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yeah I'm shameless putting up a review but this is the first time I've put up a story I tried before off the top of my head and it was everywhere. if u r underage please dont read it has sexual content and bad things that persist in the real world that happens its gxgxgxg story so if you dont like that sort if thing oh well
yes I'm shameful doing his but I also want to get this out there for more ppl to read this story I know its probably has mistakes since it's my first. it's going o have all the races from angels to mermaids even all the fantasy creatures I can think of its r 18 gxg
yeah I'm shameless putting up a review but this is the first time I've put up a story I tried before off the top of my head and it was everywhere. if u r underage please dont read it has sexual content and bad things that persist in the real world that happens its gxgxgxg story so if you dont like that sort if thing oh well
yes I'm shameful doing his but I also want to get this out there for more ppl to read this story I know its probably has mistakes since it's my first. it's going o have all the races from angels to mermaids even all the fantasy creatures I can think of its r 18 gxg