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LV 4 ![Badge]()
Great writing with an interesting plot. Hopefully the Author wouldn't drop this cuz it really is good. Keep up the good work.
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It´s an interesting take. But and it´s a big But your English my man. I just can´t read it. I know some stories are worse, but the small things kill it for me. So maybe once it's edited I will come back. Until then good luck
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Great writing with an interesting plot. Hopefully the Author wouldn't drop this cuz it really is good. Keep up the good work.
It´s an interesting take. But and it´s a big But your English my man. I just can´t read it. I know some stories are worse, but the small things kill it for me. So maybe once it's edited I will come back. Until then good luck