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Imagine a story where you immediately skip 10 years of power up to the point our hero is OP and ready to take revenge. Sure the past is hinted at through plenty of hints and flashbacks, but overall you are thrown right into the Acton. Just like as if you started with book two. This revolutionary writing style is surprisingly satisfying. If a touch confusing for a couple chapters at the beginning
I've read a number of these types of books, and without fail, the author will drop skills, have wildly incorrect levels, and, most annoyingly, forget usable skills that make the fight, arc, and even the whole story completely illogical. This book is an exception. Everything, including the intro, is done in either a unique or fresh way. I am currently 200+ chapters in (so hopefully only 1/10th through 😊) and vinayraj has managed to- a: never write a boring/pointless chapter (no filler) b: keep a fast pace while still fleshing out characters and lore -and as I said in the beginning- c: utilize the system extremely well, as it is an integral part of the story. He does this without forgetting skills, and manages to keep readers up to date on (actually correct) levels while not constantly spamming copy and pasted stats to increase the word count. I strongly recommend this book and am personally really looking forward to the to seeing where this story leads! 👍👍👍
"If you love epic tales that blend science and fantasy, 'E=MC²: The Etherium Equation' is a must-read. Prepare for an unforgettable adventure!"
the story is average, but still it is better than most other system type or cultivation type stories. give it a try if you are bored
Overall the novels pretty mediocre. I would say it be and all right. Read at least if the quality of the writing was better. and I don't mean storywise. I mean, the literal, grammar and spelling of the words and even the way the sentences are structured is all over the place. at times it seems like it's a native English speaker writing the novel and at other times it feels like someone. Put the novel through translation about 3 or 4 times and then went with whatever the final result was with no proofreading. I like the concept that the main character is already in there. Quote unquote overpowered era comma and we don't go through ten years of Building up power. I can't be sure though because I stopped reading so I don't know if his past has ever properly explained. Or if anything really explained when it comes to the past. But Hey, that just adds to the mystery of the character right, well. It would if the writing was good enough that you could understand what the author means.
Well, I can say it's an amazing story. I liked Leos adventure in misterious worlds. I hope you update it regularly and more chapters!!!
It is a total disaster, MC is somehow has some talents, nothing explained. Firs chapters were all over the place and till chapter 27 nothing is cleared. MC is babysitting some stepsister and other stepsiblings pouring resources left and right and all this time not even once we see his status scree. Name of the novel has system in it but system is not even showing it self clearly. I do not recommend this chinese shtshow.
Why do all the protagonists of these kinds of stories become proud and arrogant after gaining a puny amount of strength? Is this subconscious thinking of these authors?
story started with lot of time skip....but had kind of decent chapters. This story had potential but I don't know what happened after some point.... it's like...story is allover the place. Even after skipping 10 or 20 chapter you won't miss the main storyline. Also Leo's character is like Jack of all trade....as a reader I don't feel any connection with the characters.
good read...,........................ .......,.............., ..., .........,..,..........................................................
A big jump of story, you would not even know how MC gain his Talent and what kind of development happened to him 10 years earlier.
Although it have a few problems I like this novel, I will personally prefer that instead of the MC having two devouring abilities the author has simply focused on a better one from the get go and run with it, but other than that, is more or less fine, maybe the other problem is the talent promotion he gets from a price pool that is basically useless for almost everyone other than the MC and a few others like the guy the MC got his ability from. There is something I REALLY REALLY HATE tho and its the MC nonchalance with his brother Ryan lying about his parents deaths to help the villains hide their doing and blame the MC. Sure everyone can understand than he did it to protect the rest of the kids, SURE. Otherwise they may all be dead, but he may have just say he kill them himself and suffer the consequences himself of being the scapegoat instead of blaming the MC and HE DIDN'T. SO while I understand why the MC may not hate his guts, I don't think the MC should be so happy go lucky and even get him benefits. He should have a restrained relationship when he may not blame him but also don't benefit him for after all it was him who plotted the MC. Even his sister gives him more or less the cold shoulder but the MC just take it as nothing? C'mon. Again, I'm not asking to kill him, just to break their relationship and be done with him instead of treating him the same. It's impossible for somebody to not even be disappointed knowing his brother conspired against him.-
Great novel if you like novels with op mc. There is also the revenge factor in the novel and mc is not a kind simp like other novels. He is calculative and anti hero, but he is warm to his friends and family.
