I love it like crack yes like crack I smoke crack for this book now I'm just playing but this is a good book
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This is a very good fanfiction of Star Wars. Not much else to say than I really hope the author does not drop it.
This is a really good story. Im really excited how this story will continue. The grammar is also really good. Keep up the good work Author👍👍👍
I gave a question what did he get out of the new epic hollocron ……………………………"…………………………………………………………………………………………………..——-++=====;;;;;xxx/ b/((;:;(;)//((
I like it a lot ............................................................... ...........................................................
this novel is awesome why there's no recommendation for this novel in the home page. this novel should exposed more so everyone can read this novel. if there's an option for 10 star i Will give it 100/10
This is really awesome! It’s definitely one of the better written fictions on this site and I like the concept behind it. If your looking for something fun give it a try! Keep up the great work author!
well done this has had me on the edge of my seat i can't wait for the next release writing style is well done very little to complain about and story dev just pulls you in
The authors story about Star War was a very well written novel and I thought I couldn’t find a better one. This is it boys and girls. The peak!
*This is my personal view on the development of the story.* It started out so good! it had me instantly recommending the story to a friend, as I loved the whole short Arc of him being a Trooper, but from there I must say it sped up quite a bit, him turning into a padawan right after the first war/scuffle. which, for me, left much to be desired. As I had hoped for him to take the captain/commander role for a while longer as a Trooper. But again, this is just my personal view, the story is good and well fleshed out, so do check it out as it has plenty unique points.
揭示劇透 this story grabbed me and kept me entertained from the first chapter. if the author gets published I will be buying their novels.
I love this author’s Star Wars stories. If this reads like another one, then it’s because it is a r
This novel is truly amazing and is this star wars fan and gamers dream wish I could write half as good a novel. thank you oh great and wonderful author for this masterwork of a dream on paper. the characters and settings expand the imagination and are well fleshed out. the old republic is my favorite star wars time period the MC seems to be truly turning into what I would call a Je'daii from my favorite star wars legend novel (next to this one [img=recommend]) into the void. just excellent Laissez les bons temps roulerand may the force be with you.
揭示劇透 please oh please don't drop this book. I don't want to be without this story.
please oh please don't drop this. I don't think I have red anything this week read that is free in a long time. I would even pay for it
I love this novel but my one complaint is that I'm not sure if he dropped it or not because there's been no update in 2 months.
Please continue updating it's really good. ..................................................................................................................
this book has a lot of potential. However, the downside is that it's lack of updates, but that's understandable for this author and writer because of the growing problems of lack of jobs and/or family issues.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm only a fraction of the way into this but I'm hooked hardcore Genuinely a very unique idea, and an interesting take on it as well. It being a prequel of sorts to Swtor leaves a whole lot of paths open, and it has my thoughts on overdrive trying to figure out what might come next This may update once I'm caught up with the remainder of what's up now, but so far, definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes
It's almost been a MONTH~! soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo~
I Need more!!! The story fire!!!🔥 The development fire!!!🔥 The world building fire!!!🔥
It's nice to see a star wars adaptation like this, the character has real personality and actually has to take his time and learn the force. It's also nice to see the star wars side of it based in a very interesting and underused era of star wars. My only small negative from this story is the slight rushness going between some chapters and can be a little confusing at times, but I can understand the author not wanting to get bogged down in the tiny details. All in all I love where the story has taken us so far and I can't wait to read more, thanks author
great story and hope can keep writing it👺👺👺👺👺👺😎😎😎😎✌️✌️✌️😊😊💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯🙈🙉🙉☠️☠️☠️☠️💀💀💀💀💀🎅🎅🎅🎅🤶🤶🤶🤶🤶💑👩❤️👨👨❤️👨👩❤️👩
This story is great especially since it’s set in the old republic haven’t found many of those so this is especially great!
perfect be black about your life and watch this come on you can do it nothing to it we all count on you to see us through it I love this book and everything about it all about it I love it like crack yes like crack I smoke crack for this book now I'm just playing but this is a good book
揭示劇透 This is a very good fanfiction of Star Wars. Not much else to say than I really hope the author does not drop it.
This is a really good story. Im really excited how this story will continue. The grammar is also really good. Keep up the good work Author👍👍👍
I gave a question what did he get out of the new epic hollocron ……………………………"…………………………………………………………………………………………………..——-++=====;;;;;xxx/ b/((;:;(;)//((
I like it a lot ............................................................... ...........................................................
this novel is awesome why there's no recommendation for this novel in the home page. this novel should exposed more so everyone can read this novel. if there's an option for 10 star i Will give it 100/10
This is really awesome! It’s definitely one of the better written fictions on this site and I like the concept behind it. If your looking for something fun give it a try! Keep up the great work author!
well done this has had me on the edge of my seat i can't wait for the next release writing style is well done very little to complain about and story dev just pulls you in
The authors story about Star War was a very well written novel and I thought I couldn’t find a better one. This is it boys and girls. The peak!
*This is my personal view on the development of the story.* It started out so good! it had me instantly recommending the story to a friend, as I loved the whole short Arc of him being a Trooper, but from there I must say it sped up quite a bit, him turning into a padawan right after the first war/scuffle. which, for me, left much to be desired. As I had hoped for him to take the captain/commander role for a while longer as a Trooper. But again, this is just my personal view, the story is good and well fleshed out, so do check it out as it has plenty unique points.
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