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I love this I love the mineral Island full gold and metal and all the creatures are made out of metal what insane fishing skills what did he Dam fish up
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Muy buena historia y desarrollo espero que la traduzca, porque es muy buena y más porque hay varias historias parecidas y no las terminan de traducir
es una historia buena e interesante espero ver que si la traducen porque veo varias similares pero no las eligen y al final no la traducen y son muy buenas como esta
Es bastante buena la verdad pero no deberías volverlo tan op de golpe sino que sea más lento para que la historia se desarrolle y tenga rivales así sería muy buena la historia además métele ecchi no joda
so far I love it, I hope that it gets picked. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The story is told to you and at blistering speeds. There are a lot of things that are glossed over or outright contradicted from previous chapters. Everything goes out of it's way to accommodate the MC and he has practically no struggles. Now as far as a story goes it's okay...ish. I'd categorize it as brainless reading cause I think that's what it takes to enjoy it. I will say that someone who understands good writing could probably rewrite and adapt this into something actually worth a casual read.
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I like this and while not as reward rich as insinuated the rewards are top notch and suitable to his situation I'm looking forward to future chapters .
How long is this novel gonna be and is it gonna be posted in ladge batches? Translation is really good and novel is actually pretty interesting just dont know jf theirs gonna be more chapters
that novel went from barely readable to downright fuскing embarassing as soon as the author introduced a woman. it's really hard not to cringe
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This novel had potential but got wasted by a world chat and a lot of stupid things.........................................................................
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Very interesting! Writing quality: Very good actually, couldn't find errors, lots of vocabulary and nice sentence structure. Story development: *little spoiler so beware* Mc plays a game then doze off to find himself in that game. There are many like him and some even before. In the game they need to pay a loan and that's all otherwise it's gonna be a full-scale spoiler. character design: Yeah basic like every new novel. No uniqueness but that's ok updating stability: Yeah I think this one there's no need to say anything World background: Interesting premises, I read something rather similar where everyone kinda have an island for themselves but its dropped so I think that author is not even gonna know but yeah the background kinda similar. A lot of potential so I hope it gets picked
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Haven't read it but I just really wanted to say the synopsis is basically just Animal Crossing but basically if the MC was a OP Chinese guy or probably one where there are some cheat codes anyway I'll come back and give it a try if the reviews are positive and critical not just mindless praising but actually criticism on why this is good or bad
a island game where u owe someone a substantial amout of money(bells) in the form of a loan for a house and have to farm,mine,fish ect to repay the loan hmmm author be honest how many hours did u put in
autor-nim are you a fan of The Sims saga?.....................................................................................................
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hmm... such a good novel.. but why!! why!! there's no new chapter!!! 😭😭😭😭 the author.... I demand a 100 bonus chapter..
I love this I love the mineral Island full gold and metal and all the creatures are made out of metal what insane fishing skills what did he Dam fish up
揭示劇透 Muy buena historia y desarrollo espero que la traduzca, porque es muy buena y más porque hay varias historias parecidas y no las terminan de traducir
es una historia buena e interesante espero ver que si la traducen porque veo varias similares pero no las eligen y al final no la traducen y son muy buenas como esta
Es bastante buena la verdad pero no deberías volverlo tan op de golpe sino que sea más lento para que la historia se desarrolle y tenga rivales así sería muy buena la historia además métele ecchi no joda
so far I love it, I hope that it gets picked. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The story is told to you and at blistering speeds. There are a lot of things that are glossed over or outright contradicted from previous chapters. Everything goes out of it's way to accommodate the MC and he has practically no struggles. Now as far as a story goes it's okay...ish. I'd categorize it as brainless reading cause I think that's what it takes to enjoy it. I will say that someone who understands good writing could probably rewrite and adapt this into something actually worth a casual read.
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I like this and while not as reward rich as insinuated the rewards are top notch and suitable to his situation I'm looking forward to future chapters .
How long is this novel gonna be and is it gonna be posted in ladge batches? Translation is really good and novel is actually pretty interesting just dont know jf theirs gonna be more chapters
that novel went from barely readable to downright fuскing embarassing as soon as the author introduced a woman. it's really hard not to cringe
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This novel had potential but got wasted by a world chat and a lot of stupid things.........................................................................
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Very interesting! Writing quality: Very good actually, couldn't find errors, lots of vocabulary and nice sentence structure. Story development: *little spoiler so beware* Mc plays a game then doze off to find himself in that game. There are many like him and some even before. In the game they need to pay a loan and that's all otherwise it's gonna be a full-scale spoiler. character design: Yeah basic like every new novel. No uniqueness but that's ok updating stability: Yeah I think this one there's no need to say anything World background: Interesting premises, I read something rather similar where everyone kinda have an island for themselves but its dropped so I think that author is not even gonna know but yeah the background kinda similar. A lot of potential so I hope it gets picked
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Haven't read it but I just really wanted to say the synopsis is basically just Animal Crossing but basically if the MC was a OP Chinese guy or probably one where there are some cheat codes anyway I'll come back and give it a try if the reviews are positive and critical not just mindless praising but actually criticism on why this is good or bad
a island game where u owe someone a substantial amout of money(bells) in the form of a loan for a house and have to farm,mine,fish ect to repay the loan hmmm author be honest how many hours did u put in
autor-nim are you a fan of The Sims saga?.....................................................................................................
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hmm... such a good novel.. but why!! why!! there's no new chapter!!! 😭😭😭😭 the author.... I demand a 100 bonus chapter..