The story was spotty and felt like it jumped around a bit too much. the first few chapters are especially bad. I was confused more than interested.
500+ chapters, 2.2million views BUT ony 32 comments, if that isnt red flag then i dont what is. Author deleting so many comments its gonna reach pefect 0 soon.
Why should I invest my time and money, when the author hasn't finished his other novels? Even if I'm bored I wouldn't waste my time, if author finish the novel I may read it, for now not worth it.
I have read a lot of lovel but such plot is unique in its own way.l love the plot as well as the story pace a lot.It is one of my favourite novel of all time.I hope the author will increase the number of chapters
Bro please keep updating I don't like reading hiatus or completed novel so atheist please answer me if you will keep uploading chapters or not.
Absolutely love this novel. One of my favorite system/op ability. Getting so many abilities, merging, upgrading, and evolving them is great. Mc is great too, he is smart/efficient and a good mix of cold and kind at the same time. He's a hero, but doesn't go too far with it to the point of slowing his strength growth. The author does a good job of keeping track of his talents/abilities/resources and making sure mc is using them since there are so many and it gets so complicated. Read to ch470 and can't wait for more chapters.
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I'll be honest I completely forgot about this Novel and to review it and now that I have to reread it again not that , that is a bad thing but form what I remember it was a 5/5
Okay so First of all, i don‘t normaly write reviews on this site. This nove has a really rough start the first 5 Chapters are total garbage and i would recommend the author to rewrite them as fast as possible. I was so close to just drop the book and that would have been a shame! I don‘t know where exactly i changed my mind but once I hit chapter 70 i realised wow this book gets actually good!😳 I am now at chapter 300 and happy to keep Reading 🤗 So just stick around abit longer in this novel you might start to like it.😏
Don't bother with this book if you don't like to repeatedly read the same sentence just differently worded. And The story pause during a fight for the mc to think for 5 pages.....over and over.
Well, i dropped when it hit paywall and well that gave me a reason to stop anyway. became obvious this is yet another fake op mc and whats worse its probably a harem. Since the author is dancing around on his review/comment and mentioned "FLs" as in possibly more than one so yeah may as well save myself the trouble and drop while I can. since I have a bad habit of reading when I should stop.
I’m usually a guy who likes massacres and world enders but it feels like everything is mindless and weightless. He kills one million and devours them one by one in a day which is kinda sus because it says he can digest them in 10 minutes so maths? His unique ns undermined by a more op skill he got from a random. Love the concet but I feel so disattached to the character that I don’t even enjoy the killing
Among the best system novels in my opinion: fast paced, consistent (rarely seen), interesting world building, and an overpowered MC that most readers will like. Only negative in my opinion is the lack of a female lead, but till now it has not adversely affected the story 😁😁
writing seems good but their is basically no story about the MCs life unless you want to read over dozens of chapters for a little hint here and there. the world and characters are cliche and you dont feel any emotion from them. ik they are fictional characters but with good writing you should be able to get a feel for their emotions but you cant. ps: your grammers good and i can tell you had a decent idea but had poor execution. keep up the work and improve also have a good life. i wish you the best of luck.
Great job with the new novel! I think you did a great job :) I have no doubt this will be popular just like your main novel! Please keep up the great work
It's good. Its grinding and collecting abilities traits are similar to "Infinite Mana in Apocalypse". Don't focus too much on the revenge part, as MC doesn't fixate on it too much himself. Read it if you like overpowered protagonists. The world assessment may be the time for the author to fix some minor shortcomings. But overall, it's good.
Really good, usually starting off at the halfway point with the mi having had his system for a bit isn’t good but this book does it extremely well Extremely good read with the perfect amount of power fantasy.
First review from the author:- What this web novel has - Overpowered MC with a cold personality but will be warm to his family and friends. - Mysterious past that makes readers always change their thoughts. - System and Game elements. - Revenge. Mc wants revenge; however, he was not completely crazy in his thirst for revenge - Monsters/ Beasts. The world is filled will all kinds of monsters and beasts. - Romance. No spoilers about the Female lead for now. - Loyal friends/ Beast companions. Overall, I will try to make it as good and as interesting as possible. If you still have any doubts, you can ask below. Thank you.
