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Hello author, if you are reading this how is the intern? And secondly when are you going to release the next chaps? And lastly, what happened to your reddit account? (Im the one who keeps messaging you in reddit lol)
Haven't read it at all.I really just chose it based on the title.But the author's enthusiasm convinced me whether it's good or bad.
I hope author gets transmigrated as the MC in novel. It's fked up. Although quite good, it was too much for my mental health. So, yea... I quit.
Incredible history, incredible characters it's all perfect.Just on question.When is the next chapter
Really cool Novel. Sadly author dropped it. I hope if you have some time that you will write a bit more author, I really enjoy your story. But i wish you much success with College.
i miss this novel so bad *sniffle* if you ever wanna come back ill be waiting 4 you with open arms...
Author Will you ever complete the novel and have the mc get his well deserved revenge? if not you should just take down the novel all together there is nothing more frustrating then starting a Great story but knowing you will most likely never have the Opopportunity to finish it leaving the reader unsatisfied. If you don’t plan on complaining the novel I would love to know what you had in mind on how the mc would get his revenge (if you don’t mind)
Good story, I really like the way you buod up characters . [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
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This story has its own uniqueness. And its quite good overall. I sincerely recommend it to anyone that likes yanderes. I promise you that its worth the read.
10/10 would reccomend. For all Yandere consumers this is a novel that you can't miss and if you do you're surely missing out. Thanks for the hard work author.
Really liking this story and the world it is based in. There is some things I am still wondering about the world and things I would like to be cleared up regarding the world, yet this is still very soon into the story and I am excited for more! Some minor spelling or grammar errors yet nothing that is a bother. Keep up the great work!
not my taste overall. this story is just senseless violence wrapped in a realistic take on yandere. I also hate the cliche of "let's just forget everything and reset the character development lol" Probably in future chapters rain will fear Sarah and cause further misunderstanding coz of his amnesia.... How cliche.
i hope you're not gonna dropped your novel 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
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the novel was good, but i thought there's romance even there's dark and betrayal tags, its only 13 chapter so i was hoping to get romance soon ಥ‿ಥ
I liked this novel it's[img=recommend] so fun I expect the novel has a good end[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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From the Author- Things Written here are inhumane, some part of the plot takes inspiration from real-life crime documentaries, It's hot but not suitable for everyone, I DO NOT CARE ABOUT YOUR SANITY AND MENTAL HEALTH!!, And there are also some illustrations of characters that I did myself~. Pls, enjoy.
Hello author, if you are reading this how is the intern? And secondly when are you going to release the next chaps? And lastly, what happened to your reddit account? (Im the one who keeps messaging you in reddit lol)
Haven't read it at all.I really just chose it based on the title.But the author's enthusiasm convinced me whether it's good or bad.
I hope author gets transmigrated as the MC in novel. It's fked up. Although quite good, it was too much for my mental health. So, yea... I quit.
Incredible history, incredible characters it's all perfect.Just on question.When is the next chapter
Really cool Novel. Sadly author dropped it. I hope if you have some time that you will write a bit more author, I really enjoy your story. But i wish you much success with College.
i miss this novel so bad *sniffle* if you ever wanna come back ill be waiting 4 you with open arms...
Author Will you ever complete the novel and have the mc get his well deserved revenge? if not you should just take down the novel all together there is nothing more frustrating then starting a Great story but knowing you will most likely never have the Opopportunity to finish it leaving the reader unsatisfied. If you don’t plan on complaining the novel I would love to know what you had in mind on how the mc would get his revenge (if you don’t mind)
Good story, I really like the way you buod up characters . [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
cool ...............................................................................................................................
This story has its own uniqueness. And its quite good overall. I sincerely recommend it to anyone that likes yanderes. I promise you that its worth the read.
10/10 would reccomend. For all Yandere consumers this is a novel that you can't miss and if you do you're surely missing out. Thanks for the hard work author.
Really liking this story and the world it is based in. There is some things I am still wondering about the world and things I would like to be cleared up regarding the world, yet this is still very soon into the story and I am excited for more! Some minor spelling or grammar errors yet nothing that is a bother. Keep up the great work!
not my taste overall. this story is just senseless violence wrapped in a realistic take on yandere. I also hate the cliche of "let's just forget everything and reset the character development lol" Probably in future chapters rain will fear Sarah and cause further misunderstanding coz of his amnesia.... How cliche.
i hope you're not gonna dropped your novel 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
the novel was good, but i thought there's romance even there's dark and betrayal tags, its only 13 chapter so i was hoping to get romance soon ಥ‿ಥ
I liked this novel it's[img=recommend] so fun I expect the novel has a good end[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like this.................................................................................................................................
MOARRRRRRRRRRRR MORE MORRRREEEEEE MMMMMMMOOOORRRRRRREEE MORRRREEEEEE MMMMMMMOOOORRRRRRREEE MORRRREEEEEE MMMMMMMOOOORRRRRRREEE MORRRREEEEEE MMMMMMMOOOORRRRRRREEE MORRRREEEEEE MMMMMMMOOOORRRRRRREEE MORRRREEEEEE MMMMMMMOOOORRRRRRREEE MORRRREEEEEE MMMMMMMOOOORRRRRRREEE MORRRREEEEEE MMMMMMMOOOORRRRRRREEE MORRRREEEEEE MMMMMMMOOOORRRRRRREEE MORRRREEEEEE
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From the Author- Things Written here are inhumane, some part of the plot takes inspiration from real-life crime documentaries, It's hot but not suitable for everyone, I DO NOT CARE ABOUT YOUR SANITY AND MENTAL HEALTH!!, And there are also some illustrations of characters that I did myself~. Pls, enjoy.