Imagine a story where you immediately skip 10 years of power up to the point our hero is OP and ready to take revenge. Sure the past is hinted at through plenty of hints and flashbacks, but overall you are thrown right into the Acton. Just like as if you started with book two. This revolutionary writing style is surprisingly satisfying. If a touch confusing for a couple chapters at the beginning
I've read a number of these types of books, and without fail, the author will drop skills, have wildly incorrect levels, and, most annoyingly, forget usable skills that make the fight, arc, and even the whole story completely illogical. This book is an exception. Everything, including the intro, is done in either a unique or fresh way. I am currently 200+ chapters in (so hopefully only 1/10th through 😊) and vinayraj has managed to- a: never write a boring/pointless chapter (no filler) b: keep a fast pace while still fleshing out characters and lore -and as I said in the beginning- c: utilize the system extremely well, as it is an integral part of the story. He does this without forgetting skills, and manages to keep readers up to date on (actually correct) levels while not constantly spamming copy and pasted stats to increase the word count. I strongly recommend this book and am personally really looking forward to the to seeing where this story leads! 👍👍👍
"If you love epic tales that blend science and fantasy, 'E=MC²: The Etherium Equation' is a must-read. Prepare for an unforgettable adventure!"
the story is average, but still it is better than most other system type or cultivation type stories. give it a try if you are bored
Overall the novels pretty mediocre. I would say it be and all right. Read at least if the quality of the writing was better. and I don't mean storywise. I mean, the literal, grammar and spelling of the words and even the way the sentences are structured is all over the place. at times it seems like it's a native English speaker writing the novel and at other times it feels like someone. Put the novel through translation about 3 or 4 times and then went with whatever the final result was with no proofreading. I like the concept that the main character is already in there. Quote unquote overpowered era comma and we don't go through ten years of Building up power. I can't be sure though because I stopped reading so I don't know if his past has ever properly explained. Or if anything really explained when it comes to the past. But Hey, that just adds to the mystery of the character right, well. It would if the writing was good enough that you could understand what the author means.
Well, I can say it's an amazing story. I liked Leos adventure in misterious worlds. I hope you update it regularly and more chapters!!!
It is a total disaster, MC is somehow has some talents, nothing explained. Firs chapters were all over the place and till chapter 27 nothing is cleared. MC is babysitting some stepsister and other stepsiblings pouring resources left and right and all this time not even once we see his status scree. Name of the novel has system in it but system is not even showing it self clearly. I do not recommend this chinese shtshow.
Why do all the protagonists of these kinds of stories become proud and arrogant after gaining a puny amount of strength? Is this subconscious thinking of these authors?
story started with lot of time skip....but had kind of decent chapters. This story had potential but I don't know what happened after some point.... it's like...story is allover the place. Even after skipping 10 or 20 chapter you won't miss the main storyline. Also Leo's character is like Jack of all trade....as a reader I don't feel any connection with the characters.
good read...,........................ .......,.............., ..., .........,..,..........................................................
A big jump of story, you would not even know how MC gain his Talent and what kind of development happened to him 10 years earlier.
Although it have a few problems I like this novel, I will personally prefer that instead of the MC having two devouring abilities the author has simply focused on a better one from the get go and run with it, but other than that, is more or less fine, maybe the other problem is the talent promotion he gets from a price pool that is basically useless for almost everyone other than the MC and a few others like the guy the MC got his ability from. There is something I REALLY REALLY HATE tho and its the MC nonchalance with his brother Ryan lying about his parents deaths to help the villains hide their doing and blame the MC. Sure everyone can understand than he did it to protect the rest of the kids, SURE. Otherwise they may all be dead, but he may have just say he kill them himself and suffer the consequences himself of being the scapegoat instead of blaming the MC and HE DIDN'T. SO while I understand why the MC may not hate his guts, I don't think the MC should be so happy go lucky and even get him benefits. He should have a restrained relationship when he may not blame him but also don't benefit him for after all it was him who plotted the MC. Even his sister gives him more or less the cold shoulder but the MC just take it as nothing? C'mon. Again, I'm not asking to kill him, just to break their relationship and be done with him instead of treating him the same. It's impossible for somebody to not even be disappointed knowing his brother conspired against him.-
Great novel if you like novels with op mc. There is also the revenge factor in the novel and mc is not a kind simp like other novels. He is calculative and anti hero, but he is warm to his friends and family.
The story was spotty and felt like it jumped around a bit too much. the first few chapters are especially bad. I was confused more than interested.
500+ chapters, 2.2million views BUT ony 32 comments, if that isnt red flag then i dont what is. Author deleting so many comments its gonna reach pefect 0 soon.
Why should I invest my time and money, when the author hasn't finished his other novels? Even if I'm bored I wouldn't waste my time, if author finish the novel I may read it, for now not worth it.
I have read a lot of lovel but such plot is unique in its own way.l love the plot as well as the story pace a lot.It is one of my favourite novel of all time.I hope the author will increase the number of chapters
Bro please keep updating I don't like reading hiatus or completed novel so atheist please answer me if you will keep uploading chapters or not.
Absolutely love this novel. One of my favorite system/op ability. Getting so many abilities, merging, upgrading, and evolving them is great. Mc is great too, he is smart/efficient and a good mix of cold and kind at the same time. He's a hero, but doesn't go too far with it to the point of slowing his strength growth. The author does a good job of keeping track of his talents/abilities/resources and making sure mc is using them since there are so many and it gets so complicated. Read to ch470 and can't wait for more chapters.
I like it a lot! 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
I'll be honest I completely forgot about this Novel and to review it and now that I have to reread it again not that , that is a bad thing but form what I remember it was a 5/5
Okay so First of all, i don‘t normaly write reviews on this site. This nove has a really rough start the first 5 Chapters are total garbage and i would recommend the author to rewrite them as fast as possible. I was so close to just drop the book and that would have been a shame! I don‘t know where exactly i changed my mind but once I hit chapter 70 i realised wow this book gets actually good!😳 I am now at chapter 300 and happy to keep Reading 🤗 So just stick around abit longer in this novel you might start to like it.😏
Don't bother with this book if you don't like to repeatedly read the same sentence just differently worded. And The story pause during a fight for the mc to think for 5 pages.....over and over.
Well, i dropped when it hit paywall and well that gave me a reason to stop anyway. became obvious this is yet another fake op mc and whats worse its probably a harem. Since the author is dancing around on his review/comment and mentioned "FLs" as in possibly more than one so yeah may as well save myself the trouble and drop while I can. since I have a bad habit of reading when I should stop.
I’m usually a guy who likes massacres and world enders but it feels like everything is mindless and weightless. He kills one million and devours them one by one in a day which is kinda sus because it says he can digest them in 10 minutes so maths? His unique ns undermined by a more op skill he got from a random. Love the concet but I feel so disattached to the character that I don’t even enjoy the killing
Among the best system novels in my opinion: fast paced, consistent (rarely seen), interesting world building, and an overpowered MC that most readers will like. Only negative in my opinion is the lack of a female lead, but till now it has not adversely affected the story 😁😁
writing seems good but their is basically no story about the MCs life unless you want to read over dozens of chapters for a little hint here and there. the world and characters are cliche and you dont feel any emotion from them. ik they are fictional characters but with good writing you should be able to get a feel for their emotions but you cant. ps: your grammers good and i can tell you had a decent idea but had poor execution. keep up the work and improve also have a good life. i wish you the best of luck.
Great job with the new novel! I think you did a great job :) I have no doubt this will be popular just like your main novel! Please keep up the great work
It's good. Its grinding and collecting abilities traits are similar to "Infinite Mana in Apocalypse". Don't focus too much on the revenge part, as MC doesn't fixate on it too much himself. Read it if you like overpowered protagonists. The world assessment may be the time for the author to fix some minor shortcomings. But overall, it's good.
Really good, usually starting off at the halfway point with the mi having had his system for a bit isn’t good but this book does it extremely well Extremely good read with the perfect amount of power fantasy.
First review from the author:- What this web novel has - Overpowered MC with a cold personality but will be warm to his family and friends. - Mysterious past that makes readers always change their thoughts. - System and Game elements. - Revenge. Mc wants revenge; however, he was not completely crazy in his thirst for revenge - Monsters/ Beasts. The world is filled will all kinds of monsters and beasts. - Romance. No spoilers about the Female lead for now. - Loyal friends/ Beast companions. Overall, I will try to make it as good and as interesting as possible. If you still have any doubts, you can ask below. Thank you.